Task 6 products and evaluations

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Advertising
Producing and evaluating

Task 6: Advert Development
I start creating my advert in a simple format. Beginning with a simple design
that links to the design so it can be easily linked without the need to place the
product on the advertisement.
I wanted to link in the underground music associated with this energy drink so
I use Disclosure to advertise the product and show the enjoyment you get
when you take Rapture in this environment. Existing energy drinks such as
Relentless uses celebrity endorsement to appeal to a young market
who is interested in these celebrities. I used Disclosure because they
are young, inspiring people who create the sort of music my target
audience would like to make or listen to.
In the first development ad it is very plain and just consists of the
logo/name and Disclosure. Originally the Disclosure image was two
separate images. I made it look like one by using the lightening fade. I like this
because it really does look like one image. For example the microphone looks
like it is crossing through both pictures by originally it is only from the right
hand side picture.
I liked the use of the images so much that I used another image to cover the
unused space. This added a lot more depth into the advertisement and
brought it to life. Not only does it show the immense atmosphere at the gig, it
connects that if you have a Rapture energy drink at a gig like Disclosure you
will have as much fun and energy the people in the crowds are having. I really
like this picture because the lights look like they are coming out of the page
and crossing with the Rapture logo lights. The contrast of the bright, colorful,
thin lights from the Rapture logo and the white large lights from the Disclosure
gig is that the Rapture lights look like an explosion of energy, the rush that you
will experience and feel which makes it stand out.
Before

Task 6: Advert Development
My product is targeted towards young adults therefore I added social
networks and the link to the website for the Rapture energy drink. This is to
interact with the product and so they can get in touch with Raptures Record
deal and send them demos. It is quite difficult to read the web address and
slogan even with a stroke around it, so I may need to change the position of
this. More and more adverts are having social media logos on them but I’m
not sure if it brings away the whole print idea of a poster advertisement.
I wanted to try out a different idea. Instead of having the name in the middle
of the page I placed the actual product in the middle of the light explosion. At
first I didn’t know if this was going to work because the same light explosion
features on the can as well as on the poster and I didn’t know if this would
clash. But it doesn’t. I don’t know if the size of the can is too big but this can
be changed in the final development.
Having the product placed on the advertisement does make you focus more
on the product and you instantly know what they poster is advertising so you
can go to the shops and pick up the can because you know what it actually
looks like when sold.
It does hide some of the background features such as the explosion of light
doesn’t have the same effect and the bottom image of Disclosure doesn’t
show the energy and fun because it has been broken up with the slogan,
which has been made bigger, and the product placement.
Overall I do like the idea of having the product on the advertisement but I do
like the feel and layout of the advert when it just have the name/logo on it.

Task 6: Advert Evaluation
What are the technical qualities of your work?
The technical qualities in my work is the way I made three images blend to make them
look like one. By choosing three images that all were similar in colour and shade it was
easier to blend. Therefore going for three black and white images was a good way to
achieve this technique. Using the smudge and blur tools I was able to create a blurred
effect to make it look like they were meant to be together.
with the top images I used the lighten technique to blur
and merge them into one. This is really effective as it
makes the advertisement flow into an explosion in the
middle which connotes to the energy released from
having this energy drink.
The energy has been shown greatly by the explosion of light in the middle. I
found this source image on Google, but I could create this effect myself,
depending on how much time I have. Possibilities could turn out to be that it
could not look as effective or explosive not giving the same effect. If I do have
time I would like to try and achieve this effect myself but I am not sure on the outcome yet.
I used the burn tool on the explosive light to create more of a contrast of the black to the bright colours.
Doing this made the bright colours stand out more and look like they are coming out of the page more
because of the contrast and the shadows. I used this tool slightly on the lights on the bottom image, this
made them stand out more from the original image and intertwined with the explosive lights. All these
lights represent the typical club night out and the explosive energy you will receive if you have Rapture.

