7 Cs OF BUSINESS WRITING
•   COMPLETENESS
•   CONCISENESS
•   CONSIDERATION
•   CLARITY
•   CONCRETENESS
•   COURTESY
•   CORRECTNESS
COMPLETENESS
• Answer all questions that are asked
• Give something extra when desirable
• Check for five Ws & one H

• Who What When Where Why
• and How
Exercise-1
• The owner of a mutual fund stock wrote to
  the investment department of your bank
  ,that he wanted to sell his shares. He
  asked,” just how does your bank want me to
  authorize this sale?”

• How would you reply to this query keeping
  the five Ws and one H guideline in mind?
Exercise-2
∀•     You are the president of an industry
 association and have received the following
 inquiry from an out of town member, “I think I
 would like to attend my first meeting of the
 association, even though I am not acquainted with
 your city. Will you please tell me where the next
 meeting is being held?

• How would you reply to this letter keeping in
  mind Completeness of the message?
CONCISENESS
1. Eliminate wordy expressions
2. Include only relevant statements
  –     be focussed,
  –     prune & avoid long explanations
  –     avoid gushing politemess
3. Avoid unnecessary repetitions
  –       use short forms the second time
  –       use pronouns
Exercise -3
• Find single word substitutes for the phrases
•    Along the same lines
•    At this time
•    Consensus of opinion
•   Date of policy
•   Due to the fact that
•   During the time of the day
•   During the year of
•   Few and far between
•   For a price of
•   For the reason of that
•   From the point of view of
•   Have need of
•   In accordance with your request
•    In due course
•    Allow me to say
•    In reply , I wish to say
•    Please be advised
•     Please find attached
•
Exercise -4
• Rewrite the following by omitting articles, trite
  expressions, rambling sentences and
  repetitions:

• At this time I am writing to you to enclose the post
  paid appointment card for the purpose of
  arranging a convenient time when we might get-
  together for a personal interview.
Exercise –4contd.

• We hereby wish to let you know that we
  fully appreciate the confidence you have
  reposed in us.
Exercise – 4 contd
• Will you ship us sometime, any time during the
  month of October , or even November if you are
  rushed , for November will suit us just as well , in
  fact a little bit better , 300 of the regular three and
  a half inch blue arm bands with white sewn letter
  in the middle .
CONSIDERATION
• Focus on YOU instead of I & WE

• Show reader benefit & interest

• Emphasize positive& pleasant

• Apply integrity & ethics
Ex.5-Write with a ‘you ‘ attitude , it
shows consideration

• I want to send my congratulations for ---

• We will ship soon the goods your May 4
  order----

• We pay eight percent interest on -----
Ex.5-Write with a ‘you ‘ attitude , it
       shows consideration ( contd)
• May I take this opportunity to express my thanks
  for the account you recently opened with our
  store. We are pleased to furnish a wide variety of
  products for the home of the individual customer.
  We want you to take full advantage of the store
  services, for we have the largest store in the city.
  Also we make deliveries for our customer free of
  charge with in a 30 miles radius of our store.We
  welcome you to Ebony. If we can be of additional
  help please let us know .
Ex 6-Avoid negative – unpleasant words to
show consideration
   It is impossible to open an account for you today.

We don’t refund if the returned item is soiled and
 unusable.

 When you travel on company expense, you will not
 receive approval for first class fare.

T To avoid further delay and inconvenience , we are
 sending this report by express mail.
Ex –7:Show reader benefit or interest in the
reader ; in the letter from an insurance company
                 to policy holders .
• Because we have not written to you in
  sometime , please help us bring our record
  by filling and returning the other half of the
  card .
CONCRETENESS
• Use specific facts and figures

• Put action into verbs

• Choose vivid image building words by
  comparison & figurative language (?)

• Use more adjectives and adverbs
Ex:8- Rewrite the following in concrete
 form as the sentences are too general and
                  vague.

• This computer reproduces campaign letters
  fast

• Our product has won several prizes.

• These brakes stop a car within a short
  distance.
Ex:9-Put action into the words by using
      active instead of passive voice.

• Tests were made by us

• A full report will be sent to you by the supervisor.

• The contract had a requirement ….

