1. Feedback from the Mock
• International strategies are the most important at
improving food security discuss. (70)
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
2. Intro
1. Write out the full question at the start
2. Take first page to plan!
3. A full sentence (or 2 shorter) on what chronic and
transitory is. Not too brief.
4. Get 3 pillar model neat!
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
3.
4. Methodology
1. Need a more academic website e.g. www.wfp.org
(get an author from an article!)
2. Dates and authors are vital in methodology
3. Avoid sweeping statements ‘It was written in
2009 and is therefore out of date.’
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
5. Analysis
1. Always keep coming back to the question, especially in the sub-conclusion.
2. … According to the FAO, ‘there would be no food security without rural
women’.
3. Diagrams need to be integrated more – including Boserup and Mathus
4. More key phrases ‘root cause’, chronic / transitory, perfect storm, dual
approach, one size fits all, etc. etc.
5. Titles – sub-conclusion needs a title
6. Underline titles
7. Number paragraphs
8. Detail in case studies
9. Integrate 3 stage model / Maplecroft more – if you refer to them in the intro.
10. Refer back to other strategies ‘Despite the immediate success of the WFP’’s
strategies, this would not be effective in the UK. Here the issue of economic
food insecurity is becoming more and more important. According to the
Trussel Trust ….
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
11. Conclusion
1. Timing
2. Nothing new
3. Sum up what you have said and have a clear
judgement, yes or no.
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
13. Possible questions
International strategies are the most important at improving food security discuss.
1. Strategies that attempt to increase food security
vary in their importance / effectiveness. Discuss
2. Some strategies are more important than others
in improving food security. Discuss.
3. A range of strategies are needed to address food
insecurity. Discuss.
4. The varying importance of strategies used to
improve food security is dependent upon
location. Discuss.