What are the aesthetic qualities of your work?
The aesthetic qualities in my work are the explosive emotion it brings with it because of the large
explosion in the centre of the page. This takes up a lot of space on my advert and making it explode over
other aspects of the advert increases the feeling. This feeling is what you get when you drink Rapture, a
large rush of power and energy. I like the way explosive lights have been used to represent
the amount of energy and power an energy drink can give you. It also keeps the images
and text all linked together and leads the advertisement to feel and look as if everything
is purposely flowed into each other. The light begins to explode which connects to the
name of the drink and the slogan but also connects all three images to hold everything
into place. The colours are bright which contrast with both black and white, they are eye
catching and would appeal to a young audience.
A lot of the space has been filled up mainly by images, there is not a lot of text on my
advertisement. This is because it is aimed towards a young target audience, an audience who wouldn’t
want to read a lot of text and who would be more interested in the use of colours and images. This is why
I placed most of the text together, and the part I didn’t I knew the audience would be interested in
because it was interactive and included the social media.
Choosing an interesting character to act as a logo for the record label
connected to the Rapture drink is a way to interest the young adult audience.
Because it is an interesting piece of art, they will want to know what it is
advertising and placing it next to the website that has the words “Rapture
Records” in it it will introduce a new and exciting thing for people to look at and
because it is an individual character it will be known and related to Rapture.

Are there opportunities for further development of your work?
I could develop my work further by placing small logos of social medias because it is
targeted towards a young audience that would use the social media to look at this
product. I would use the typical mainstream social medias such as Facebook and Twitter
but I would also use the music based social medias such as Soundcloud and Spotify.
Soundcloud is especially good for new and upcoming artists because they can promote
their songs by giving away free downloads and people can like and repost songs they like. Rapture would
have accounts on social medias like this so peoples songs could be heard and so people and send their
songs into the record deal to hopefully be signed.
Looking back at existing energy drink adverts I have noticed they do include the
product of the drink even if it is small in the corner. I designed my product mainly
from this relentless advertisement. I liked the fun and energy being portrayed by
the energy drink. But I could, and would like to, add an image of my product near
the bottom.

Are your final pieces fit for purpose?
I believe my final piece does fit to its purpose as it is targeted towards a certain audience which has been
portrayed in a certain way in the advertisement. My product is targeted towards the young adults mainly,
19-26. These people are typically known in the clubbers scene and sometimes energy is what they need
because they have danced it all away. But in the media they can be portrayed as bad people because they
do not live the typical lifestyle and usually sleep during the day and go out at night. But this
advertisement I have portrayed them to be a fun stereotype and this is shown by them dancing, and
enjoying the music. I did this on purpose to show the other side of this stereotype that could need the
help in the media now a days.
I have used celebrity endorsement, which personally I think works well for my idea. It fits with the
purpose and idea of my genre and design of my energy drink. Like Relentless, it has been designed to be
linked to the music industry therefore using celebrities such as Disclosure will bring in a certain type of
group to my product. Relentless used artist like Zane Lowe and Professor Green, this campaign was
successful for them, it is a good way to quickly advertise your product. Therefore it fits well for my product
and audience making it successful.

What areas of planning and development worked well?
The development stages really helped me choose what to include on my page and what I didn’t need so
much. Although I did keep most of the layout the same, but this was because I really liked the main layout
and it could be changed by the things I put on top of it and include within it. It also made me realise I
needed to made the images flow into one another to make the advert to work.
The part of the planning and development that helped me a lot was deciding if I should include a image of
my product on the advert. Have both a design with and without the product I could see if either of them
worked and if so which one worked best. Although it is a good idea to have the product on the advert,
sometimes it is more effect without it and I feel my advert was without it. It has more energy and this is
want I wanted to advertise within the print ad.
What areas of planning and development
could have done with more work?
I did slightly look at using social media networks in my
advertisement but I wish I had developed this more,
maybe using Soundcloud and Spotify, social networks
targeted towards musicians and the same sort of target audience that Rapture would have.
An area of development I could have looked at would have been to see what my advert would look like if
it was placed horizontally. I think the reason I didn’t do this was because I automatically knew it wouldn’t
look good. If I was to do it again I would design a different idea for my can, a more simple idea and do it so
it was horizontal.

