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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

The primary idea of the content in the articles is how to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation
System. This thing that it is one type of GPS navigation system involves a monitor that displays a
map; the other kind uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you are on. These
instructions are for an Alpine map-based system. Another pages is the page that is written same
thing.

2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

Yes, I do. Because the individual sections and headings in this document is written about step of
select a known destination. The number of step is 13 from 1 to 9 and from 1 to 4. Another page is
written about Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location and Planning a Trip. For
exsample, Car Navigation Basics ; Car navigation capabilities depend on a global positioning
system, known as GPS, which uses a network of satellites with radio transmitters. For a car
navigation system to work, there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up
a signal. Once the car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to find its way to a
new location.

3. What details are included in the articles?

The individual sections and headings in this document is written about step of select a known
destination. The number of step is 13 from 1 to 9 and from 1 to 4. Another page is written about Car
Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location and Planning a Trip. For exsample, Car
Navigation Basics ; Car navigation capabilities depend on a global positioning system, known as
GPS, which uses a network of satellites with radio transmitters. For a car navigation system to
work, there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal. Once the
car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to find its way to a new location.

4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

No, there was not. I think that this document is no probrem. Especially, none. I think there was
anything that was confusing. This documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell
phones in cars. And the reason is steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for
these reasons. This reasons is the evidence that there was not anything that was confusing.

5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

I think that the good point is thing that this document divided the reason and the content. The reason
is thing that the reading people is easy understand the writting contet in the document. And the
reading people is easy understand the writting reason in the document. These good points is thing
that the document is good idea. Because I think that the document is normal and not interesting but
the thing that the document is good document is not normal and interesting.

6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

No, there are not. Especially, none. I think there are any errors that need to be corrected. This
documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell phones in cars. And the reason is
steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for these reasons. And I think that if I
add some thing at the document, the document increase the Mended location. I unskilled the thing
that I add some thing at the document.

7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?
No, I can not. Especially, none. I think there are any errors that need to be corrected. This
documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell phones in cars. And the reason is
steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for these reasons. Because no problem,
I am not necessary to improve the document. These good points is thing that the document is good
idea. Because I think that the document is normal and not interesting but the thing that the
document is good document is not normal and interesting.

8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

The first basic differences between our group and this author is composition of the document. For
example, this author divides the reasons and the contents. The second basic differences between our
group and this author is thing that plainly of sentences. The last basic differences between our group
and this author is thing that easiness of sentences to see. And I think that if I add some thing at the
document, the document increase the Mended location. I unskilled the thing that I add some thing at
the document.

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Peer review exercise # 5

  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? The primary idea of the content in the articles is how to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System. This thing that it is one type of GPS navigation system involves a monitor that displays a map; the other kind uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you are on. These instructions are for an Alpine map-based system. Another pages is the page that is written same thing. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do. Because the individual sections and headings in this document is written about step of select a known destination. The number of step is 13 from 1 to 9 and from 1 to 4. Another page is written about Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location and Planning a Trip. For exsample, Car Navigation Basics ; Car navigation capabilities depend on a global positioning system, known as GPS, which uses a network of satellites with radio transmitters. For a car navigation system to work, there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal. Once the car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to find its way to a new location. 3. What details are included in the articles? The individual sections and headings in this document is written about step of select a known destination. The number of step is 13 from 1 to 9 and from 1 to 4. Another page is written about Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location and Planning a Trip. For exsample, Car Navigation Basics ; Car navigation capabilities depend on a global positioning system, known as GPS, which uses a network of satellites with radio transmitters. For a car navigation system to work, there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal. Once the car's GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to find its way to a new location. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? No, there was not. I think that this document is no probrem. Especially, none. I think there was anything that was confusing. This documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell phones in cars. And the reason is steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for these reasons. This reasons is the evidence that there was not anything that was confusing. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think that the good point is thing that this document divided the reason and the content. The reason is thing that the reading people is easy understand the writting contet in the document. And the reading people is easy understand the writting reason in the document. These good points is thing that the document is good idea. Because I think that the document is normal and not interesting but the thing that the document is good document is not normal and interesting. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No, there are not. Especially, none. I think there are any errors that need to be corrected. This documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell phones in cars. And the reason is steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for these reasons. And I think that if I add some thing at the document, the document increase the Mended location. I unskilled the thing that I add some thing at the document. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?
  • 2. No, I can not. Especially, none. I think there are any errors that need to be corrected. This documents written consistently danger about how to use of cell phones in cars. And the reason is steady. I think this document is not sense of incompatibility for these reasons. Because no problem, I am not necessary to improve the document. These good points is thing that the document is good idea. Because I think that the document is normal and not interesting but the thing that the document is good document is not normal and interesting. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). The first basic differences between our group and this author is composition of the document. For example, this author divides the reasons and the contents. The second basic differences between our group and this author is thing that plainly of sentences. The last basic differences between our group and this author is thing that easiness of sentences to see. And I think that if I add some thing at the document, the document increase the Mended location. I unskilled the thing that I add some thing at the document.