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1.The first thought of the contents of the article is how to use car navigation system. Car navigation
capabilities depend on a global positioning system, known as GPS, which uses a network of satellites
with radio transmitters. For a car navigation system to work, there have to be at least four GPS
satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal. Once the car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a
map program to find its way to a new location.

2.I think that headings was obviously told.
Finding the first link is "How to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System. "
The content is a usage of the car navigation system, and I think that headings is correct.
I think the second link to have been told.
Finding the second link is How Do Car Navigation Systems Work?
The subheadings becomes Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location, and Planning a
Trip, too and I think it is roughly correct.

3.The usage of the car navigation system of each step is written in the first link.
The step divides into nine and is very comprehensible.
Because the engine is applied, it writes to the place in which it attaches to the destination in detail.
The principle of the car navigation system is written in the second link.
It attaches to Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location, and Planning a Trip and it is
written.

4.There were two confused things.
The first was confused for the left advertisement.
I gain weight because of the picture of a strange woman, besides, and get thinner slowly.
I thought it to be an irrelevant advertisement in the diet-related text, but was confused in attracting
attention very much.
The second is a sentence.
There was a thing that was not able sometimes to be understood because the texts were English all
sentences.
I was confused very much.

5.The first link divides minutely in each step and is very kind.
Because it is few sentences, and a lot of steps, it is legible.
It drinks secondarily and you may be attached to the link of a comprehensible finding.
I can easily understand where to be read because it has divided into the finding thing.
Moreover, either link is not long such a sentence.
This is legible for the reader, and is very welcome.

6.Nothing

7.It will not be able to propose to improve the article to me.
There is no place that should be improved in this sentence excluding only one.
It is that strange advertisement.
I think that it is difficult to erase it because I think it is necessary to manage the site.
However, if the advertisement was put, I wanted you to make it to the one related to the article or the
too unremarkable one.

8.At first I take in an image if the group of us writes a similar article.
I get possible to explain it more intelligibly than in there being an image.
I add a color to an headings and an important sentence next.
A part emphasized by it becomes clear.
Finally I replace an advertisement with a GPS-related thing.
When a reader demanded further knowledge by doing so it, it is useful.
The above-mentioned three are changed.

9.I am sorry, but was not able to hear it with my ability.

10.I am sorry, but was not able to hear it with my ability.

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  • 1. 1.The first thought of the contents of the article is how to use car navigation system. Car navigation capabilities depend on a global positioning system, known as GPS, which uses a network of satellites with radio transmitters. For a car navigation system to work, there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal. Once the car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to find its way to a new location. 2.I think that headings was obviously told. Finding the first link is "How to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System. " The content is a usage of the car navigation system, and I think that headings is correct. I think the second link to have been told. Finding the second link is How Do Car Navigation Systems Work? The subheadings becomes Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location, and Planning a Trip, too and I think it is roughly correct. 3.The usage of the car navigation system of each step is written in the first link. The step divides into nine and is very comprehensible. Because the engine is applied, it writes to the place in which it attaches to the destination in detail. The principle of the car navigation system is written in the second link. It attaches to Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location, and Planning a Trip and it is written. 4.There were two confused things. The first was confused for the left advertisement. I gain weight because of the picture of a strange woman, besides, and get thinner slowly. I thought it to be an irrelevant advertisement in the diet-related text, but was confused in attracting attention very much. The second is a sentence. There was a thing that was not able sometimes to be understood because the texts were English all sentences. I was confused very much. 5.The first link divides minutely in each step and is very kind. Because it is few sentences, and a lot of steps, it is legible. It drinks secondarily and you may be attached to the link of a comprehensible finding. I can easily understand where to be read because it has divided into the finding thing. Moreover, either link is not long such a sentence. This is legible for the reader, and is very welcome. 6.Nothing 7.It will not be able to propose to improve the article to me. There is no place that should be improved in this sentence excluding only one. It is that strange advertisement. I think that it is difficult to erase it because I think it is necessary to manage the site. However, if the advertisement was put, I wanted you to make it to the one related to the article or the too unremarkable one. 8.At first I take in an image if the group of us writes a similar article. I get possible to explain it more intelligibly than in there being an image. I add a color to an headings and an important sentence next. A part emphasized by it becomes clear.
  • 2. Finally I replace an advertisement with a GPS-related thing. When a reader demanded further knowledge by doing so it, it is useful. The above-mentioned three are changed. 9.I am sorry, but was not able to hear it with my ability. 10.I am sorry, but was not able to hear it with my ability.