What effect did you think your development stages had on the final product?
The effect the development stages had on my final product were all successful and they helped me look at
different designed together and choose, what I think would be the most successful. It also made me
largely realise I needed to make all my images flow into one another to make the advert to work.
I did try the advertisement including logos of social medias such as Facebook and Twitter and
although typically this is associated with a young audience, I feel it just bring away the whole
print magazine/ billboard as there cannot be any real interaction here. And most young people assume
they will have social media account, therefore I felt I did not need to input this.
The part of development that really helped me develop the final advert was
included an actual image of the product of the drink. After producing this development
plan I did not know weather to keep the name/logo design or to include the
product. Although I do think including an image of what you’re selling is important
as it shows the audience what to look for in the shops and mostly shows them what
product you are advertising for. But in the end I felt that the can took away the energy
and power of the advertisement and it didn’t flow as nicely as the advert with just the
name and logo on the front. Some advertisements don’t need the product on it as they
are well known the name and images can speak for itself. I want my product to be like
this. Therefore the adverts will need to be placed in a specific place where the right
audience would find them.

Task 7: Product Development
This is the first design of my packaging. It is quite a plain with
the black can and the black and white colour tone throughout.
Seeing the whole can like this does make it look good but
there is still a long way for me to go until I retrieve the final
product.
Firstly I need to look at the side of the packaging and see how
other cans use this space. By looking at Relentless they repeat
the front of the can twice, excluding the flavour of the drink. I
will design another can to experiment an develop this idea. This will help me decide which layout looks the
best for the final packaging.
The back of the can doesn’t look very professional as I did create this first design by just getting a
stock nutrition label from the internet. This will not feature on the final design of the can. The
font that I used for the information does not look how it would look on a actual can, this is the
same for the side of the can too. Therefore in my next development I will change the font and use
caps lock to make some things stand out.
I do like how the front of the can is full from just an explosion and the way the light goes around
the can. The front of the can does need the name of the flavor, this will probably be in the same
font as the name to keep the theme ongoing throughout. The slogan being placed at the top of
the can gives an sense of an ongoing feeling, I think this feature will be kept to the end design. A lot of
existing products do this such as RockStar and Monster. It also fills up a lot of space and to see what the
slogan says you have to turn the can all the way around letting people become interactive with the rest of
the can, so they can visualize everything and not miss any information such as websites, competitions and
ingredients.

I feel this design is a lot more successful than the one before.
This time I looked closely to an existing can, having a product
in front of me made me look at all the small features such as
the calorie label on the front and recycling signs. I spent a lot
more time designing this product and I am please with the
success. I took out the completion on the can after looking at
excising products and most cans just repeat the front side of
the can without the flavour on it. To separate the designs up a
bit I used the side of the can to advertise Rapture Records,
their own record label with a QR code linking to the website, and the logo of the label. This is so people can
go straight to the website and find out more information about the record company and also a small bit
about the drink.
The back of the can looks a lot more professional now I have written it myself and used the correct fonts. I
made sure I included features such as the can date, where to find the use by date, recycling symbols,
barcode and contact information. I looked at excising products and they all have a small paragraph
describing the product. In this I explained what energy Rapture give you and the flavours. I then completed
my own nutrition label in a simple table. I used similar ingredients to what Relentless uses because of the
similar taste and product. I am happy with the way the back of the can now looks. This extra work was
worth the effort to make it look like this.
Other things I included was a name for the flavour of the can, this one is simply original, leading to many
other different flavours. The placing of the title “original” was difficult as it could be placed, top, middle or
bottom. I choose the bottom of the can eventually as everywhere else already had other features near it. I
also included my own calorie chart. A quick was to display calories, fat and sugars in the can without
looking to the small print on the back of the can. This is common to see of energy drinks, as well as other
drinks and foods.

