The audience provided feedback on a trailer, magazine, and poster. For the trailer, they suggested adding more voice over, varying the music to indicate scenes and conflict, including more cuts and sounds. For the magazine, they felt the layout and color scheme made it look like a newspaper insert, so changes were made to the images, text positioning, and colors. For the poster, displaying the main character in two similar poses confused the transition being shown, so the outfits were changed to better illustrate her change from geek to street/cool.

1. What have you learned from
your audience feedback?

2. Trailer
• Needed voice over
• Music needed to be more varied to indicate scenes
including a conflict.
• More variety of cuts; some shots were too long
• needed to include more sounds to main soundtrack as
in parts the music sounded too empty/ slightly echoic
making it appear unfinished.
• Sound effects- a particular scene in a trailer the sound
effect we used to imitate the sound of water ending up
sounding similar to a flying device.

3. Magazine
• Looked like a free insert out of a newspaper
due to layout and colour scheme.
Removed: bold
white border.
Added:
Other images of
new coming films.
Repositioned most
of the text to the
right hand side of
the cover.

4. Poster
• At first the image of the
dominant character in two
different poses made
appear as though they
were twins instead if
illustrating the transition of
the “geek” becoming more
“street”. Therefore we
chose to dress the main
character in two separate
outfits to distinguish her
transition from being a
geek and then becoming
more street/cool.