1. Draft Brief description of What did you think What changes did Summarise any Based on audience
your piece. you needed to you make and why? audience feedback feedback, what
change and why? you received (positive further changes will
and negatives). you make?
Draft 1 We had short clips of We had to trim the N/A We were told we We then decided to
footage that we clips down to fit needed to film more do more filming of
recorded over a together in a video performance footage the performance
course of a period of that meant getting of a better quality to scenes so the
time which we would rid of some of the fit in with the narrative would fit
then trim down to find other footage to narrative. We were around the story of
the best footage. make it fit together. also told the footage the video.
we had was good but
just needed
improving.
Draft 2 We then had longer We needed to re- We changed the We was told the We then decided to
clips that fitted film some shots amount of clips we footage fitted very re-shoot some of the
around the narrative which were not had, trimmed them well around the song scenes in the video to
of the story but was quite perfect for down to fit the video but some camera give us a better video
still incomplete the scene; we to a decent length angles were off and for the final product.
needed to get more and tried to follow some other scenes
footage to make the narrative so it could be better .
the video longer, would fit the video
and then better.
proceeded with
editing in full.
Draft 3 We re-shot some bad We still were not We re-shot some We were told the We then decided to
parts of the video for happy with some of scenes so the camera quality of our video edit our video and try
camera angles to be the shots but stuck angles were good was getting better, and put some effects
correct, so the video with them to see if enough to follow the that we should play in on parts of it
looked good for the it worked in the narrative. around with editing where it would look
purpose of proceeding video we had. and effects of the good.
with editing once the video.
video was perfected.

2. Draft 4 We then edited our We still thought We re-shot some of We then had a We then decided to
video to include after putting on the scenes to make presentation evening re-shoot the edited
effects in parts that effects we needed the camera angle where we was told clips with the effects
we thought would to re-shoot one or good enough to how to make our on to get the effects
look good, such as two more shots to follow the narrative, video better, the main correct and make
slow motion effect go perfectly with and we added effects problems that come sure the music went
and fast motion effect the editing and the onto our video. up was the lip syncing well with the lip
as well. timing of the music and the shots of the syncing.
with the lip syncing. effects, that they
could do with being
perfected.
Final Draft We then made the We did not think We made sure the We was told to finalise We made sure any
final changes to our any changes music went with the our music video and minor changes that
video by making the needed to be lip syncing and that make any tweaks we need doing was done.
lip syncing go in time made, only to go the scenes that needed to
with the music and over our video and needed to be re-shot
made the clips go with make any minor was done.
the effects to finalise tweaks that needed
the video. doing.
(feel free to delete or add some of the draft rows, to suit whatever it was your group did).