This is a diet version of my energy drink. I inversed all the
colours to make it look a lot lighter. The blacks turned to
whites and vice versa. This makes the can look less heavy. Just
like a diet can of Coca-Cola, silvers and whites are used to
make it seem healthy and light. Again like Coca-Cola it would
probably be aimed towards more women because of the
colours and the healthier lifestyle being portrayed with a diet
version.
When making the label I had trouble at first. I wanted to use the same font that
the logo/name uses but I found an issue that the word was hard to read in this font
because the “e” looked like a backwards G confusing the word. I then looked at
other diet cans and saw they used replacement words such as “lite” and “light”.
I tired first using “lite” but again the G distorted the word. Therefore I tried “light”
and it was easily readable and worked well with the product.
The can does look a little bit more empty, and the slogan looks a little too heavy for the can now because the
colours have been inverted. Instead of it being a heavy black it would look better if it was grey or white, to
still fit in with the light colours. The empty space could be fixed if the explosion of light is made bigger on the
front of the can. I will most likely do this in the final design if it is diet or not. It is important to basically keep
the same design on both diet and non-diet cans. This helps a consistent theme throughout letting people feel
safe with your product as they know what to expect.

Task 7: Packaging Evaluation
I have used plenty of technical qualities to create my final product. I included specific techniques to make
it look like a realistic can that you would find in the shops like Tesco's. I used a flat plan Photoshop to
create the final product. The flat plan helped me keep features in line and with the large graphic of
exploding light I could see how far over to the next side it exploded to. I wanted to make the graphic
expand slightly over to the other sides to carry on the feeling of energy. This idea looks good on the flat
plan but it is not shown as well when I use Photoshop to create the rounded can look. I created this look
by getting a plain black can and pasting part of my design onto the can.
I would cut off the excess parts and the I would using the blending
effects choosing “lighten”. This gives the design some shape and using
the highlights from the can below it makes it look rounded and looks
like an actual energy drink product. This is a great technique to use as it
shows how the can will actually look without making the product, so if
anything needs changing to fit on better it can be done at this stage.
In my development I used the “inverse” to make a diet version of my can. I like this as I have
never used this technique before but it worked really well. Making the can silver gave the
whole theme a much lighter feel. I defiantly like the idea of a diet can for my product. This
would appeal to typically a softer, and possibly a more female genre, possibly selling double
and achieving a greater profit.
Making this packaging has let me experiment and discover even more things on Photoshop
that I could used later on in my product or even later in life. Techniques such as blending
options, inverse, colour change and how flat plans are important will all be carried on.

I used the same explosion of light I used on my print advert on the packaging of my can. This is so it can be
identified with the product all the way though advertising to the audience to buying the product. This is
so the audience can establish and conjoin the product to the advertisement making them both effective
and this is how you make more money with your product.
When producing my packaging I had an existing product of Relentless on hand.
I was able to see what important features they used on their can that I could use
with mine. This was a great help especially for the back of the can. I was able to
see what important ingredients and symbols I needed to create a
professional looking can. For example I used the recycling symbol,
barcode, typical contact information and the nutrition's label to make
the back of the can look as professional as possible. By looking at an
existing product I could identify ingredients and the amount used in
their can and what I could have in my own, because obviously I had
very little knowledge about energy drink ingredients. I made my own nutrition information
label and calorie information that features on both the back and front of the can. This is
expected to see on most drink and food packaging.
I kept the fonts and colours pretty much the same from my advertisement. This is so the audience can
associate these colours and fonts with this brand. This is done particularly well with existing products
such as Red Bull and Relentless. If I saw a red bull or Relentless’ font I would associate this quickly to the
product. This is because they use the same features on all their packaging, advertisements and even on
the web too.

Yes, I would like to look at the side of more existing products to see how I can develop the
side of my can better. When I first started developing my energy drink I had not really look
at the side of many energy drink cans. My first idea was to link the fact that Rapture had a
record label that is connected to the drink. Usually a quick way to involve and inform people
about things like this a competition is put out. This is from my first development stage and
it doesn’t look professional or like what you would see on a existing energy drinks can.
This when I picked up a can of Relentless to work from.
I had only really looked at Relentless and they just repeat the logo again, making it a double
of the front. Knowing that this is done on a popular energy drink I developed my final idea
from this. But I still wanted to advertise the record company too. Therefore I made the logo
smaller and added “records” below, the name of the record company. Connecting it to the
record label but being subtle I put the website, logo and a QR code that will also link you to
the website. This looks a lot better but I feel I could develop this more. I would like to look at
more energy drink product and see what they do too.
Before
After

