feedback

1. Jamie Hamer
Feedbacksheets
Feedback 1 - 10/12/18
- Addwhatscene it isat the start of each scene
- Make sure all the names of the characters are in capital lettersatall timesthroughoutthe script
- Make sure that all the dialogue iscentralised
- Remove EXT.LOCATION#2asitis not needed
- Make sure that all scene description textisinred
- Remove INT.LOCATION#3asit isnot needed
- Addin scene directionsthat theygetinthe car so that the actors know whatthey’re doing
- Make locationsbrief andremove some of the textandaddintostage directions
- Make sure that all dialogue directions are beforethe dialoguebeingspoken
- Make sure that there’snospellingerrorsandall punctuationiscorrect
- Make sure directionsaren’tincludedinthe location
- Finalise the ending
Feedback2 – 11/12/18
Make sure Location4 isdetailed
Make sure that Scene 4 expression isdetailedatall times