1. Feedback on the Rough Cut
Our rough cut, some of the shots are a bit jumpy, so
when editing we will add transitions and titles to make
it smoother. We need a more variety of shots, to do
this we will shorten down the conversation scene, as it
to long and there is just a medium shot. To improve
this we will use a shot reverse shot and close up to
show the emotion on the actor’s faces. So we need to
re-film, this will make the mise-en-scene better as
when we will re-film we will make sure the actor’s don’t
laugh.
The positive points of our feedback were that our
storyline was easy to follow. The sound and dialogue
was very clear the audience could understand what the
actors were saying.
We plan to re-film this afternoon, to make the title
sequence flow we will make sure our actors are wearing
the same clothes and are sat in the same place, so we
do not upset the continuity editing.