Are your final pieces fit for purpose?
Yes I feel my final packaging fits for a purpose. I feel it would target the right audience as it is
connected to a music genre that is enjoyed specifically by 19-26 year olds. This has been linked
into the can by mentioning, subtly, about the record label and using a QR code to link them to
the website. A QR code is another way to show that it is for a younger audience as they will
know what to do with this code, compared to people in their 40’s.
The explosive lighting on a dark background connects to the dark underground music nightlife club that
this target audience would drink this drink at, possible as a mixer with alcohol. The explosion explains the
energy you will get if you have this drink and making the slogan go around the top as an on going feeling,
this is a feeling a young person out to the early hours in the morning would want to feel. I feel like it looks
like an energy drink and it would appeal to the correct audience.
What areas of planning and development could have done with more work?
The areas that could have had more planning and developing were looking at more existing products. I
would have liked to have looked at products like Red Bull, Monster and Rockstar to see what they put on
their packaging and how that effects the way it looks. I will do this next time as I feel this would really
improve my work.
A lot of products have the name of the drink going down the side of the can, so it can stand out bigger,
but I did mine going horizontally across the page. I would have like to see what my can would look like if
the name was going vertically down the page and see if this would make any difference to the look of my
can.

The areas of planning and development that worked well for me was actually looking at a can
of Relentless. This helped me realised what actually goes onto a energy drink can, especially
the back on the can. Comparing the first development of my energy drinks can to my final one
you can see the difference of how much more professional it looks. Small details do matter and
do give a great amount of detail.
Part of my development was to see what my product would be like if it had a diet version. I
inverted the colours to make whites become blacks and blacks become whites. I was really
pleased with the outcome and this would come out with my final product. It is always good to
have a diet version, it brings in a bigger audience and especially for energy
drinks, which are full of sugars, it can lead to a healthier outlook on the product.
I felt this development worked well as it helped me know this was they layout I
wanted for my can as it would fit with multiple editions such as a diet can,
special editions and different flavours giving it more opportunity as an energy
drink.

The effects the development stages on my final design were all good as they made my final product
successful. From finishing one idea, that you may think is suitable, to then thinking of a simple idea that
could change the perspective can make the whole packaging of the can look better. Development can
improve any piece of work as you can always go back to the original design but showing that you can
introduce new ideas is always a good thing.
During the development stages I changed the side of the explosion to see what it would look
like, big or small. Although the big explosion fills up more space and looks more intense, the
smaller one looks more professional, and less intimidating. For my final product I went
in between for the front of the can and for the side I used a smaller graphic to make it slightly
different and so the can could be approached by an outgoing audience, but not be too
intimidating to put on a shelf.
It had a large effect on the side and back of the can. I tried out a few different ideas for both
sides of the the can to see which designs work best and which would appeal most to the
target audience. By developing these ideas, I was able to create a much more professional
looking can than what would have first been designed if no development had taken place.
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Task 8: Web Banner Development
Using a 720x300 template I was able to fit in a larger
amount of information that a usual leader board banner
that are the most common. Not a lot of information is
usually put on a web banner, this is so you will click on it
to find out more, This is usually the most a web banner
would have on it. I put enough information on that would
attract an audience, but enough to keep them wondering. Unlike my magazine advert, this web banner has a
image of my actual product. This is because the audience may be much further away from seeing the actual
product, where as print adverts are placed in places where that specific audience would see it, so it is
important to show them exactly what they are getting. Also the placing of the product doesn’t clash with the
explosive lights in the background because the can has the same graphics on it. Placing them apart slightly
avoids this clash and connects them instead. I didn’t center this banner, I placed everything to the side slightly,
to make the audience look longer at it because it feels like two parts of the banner. I like the graphics and look
in the web banner. It has just enough detail on it to make it interesting and it shows the product clearly.
With this banner I used celebrity endorsement from Disclosure. This it to attract a similar audience who like
this music genre and who look up to Disclosure. They are popular DJ’s and have a large fan base who would buy
this drink because they know Disclosure have supported it. It feels like Rapture give Disclosure their power to
produce the music they product and gives them energy. This is just what the audience wants from this sort of
product.
I do like this web banner as it links to the print
advert in a great amount. By using the same
images, colours and fonts I can give the same
feeling and people will be able to associate both
adverts with the product. This makes the product
seem safe as people don’t like change and
keeping the product and its advertising within a
similar layout gives people comfort.