• Mr. Singh will give consideration to the report ….
Ex : 10-Use vivid image building words –
adjectives and adverts , and use less of
abstract nouns

• The camera has a system that gives good
  pictures.
CLARITY
• Choose short , familiar & conversational
  words
• Construct effective sentences and
  paragraphs by unity of idea and sequencing
• Achieve appropriate readability by using
  formal & informal language
• Include examples, illustrations & visual aids
Ex : 11-Use simple words

Circa(L)
Subsequent
Promulgate
Inadvertence
e.g..(L)
 Domicile
Remuneration
Ex: 12-Choose a conversational style

• After perusal of pertinent data the conclusion is that a
  lucrative market exists for the subject property .

• Easement for egress and ingress

•    A letter from the quality bureau to a plumber said – “The
    efficacy of hydrochloric acid is indisputable, but the
    corrosive residue is incompatible with metallic
    permanence “.
• Headings:8-10 words

• Sentence length:15-20 words

• Paragraphs:40-70 words

Soft words vs hard words
COURTESY
• Be sincere , tactful, thoughtful and
  appreciative

• Omit expressions that hurt , irritate, or
  insult

• Grant apologies graciously
Ex : 13-Show courtesy by avoiding
tactless & blunt language.

• Your letter is not clear at all:

  Obviously, if you would read your policy
  carefully you will be able to answer these
  questions yourself.

 Apparently you already forgotten what I
 wrote you two weeks ago.
Ex : 14-Use gender friendly substitutes


•   Mankind
•   The best man for the job
•   Manmade
•   Manpower
•   Businessman
•   Sales man
•   Chairman
Ex 14 –Contd.
• You guys should all be concerned about the
  issue.

• Each manger has an assigned place – he
  should park his car….

• Each customer will have change noted on
  his bill
Ex: 15-SEMANTIC FACTORS IN
WRITING

•   Meeting room----
•   Dog-----
•   Gay-----
•   Women’s libber-----
•   Fair wages----
•   Cheap----
•   Speed---
•   Scholar---
•   Fat check---
•   Worm---
•
CORRECTNESS

•   Use the right level of language
•   Check accuracy of facts, figures and words
•   Maintain acceptable writing mechanics
•   Choose non discriminatory language
•   Use parallel language

