Grammar work

1. While there are clearly many reasons
why school might be disliked by pupils,
there are also many reasons why
schools should have a uniform. Maybe
thought it is time for schools to consider
a uniform which, whist being heard-
wearing and smart, does appeal more
to pupils.
Subordinate clause-
gives writing maturity,

2. OR

3. In my opinion
school uniform
should be given an
update because….