This is a typical web banner you would see at the top of websites. I wanted to try and do one of these
banners are they are common, but I knew before I produced it it would not look as good as others as the
explosion of light is too big to fit in the banner. It does look better than I thought it was going to. I kept it
simple, as if it was just a taster advert, and it would be placed under YouTube videos, under videos of the
dance genre such as a Disclosure video.
First of all I started with just a black background with the graphic, slogan and name over the top. I felt it was
a bit plain and I thought it felt like I was in space, so I found multiple images with lots of tiny stars. The first
one was just black and white, it looked good, but again it was still slightly plain and had no emotion to it. I
found one with a hint of purple lifted into it. This brought out some shapes and colours sharper making it
more eye catching. Because this would only be small along the top of a page, people might quickly scroll
down and ignore it, therefore it need to be quick, simple but eye catching. This is just what this long banner
does.

I really like this web banner. It has a lot to look in it but doesn’t over complicate things.
Again it uses a lot of similar images, colours and fonts that are used in my print advert. I
can imagine this web banner being down the side of a website like YouTube or even
Raptures own website, or similar websites. Having it in black and white but the can and
the explosion makes the light look more powerful and it attracts the can first. I like the
way “Rapture” is bigger than the can, as if it coming off of the can and towards the
audience. This quickly draws attention to the brand and the product. This is a good idea
to have the brand and product being advertised in a such a small space so you cannot get
away from what is being advertised towards you.
The background is from a Disclosure gig. This shows the fun and excitement that is
released after taking a drink of Rapture. The face that is put over the DJ’s from Disclosure
is at the top of the banner so you know it is Disclosure, this is a recognisable feature for
them as DJ’s and young people will know this.

Gifs

Gifs
I designed my adverts to become gifs as well. This has shown me a whole new skill that I can carry on.
Making animation in my web banners is a good skill to do because it will make them stand out a lot more on
the page. This will attract people to click on them more than a still image. What I have to bare
in mind is to not take away the main message with the animation of the gif. Therefore just
making the explosion explode was my idea. This highlights the energy given when having
Rapture. In one of the of the web banners I make the can appear that the end of the gif to
make a big statement of what is being advertised. It shows the product but also the feelings
due to the explosion of the gif before.
I do like the use of gifs. They attract attention quickly and stand out from a boring non moving
web page making more people click on them increasing sales and interest. These gifs did not
take a lot of time and they were easy enough to make to make a powerful statement web
banner that attracts peoples attention, which is what you want from a web banner.

Task 8: Final Web Banner
Animation

Task 8: Web Banner Evaluation
There are a lot of technical qualities within this web banner, especially within the animation
version. I did two versions and I would use the animated version on powerful websites that
can cope with a gif, such as YouTube but smaller websites such as ticket website would not be
able to hold that space. They are not very different, consisting the theme throughout my
product.
I have never used animation before. This was a whole new technical quality I was to learn.
I used Photoshop and by using the timeline at the bottom of the page and layering new layers
adding and subtracting certain objects I can create either a smooth or flashing transaction to
create a gif that can be uploaded onto the web. Animations are a great way to create
something attractive or attentive on a plain web page. It is a great way to advertise because
people like something they can interact with or feel a part of.