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  • 1.
    7 Cs OFBUSINESS WRITING • COMPLETENESS • CONCISENESS • CONSIDERATION • CLARITY • CONCRETENESS • COURTESY • CORRECTNESS
  • 2.
    COMPLETENESS • Answer allquestions that are asked • Give something extra when desirable • Check for five Ws & one H • Who What When Where Why • and How
  • 3.
    Exercise-1 • The ownerof a mutual fund stock wrote to the investment department of your bank ,that he wanted to sell his shares. He asked,” just how does your bank want me to authorize this sale?” • How would you reply to this query keeping the five Ws and one H guideline in mind?
  • 4.
    Exercise-2 ∀• You are the president of an industry association and have received the following inquiry from an out of town member, “I think I would like to attend my first meeting of the association, even though I am not acquainted with your city. Will you please tell me where the next meeting is being held? • How would you reply to this letter keeping in mind Completeness of the message?
  • 5.
    CONCISENESS 1. Eliminate wordyexpressions 2. Include only relevant statements – be focussed, – prune & avoid long explanations – avoid gushing politemess 3. Avoid unnecessary repetitions – use short forms the second time – use pronouns
  • 6.
    Exercise -3 • Findsingle word substitutes for the phrases
  • 7.
    Along the same lines • At this time • Consensus of opinion • Date of policy • Due to the fact that • During the time of the day • During the year of • Few and far between • For a price of
  • 8.
    For the reason of that • From the point of view of • Have need of • In accordance with your request • In due course • Allow me to say • In reply , I wish to say • Please be advised • Please find attached •
  • 9.
    Exercise -4 • Rewritethe following by omitting articles, trite expressions, rambling sentences and repetitions: • At this time I am writing to you to enclose the post paid appointment card for the purpose of arranging a convenient time when we might get- together for a personal interview.
  • 10.
    Exercise –4contd. • Wehereby wish to let you know that we fully appreciate the confidence you have reposed in us.
  • 11.
    Exercise – 4contd • Will you ship us sometime, any time during the month of October , or even November if you are rushed , for November will suit us just as well , in fact a little bit better , 300 of the regular three and a half inch blue arm bands with white sewn letter in the middle .
  • 12.
    CONSIDERATION • Focus onYOU instead of I & WE • Show reader benefit & interest • Emphasize positive& pleasant • Apply integrity & ethics
  • 13.
    Ex.5-Write with a‘you ‘ attitude , it shows consideration • I want to send my congratulations for --- • We will ship soon the goods your May 4 order---- • We pay eight percent interest on -----
  • 14.
    Ex.5-Write with a‘you ‘ attitude , it shows consideration ( contd) • May I take this opportunity to express my thanks for the account you recently opened with our store. We are pleased to furnish a wide variety of products for the home of the individual customer. We want you to take full advantage of the store services, for we have the largest store in the city. Also we make deliveries for our customer free of charge with in a 30 miles radius of our store.We welcome you to Ebony. If we can be of additional help please let us know .
  • 15.
    Ex 6-Avoid negative– unpleasant words to show consideration It is impossible to open an account for you today. We don’t refund if the returned item is soiled and unusable. When you travel on company expense, you will not receive approval for first class fare. T To avoid further delay and inconvenience , we are sending this report by express mail.
  • 16.
    Ex –7:Show readerbenefit or interest in the reader ; in the letter from an insurance company to policy holders . • Because we have not written to you in sometime , please help us bring our record by filling and returning the other half of the card .
  • 17.
    CONCRETENESS • Use specificfacts and figures • Put action into verbs • Choose vivid image building words by comparison & figurative language (?) • Use more adjectives and adverbs
  • 18.
    Ex:8- Rewrite thefollowing in concrete form as the sentences are too general and vague. • This computer reproduces campaign letters fast • Our product has won several prizes. • These brakes stop a car within a short distance.
  • 19.
    Ex:9-Put action intothe words by using active instead of passive voice. • Tests were made by us • A full report will be sent to you by the supervisor. • The contract had a requirement …. • Mr. Singh will give consideration to the report ….
  • 20.
    Ex : 10-Usevivid image building words – adjectives and adverts , and use less of abstract nouns • The camera has a system that gives good pictures.
  • 21.
    CLARITY • Choose short, familiar & conversational words • Construct effective sentences and paragraphs by unity of idea and sequencing • Achieve appropriate readability by using formal & informal language • Include examples, illustrations & visual aids
  • 22.
    Ex : 11-Usesimple words Circa(L) Subsequent Promulgate Inadvertence e.g..(L) Domicile Remuneration
  • 23.
    Ex: 12-Choose aconversational style • After perusal of pertinent data the conclusion is that a lucrative market exists for the subject property . • Easement for egress and ingress • A letter from the quality bureau to a plumber said – “The efficacy of hydrochloric acid is indisputable, but the corrosive residue is incompatible with metallic permanence “.
  • 24.
    • Headings:8-10 words •Sentence length:15-20 words • Paragraphs:40-70 words Soft words vs hard words
  • 25.
    COURTESY • Be sincere, tactful, thoughtful and appreciative • Omit expressions that hurt , irritate, or insult • Grant apologies graciously
  • 26.
    Ex : 13-Showcourtesy by avoiding tactless & blunt language. • Your letter is not clear at all: Obviously, if you would read your policy carefully you will be able to answer these questions yourself. Apparently you already forgotten what I wrote you two weeks ago.
  • 27.
    Ex : 14-Usegender friendly substitutes • Mankind • The best man for the job • Manmade • Manpower • Businessman • Sales man • Chairman
  • 28.
    Ex 14 –Contd. •You guys should all be concerned about the issue. • Each manger has an assigned place – he should park his car…. • Each customer will have change noted on his bill
  • 29.
    Ex: 15-SEMANTIC FACTORSIN WRITING • Meeting room---- • Dog----- • Gay----- • Women’s libber----- • Fair wages---- • Cheap---- • Speed--- • Scholar--- • Fat check--- • Worm--- •
  • 30.
    CORRECTNESS • Use the right level of language • Check accuracy of facts, figures and words • Maintain acceptable writing mechanics • Choose non discriminatory language • Use parallel language