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Feedback from my pitch


The feedback: in our pitch we mentioned just
filming the whole video outside but our class
suggested that it would mean our video would
lack variety of shots. And considering our song is
quite long and upbeat important we had various
shots so to film inside shots to against a white
wall.
Rough cut feedback
Good points:
- Enjoyed the editing
- Edits to the beat
- Use of colour corrector
- Variety of shots, the four shots in one frame

Things to improve:
- Some of lip synch was off especially at the start
- The brick wall in the background of the outside shots
  towards the end didn’t fit with the rest of the video
Digipak Feedback
• Digipak was very different to typical female
  artist but suited our genre(synth pop). The
  scirbbles and artwork matched the video and
  artists personality. Really liked the images we
  used of the artist.
Final Video Feedback

• Lip synch was better than before but slightly
  slow at the start
• Good use of effects such as colour corrector,
  reverse shots, increasing the speed.
• Lyrics matched the visuals in ‘higher forces’
  part.
• The spinning effect and artist dancing during
  the instrumentals.

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Pitch Feedback & Video Improvements

  • 2. Feedback from my pitch The feedback: in our pitch we mentioned just filming the whole video outside but our class suggested that it would mean our video would lack variety of shots. And considering our song is quite long and upbeat important we had various shots so to film inside shots to against a white wall.
  • 3. Rough cut feedback Good points: - Enjoyed the editing - Edits to the beat - Use of colour corrector - Variety of shots, the four shots in one frame Things to improve: - Some of lip synch was off especially at the start - The brick wall in the background of the outside shots towards the end didn’t fit with the rest of the video
  • 4. Digipak Feedback • Digipak was very different to typical female artist but suited our genre(synth pop). The scirbbles and artwork matched the video and artists personality. Really liked the images we used of the artist.
  • 5. Final Video Feedback • Lip synch was better than before but slightly slow at the start • Good use of effects such as colour corrector, reverse shots, increasing the speed. • Lyrics matched the visuals in ‘higher forces’ part. • The spinning effect and artist dancing during the instrumentals.