I like the look of my web banner as it looks like similar web banners I have seen on the internet. I chose
this size web banner because it is used a lot on websites such as YouTube, Ticketmaster and other music
based websites. It has a good space to put a good amount of information on it, but not too much
information for them not to click on the banner.
I like the way I designed my banner to be laid out. I like the way I used a similar layout to my
and product design. I used the same image of Disclosure to show the fun and energy in the
crowds. I placed the slogan at the bottom of the page, but I made it into a question,
addressing the audience making them click to find out more or to answer the question.
I like the way the name of the energy
drink comes out from out of the can and sort of exposed with the light explosion behind.
This makes the name and brand stand out beyond everything on the banner and on the
page, drawing attention to it quickly. I have kept the font the same the whole way though
so it is consistent and so the audience can notice quickly that it is advertising Rapture and
when they go into the shops to by the drink they can recognise it by the similar layout. The
Font is like its logo. Something someone can hold onto for reassurance
I decided not to choose the other web banners because they either had too much information on them,
or not at all. They didn’t look consistent with my other advert and the packaging unlike this design. This
design doesn’t have much space, unlike the others making it look interesting.

I really like this web banner and I don’t feel like I can develop it that much more. I have included
important information such as the product, the name, a slogan that I portrayed within a question so it
would connect to the audience and make them feel interactive with the product. I used celebrity
endorsement to help promote the drink. I used the same picture of Disclosure that I used in my advert. It
is not the full image, but you can tell it is disclosure because of the face at the top of the banner. It has
just enough information for a web banner, but leaves the audience wanting to find out more therefore
they have to click to find out more. If a web banner told you everything there is to know, no one would
click on it or take interest in it.
Are your final pieces fit for a purpose?
Yes my final pieces do fit its purpose as it looks like a typical
web banner that you would see on music based websites
such as YouTube and Ticketmaster. The layout of the
banner is similar to existing web banners. For example
having the bottle in the middle of the banner captures the
eye of the audience and shows them exactly what you are
selling. Having a bright explosion or light seems to be
common to make the drink stand out more. Making the
banner look fun and interesting will attract the right sort of
audience, fitting for the right purpose of my energy drink.
Not putting too much information on will make people click
on the banner linking it to the website, or somewhere
where you can purchase the drink.

The areas of planning and development that worked well were seeing which type of web banner would
work the best with my design. I tried three different types of web banner. Two of them I knew would work
well, but one I didn’t know how it would turn out like. This was the most common web banner, the leader
board at 728x90. This is a long thin banner. And my product has a large explosion therefore I didn’t think
this would work on this layout. But when looking at existing
web banners in this size I saw a layout that I could use. I didn’t
have to use the whole graphic, in fact by some of it not being there it leaves
mystery. Being able to see what layouts work and how different they can be
from one another made me add or subtract certain information. I wanted to link the
banner to the rest of my advertisement I have produced for this product
therefore I choose a banner which included the same images and style.
What areas of planning and development could have done
with more work?
The areas that could have done with more work would have been researching animated web banners and
see what things they use to flash and what makes them effective because I didn’t really change the
animation that much. I would also have liked to see what the web banner would have looked like if it
didn’t certain information on it, like the name, to see if it could still be recognised to my product.

The effect that the development stages had on my final product were all positive. I was able to see what
layout worked best and I either added in more information or images that were used in other
advertisements for my product. I was able to see the difference between different size web banners and
see what I could include in them. For instance, the leader board I could not include an image of the
product or any celebrity endorsement, therefore this would only really be
a good banner to use when the brand and the product was very well known
and people didn’t need that information because they already know what it
is advertising. This is how coca-cola advertise now because their name is
world-wide big.
The development stages also made me realise how using celebrity endorsement
will make an advertisement appeal to a certain target audience. Looking at the
Relentless web banner, this doesn’t include anything about the product apart
from the name, but the celebrity endorsement hits the target audience straight
away and people will be more interested to click on celebrities faces than an
energy drink just because it is something about someone's lives and people get
interested in that lifestyle and topic.
When I introduced animation I used the same layouts that I had already created, and I was able to makes
things flash up that I think was the most important. With the animated design that I choose as my final
design I was able to see what were the best things to make flash up. I tried with just the name, leaving the
bottle still and taking the bottle away, but in the end I made the light gradually explode and then the
bottle would flash in the middle of the explosion making it look interesting and there is actually a purpose
for the gif.

