1. The second biggest story in this
magazine shows a dance show that
took place and all they have added
is one sentence that will appeal to
the readers “The most amazing
A large picture has been show in dance music” by using this
included taking up most readers will want to flick straight to
of the page showing the the page and see what dance show
type of people who listen took place because of the
to this genre of music. In description. The picture also will
the picture it shows to appeal to readers because they
girls dancing to probably have used a massive stage with big
the type of music lights and glitter thrown towards
included in this the camera showing it was a loud
magazine. They have amazing performance
included the page
number at the bottom Adding gossip to a music magazine
left hand corner so by including behind the scenes
readers can flick straight with “Swedish house mafia” a
to this page to see what popular band will draw readers in
its about. This page will because they will want to know
be the main story what’s going on with them and
because the picture is the what they are like off stage. The
biggest and covers most magazine has added the title VIP in
of the page showing the bold letters to capture the readers
magazine is focusing attention and the meaning very
mostly on this topic. important people shows it will be
about popular celebrity's and there
story’s.
The magazine have
included a free CD that
will appeal to buyers
because it is a free They have included features that
product. The contents are the pages readers will want to
page has shown what focus on the most. They have also
type of songs and included the page numbers so it is
artists are on the CD. easy to find straight away.
The songs will relate
to the magazine article
and the type of music
included in this A picture has been included of
magazine. the CD cover adding more
interest to the contents page.

2. Three pictures have
been added of
different artists and
the page number you
can turn to, to read
This contents page for about them. No writing
Billboard magazine has has been added next
included the top albums to these pictures so its
and songs for this almost like a mystery
month. This will appeal of what it will be on
to teenagers mostly about so the readers
because they will want will go to the page and
to download the top read about it.
songs and albums to
their iPods, mp3 etc.
The features have been
added with a description to
make readers interested in
it and read about the topic
Extra information or story. A picture has also
featured. Colour been added that will relate
scheme is 3 to one of the featured
colours: Blue, topics. By adding the picture
green and black. it also creates the contents
This is good and sheet to be more interesting
effective because and not just writing because
3 colours keeps it readers wont bother
clear and stops it reading it.
from looking
cluttered and
confusing.

3. A second picture
has been added to
brighten up the
page and make it
look more
appealing for The contents page of
readers. The title Rolling stones has added a
“money honey” has large picture taking up
been added most of the page because
underneath the the main article in the
picture in bold big magazine will be on this
writing and a small topic. They have edited the
description picture to black and white
including the page because it is about a star
number so it is that was famous years ago
obvious it is the and using the black and
second biggest white represents the old
story included in times. The picture also
the magazine. shows them both dancing
in a way people would do
in the 50s or 60s.
The featured story’s
have been added
including their page
number. They stand out
by using the main title
in a bold font and the
page number in a pink
colour.
A descriptive paragraph has been added
to get a taster of what the full article
will be talking about.