1. Final Radio Script - Ancillary Product - Black Rose
DOMINATING SOUNDS: AUDIO EXTRACTS, VOICEOVERS, INSTRUMENTAL, DIEGETIC SOUND EFFECTS.
VOICE OVER: A new story of an old tale
Music instrumental layering voiceover
Rosey: I feel like a black rose
Bullies laughing (gradually builds up & grows louder)
Change of Musical instrument (beats)
Separation sound effect
Shantelle: You‟re so ugly, you don‟t belong here, and you don‟t belong anywhere
Frankie: You‟re worthless; you‟re stupid, who are you? Get a life!
Regina: You‟re no one, LOOK AT YOU! (Echoes)
Loud sound effect
VOICE OVER: A modern retelling of the ugly duckling
Instrumental plays under, soothing yet isolating tone
Rosey: Something happened that night
HEARTBEAT SOUND EFFECT UNDERNEATH
Instrumental continues
Rosey: Something happened that night, I don‟t know what, but I had transformed!
Loud noise whilst instrumental changes
Rosey: THEY WERE WRONG!
Sinister music
Rosey: I was beautiful
Positive instrumental starts
VOICEOVER: A touching story of one girl‟s journey to find a voice amongst a dozen
Instrumental
VOICEOVER: Platinum Power presents on the 1st of the 1st 2013, BLACK ROSE
Instrumental stops.
Silence
VOICEOVER: Things are never as they seem...
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2. INITIAL IDEA FOR SCRIPT
Whisper: intro - "Platinum power present" (little girl giggles) - Creates a sinister tone
Instrumental - „Love & Angels‟ plays throughout quietly in the background (sets isolated
atmosphere)
Rosey's narration - (Recorded already)
Wings flapping
Voices laughing (slow motion)
● Bully 1 (distorted) - You're worthless you're stupid... (Recorded already)
Voices laughing (slow motion)
● Rosey's narration 2 - “They‟ll stop one day, or so I tell myself” (Recorded already)
Swing noise (diegetic)
Sound effect - Wind howling (diegetic)
Voice 1 - shocked - "oh my god, is that Rosey?"
Instrumental grows louder (climax)
[[SILENCE]]
Heartbeat, 1, 2 ,3 (non diegetic)
● Rosey's last narration - But, after everything, it wasnt me who was ugly... it was you.
Ending echoes to have a lasting effect on the audience
Whisper: ends - “Black Rose, a modern retelling of 'The Ugly Duckling' 1.1.13”
Sinister giggle - relates to the start of the trailer which also starts with giggle, consistent and
profound