This document summarizes an informal observation of Hannah Ticoras' lesson conducted on December 17, 2018. The observer, Meghan Casey, provided feedback on various elements of Hannah's teaching practice. While the lesson design incorporated student choice and engaged multiple writing genres, the directions were convoluted and students struggled to understand the activity. Overall, the feedback aimed to support Hannah's growth by recommending ways to simplify complex lessons and provide clearer directions while maintaining high expectations.