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Elaboration Module
Series of Lessons
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Defining Elaboration
Asking the Questions that Lead to Elaboration
Recognizing Elaboration
Show, Don't Tell
Specific, Concrete Details versus General Language
Elaboration within Sentences
Layering -- Elaboration Using Multiple Sentences
Criteria for Assessment
ASKING QUESTIONS
THAT LEAD TO
ELABORATION
Lesson 2
Elaboration answers questions for
the reader.
What
problems?

Teenagers have problems.

Lesson 2
Elaboration answers questions for
the reader.
• Teenagers have problems. For example,
teens don’t always have enough money to
buy what they want.
Hmmm . . .what do
teenagers want to buy?

Lesson 2
Elaboration answers questions for
the reader.
• Teenagers have problems. For example,
80% of teens don’t always have enough
money to buy CD’s, food for after school,
and the kind of clothes they want,
according to Teen Journal.
Oh…now I understand. Teens want
money for CDs, food, and clothes.

Lesson 2
Elaboration answers questions for
the reader.
Turn to your partner and add even more
elaboration to the previous slide. Discuss
what kind of CDs, food, and clothes teens
may want to buy.
Think about who will read what you write.
What information will help them
understand your idea/argument more
clearly?
Lesson 2
Elaboration answers questions for
the reader.
Perhaps your samples sounded like this.
Teenagers have problems. For
example, 80% of teens don’t always have
enough money to buy CD’s, like the new CD
from Clutch, snack and junk food for after
school, and the kind of clothes they want like
expensive jeans from Abercrombie and
Fitch, according to Teen Journal.
Lesson 2
Elaboration Module
Series of Lessons
•
•
•
•
•
•
•
•

Defining Elaboration
Asking the Questions that Lead to Elaboration
Recognizing Elaboration
Show, Don't Tell
Specific, Concrete Details versus General Language
Elaboration within Sentences
Layering -- Elaboration Using Multiple Sentences
Criteria for Assessment
RECOGNIZING
ELABORATION
Lesson 3
Where is the elaboration?
The main reason I love Halloween is the candy.
Oh my gosh, it’s like heaven—even for big kids. What
I’m trying to say is that my mom lets me collect and
eat all the mini candy bars, fruity treats, and sour
chewies that I can. When I get to heaven, it will have
all those kinds of candy. Last year, I was running out
the door at 5:30, pillowcase in hand, hitting the
houses in my neighborhood with my friend Steven.
You might not believe it, but I got 237 individual
servings of candy, and it was my highest record yet. I
figure at 20 pieces a day it will take me 12 days to
polish it all off. There’s nothing better than candy if
you’re a kid.
Lesson 3
Where is the elaboration?
• What I’m trying to say is that my mom lets
me collect and eat all the mini candy
bars, fruity treats, and sour chewies that I
can.
– DEFINE
The writer is attempting to
define how getting candy
on Halloween is like heaven.
Lesson 3
Where is the elaboration?
• Last year, I was running out the door at
5:30, pillowcase in hand, hitting the
houses in my neighborhood with my friend
Steven.
- ANECDOTE
The writer is including a bit of a narrative
story with personal experience to make his
point about how he was going
to get candy.
Lesson 3
Where is the elaboration?
• You might not believe it but I got 237
individual servings of candy, and it was my
highest record yet. I figure at 20 pieces a day
it will take me 12 days to polish it all off.
– STATISTICS
– The writer is making up or remembering
statistics that make his point about getting
a large amount of candy.
Lesson 3
Recognizing Elaboration
• If you can find elaboration strategies in
someone else’s writing, you become more
aware of them.
• If you are more aware of them, you will
become more thoughtful about threading it
into your writing to. . .
TELL THE READER MORE.
Lesson 3

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Asking the questions that lead to and recognizing elaboration

  • 1. Elaboration Module Series of Lessons • • • • • • • • Defining Elaboration Asking the Questions that Lead to Elaboration Recognizing Elaboration Show, Don't Tell Specific, Concrete Details versus General Language Elaboration within Sentences Layering -- Elaboration Using Multiple Sentences Criteria for Assessment
  • 2. ASKING QUESTIONS THAT LEAD TO ELABORATION Lesson 2
  • 3. Elaboration answers questions for the reader. What problems? Teenagers have problems. Lesson 2
  • 4. Elaboration answers questions for the reader. • Teenagers have problems. For example, teens don’t always have enough money to buy what they want. Hmmm . . .what do teenagers want to buy? Lesson 2
  • 5. Elaboration answers questions for the reader. • Teenagers have problems. For example, 80% of teens don’t always have enough money to buy CD’s, food for after school, and the kind of clothes they want, according to Teen Journal. Oh…now I understand. Teens want money for CDs, food, and clothes. Lesson 2
  • 6. Elaboration answers questions for the reader. Turn to your partner and add even more elaboration to the previous slide. Discuss what kind of CDs, food, and clothes teens may want to buy. Think about who will read what you write. What information will help them understand your idea/argument more clearly? Lesson 2
  • 7. Elaboration answers questions for the reader. Perhaps your samples sounded like this. Teenagers have problems. For example, 80% of teens don’t always have enough money to buy CD’s, like the new CD from Clutch, snack and junk food for after school, and the kind of clothes they want like expensive jeans from Abercrombie and Fitch, according to Teen Journal. Lesson 2
  • 8. Elaboration Module Series of Lessons • • • • • • • • Defining Elaboration Asking the Questions that Lead to Elaboration Recognizing Elaboration Show, Don't Tell Specific, Concrete Details versus General Language Elaboration within Sentences Layering -- Elaboration Using Multiple Sentences Criteria for Assessment
  • 10. Where is the elaboration? The main reason I love Halloween is the candy. Oh my gosh, it’s like heaven—even for big kids. What I’m trying to say is that my mom lets me collect and eat all the mini candy bars, fruity treats, and sour chewies that I can. When I get to heaven, it will have all those kinds of candy. Last year, I was running out the door at 5:30, pillowcase in hand, hitting the houses in my neighborhood with my friend Steven. You might not believe it, but I got 237 individual servings of candy, and it was my highest record yet. I figure at 20 pieces a day it will take me 12 days to polish it all off. There’s nothing better than candy if you’re a kid. Lesson 3
  • 11. Where is the elaboration? • What I’m trying to say is that my mom lets me collect and eat all the mini candy bars, fruity treats, and sour chewies that I can. – DEFINE The writer is attempting to define how getting candy on Halloween is like heaven. Lesson 3
  • 12. Where is the elaboration? • Last year, I was running out the door at 5:30, pillowcase in hand, hitting the houses in my neighborhood with my friend Steven. - ANECDOTE The writer is including a bit of a narrative story with personal experience to make his point about how he was going to get candy. Lesson 3
  • 13. Where is the elaboration? • You might not believe it but I got 237 individual servings of candy, and it was my highest record yet. I figure at 20 pieces a day it will take me 12 days to polish it all off. – STATISTICS – The writer is making up or remembering statistics that make his point about getting a large amount of candy. Lesson 3
  • 14. Recognizing Elaboration • If you can find elaboration strategies in someone else’s writing, you become more aware of them. • If you are more aware of them, you will become more thoughtful about threading it into your writing to. . . TELL THE READER MORE. Lesson 3