1. What have you learned from
your audience feedback?

2. Trailer
• Needed voice over
• Music needed to be more varied to indicate scenes
including a conflict
• More variety of cuts; some shots were too long
• needed to include more sounds to main soundtrack as
in parts the music sounded too empty/ slightly echoic
making it appear unfinished.
• Sound effects- a particular scene in a trailer the sound
effect we used to imitate the sound of water ending up
sounding similar to a flying device.

3. Magazine
• Looked like a free insert out of a newspaper
due to layout and colour scheme.

4. Poster
• At first the image of the dominant character in
two different poses made appear as though
they were twins instead if illustrating the
transition of the “geek” becoming more
“street”.