Task 9: Storyboard Development
Here is the first storyboard, I wanted to keep the celebrity endorsement within the advert, and I think this would
be the best advertisement technique for it to happen with as the celebrities can say what they think, show them
drinking it and how it effects them in a 30 second clip.
I used a young teenage boy as he is my typical target audience for this product. The things he likes, the things he
does will compliment the typical audience for this energy drink. The audience will see this boy and if they relate
to him they can also relate to the advertisement and connecting them and interesting them to the product.
I featured the product in the middle and at the end of the advert. The end frame will be a single large image and
explosion of the product to make an impact but during the middle, I would subtly place the can either on the
decks in front of Disclosure or in the hands of people to show how popular it is.

Task 9: Storyboard Development
To develop from my first storyboard for my
advertisement I added a few extra frames which
carry on the story and show what the power of the
energy drink can achieve. Including celebrity
endorsement and getting them to interact with the
energy drink product and the boy who relates to
the target audience makes the audience feel like
this could happen to them, even if it does look too
good to be true.
This will be a longer advert therefore it wont be on
the TV a lot, but could possible be on before
Youtube videos more.

Task 9: Storyboard Evaluation
Yes there could be further opportunity for further development of this advertisement. I would like to have
inspirational quotes being sail all the way though the advertisement to make it seem like a good powerful
drink to have. Like the Relentless TV advertisement it has Professor Green saying inspirational sentences
throughout the advert making it powerful and it is as if he is talking to you personally.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bsz4hUzU5Jg
More visual images of the can would advertise the product more , but
not intentionally, therefore the audience is seeing the product but it
Is not a big deal, for example by having the drink in peoples hands in
the club when he walks in or in the background the audience
constantly sees it but without them purposely knowing. Just like
product placement but in their own advertisement just to get the
product more well known visually.
When the teenage boy drinks the energy drink , the explosion power of light comes onto the screen, feel
like the music and all the senses that are used in a TV advert should be intensified to show how powerful
the drink is. Therefore the colours should get brighter and the sounds should get louder.

Are your final pieces are fit for a purpose?
I feel my final pieces are fit for the television advert purpose. It is quite similar to the Relentless TV advert
in the way that it includes celebrity endorsement and involves music in a similar way. I like the way in
which I am advertising an energy drink but I can include music and celebrities to help promote the
product and I feel this would be more of a successful way of doing this. It helps include interests of the
target audience and these interests can be in some way linked with the product itself.
It connects to the target audience straight away
because of the teenage boy who if featured in
the advert. This is so everyone knows who the
product is targeted at straight away and for the
audience to relate.
I used flashbacks and flash forwards to make the
advert have a story and seem interesting rather than just being kept on one level. It gives you a incite on
life before and after having the energy drink and how incredible things can change and how much you can
perform with Rapture. This lets people know the positives to the energy drink.

The areas that worked the best in planning and development was being able to look back at my script and
design a similar storyboard from that, but that was planned a couple of weeks ago, therefore things were
changed an added. I did like the way I had planned a script for my advertisement first. In the development
work I added in some extra frames to explain in more detail how this energy drink can change your like
and help you produce better outcomes. This worked well and ended up in my final development but could
have done with more work to it.
What areas of planning and development could have done with more work?
I feel a lot of areas in my development could have done with more work as during the development
stages, as all I did was add a couple of extra frames, although I feel this made it a better advert, it needed
some extra development like adding more product placement of the can. This is what the development
would have looked like if I did this:
This is just so the product is always seen, and always visible so the audience know what they are being
sold and when they go and get the drink from the shops they are able to recognise it quickly.

The effect that the development stages had on my final product at the end were very simple but effective
as I was able to create a new ending and effect to the advert. By adding in a couple of extra frames I was
able to make the advert show how the drink effects your life and helps you produce your best work. In the
first development I just stopped at when he came back to reality and made the audience wonder if
anything good did come out of that rather than just having fun. So by adding two extra slides showing
how the boy went on tour with Disclosure all because of this energy drink and how he is still performing
his best, it shows to everyone it does have a positive future outcome to it. By keeping the same end slide
at the end I am able to still create the same powerful explosion ending which mainly advertises the
product to the audience watching.
The two extra frames followed by the explosion of the product

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