1. Activity: Proofreading
Distribution
I intend my music video to be distributted (distributed) via several music channels. The video ideally,
would be aired on Kerrang, NME, and MTV2 due to the genre of the music, (.) Research has showing
me that the viewers of these channels fit the criteria of target audience for the band. However as
the band are not signed to a label, it is unlikely for them to be considered for air time on all of these
channels. Bearing this in mind I do believe that the video would receive a sufficient audiences from
the NME channel. The NME channel is (As they are) known to show new and un-signed talent, this is
also the case on MTV2 on occasions. As well as this the video will be distributed via DVD
accompanying the single. The video will also be distributed by DVD, accompanying the single.
One restriction that the video may have for being aired on these channels, is (,) it does contains one
swearword (,) and therefore would need to be either aired after the watershed or edited so that the
swearword is muted or overdubbed. However The release of the DVD with the Single will not be an
issue as the single itself will already have been regulated.
The competition that I face is predominantly from other bands or artists(.)of the same calibre as
These bands or artists would be similar to Jealous Fingers. There is a heavy competition for air time
in the music industry(,) therefore the quality of the video will have to be to off a certain standard. As
well as this, However, the band has been gaining (gained) local press, such as radio air time and
coverage in the local paper. As well as this they have done fairly well in several nationwide
competitions therefore they do seem to have some sort of an edge over there (their) rivals.
Red = misspelling
Blue = Grammatical error
Green = Added words
Orange = Removed words