My individual evaluation of our pitch.

1. EVALUATION OF OUR
PITCH

2. OUR GROUP PRESENTATION
Our group presentation went really well and we received feedback which we will adjust
to our scripts for our final advertisements. I feel as if I learnt even more about the way
our advertisements would run and I learnt how to work together as a team to produce
the presentation we were happy with. On a personal level, I feel as if I gained huge
amounts of confidence from talking in front of people I didn't know and therefore I
overcome barriers I thought I couldn't reach.
In order to move onto the next stage of our work before creating the advertisements,
we need to adjust minor elements of our script, such as not including the whole website
address and changing the upbeat track for the school radio advert to be not as lively, as
we realise now it could distract
the listeners from the information.
Therefore, we will find a new
audio that is more suitable or we
will change the volume level at
the beginning of the track.
The advertisements we will record, will now have slight adjustments to what we originally
planned. The feedback we were given was to ensure we had a female and male speaker in
both advertisements to certify it wasn't boring for the audience and therefore they
wouldn't lose focus in result of this.
Overall, I feel as if our presentation went extremely well and as a team we are really happy
with how it came across to the panel.