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The document discusses how writers decide to revise and how teachers can help students learn to revise. Writers revise when they believe a piece has value but can be improved. Teachers should provide positive feedback to motivate revision and give distance from the work to help writers see potential. They also need to provide techniques for revision, like adding details or changing events, since simply telling students to revise is not enough. The overall goal is for writers to understand revision can improve good writing.

#13 Revision How do writers decide to what and how to revise? How do we help students learn to revise?

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