This document outlines a 2D animation project created in Flash that tells a story involving aliens and rockets for 9-10 year old boys. It discusses the initial proposal, the technical production process using Photoshop, Flash and Final Cut Pro, and includes feedback received on early drafts suggesting changes like smoothing animation, adding more scenes and joining the soundtrack properly. The final product incorporated this feedback, adding and changing the soundtrack, removing jump cuts, and including extra scenes, receiving positive feedback on the improved storytelling and technical execution.

1. 2D AnimationByMeghan Masterman

2. My Idea

3. Where did it come from

4. ProposalChild FriendlyAround a minute longUse flash to create9-10 year old boys12-15 fpsSimple cartoon animation

5. Technically producedPhotoshopFlashFinal Cut Pro

6. SoundtrackCountdown from 5ExplosionRocket take offBubblesDavid Bowie - StarmanAlien talking

7. First draft

8. FeedbackTake out the jump cutsGoodPut a soundtrack in the backgroundMake parts smootherJoin the music up properly at the beginningChange the aliens voice make it more realisticMake the story longerAdd more scenes

9. Changes madeAdded and changed the soundtrackTook out jump cutsMade smootherJoined the soundtrack to the beginning properlyAdded a few more scenes

10. Final product

11. FeedbackGoodLike the soundtrackLike the sound effects e.g. BubblesNew scene added is better adds to contextMore shot types make it more interestingGood end productExtra scene added is goodMovement of the space men could be more animatedOne jump cut could be taken out