2. Our rough cut feedback, gave us an indication on what
changes we need to make to our final film opening. Here are
some of the constructive criticisms:
• The opening was too long, therefore we were told to cut some clips as they were
not all necessary.
• In between the cross cutting we need to add titles otherwise it will look like its
jumping from one scene to another and it will not make sense.
• We needed to cross cut more to the male character as enough of him was
not shown.
• We didn't add any sound/music as there was not enough time. So we were told to
make our sound and add it in quickly.
• The titles were on the corners of the frames so we had to move them to make them
TV safe.
• We used our real names in the titles and were told it is better not to.
• Also there were some titles on the same page but were told to add different pages
for each.
