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REVISED PITCH
By Will, Tom, Josh and Ollie
Plot/sTORYLINE• At home and the two boys are getting ready to go to a party
• The two boys refer to terrorising a boy from schools who going to the party (The Killer)
• You see someone walking past Ollie’s house
• They then leave to go the party
• When they leave ollie realises he forgot his wallet, he goes back in to get it.
• Josh then carries on walking to the car whilst ollie goes back into the house
• Josh gets attacked on the way to the car and you can see he’s feet hanging out from the doorway he was killed at,
• Ollie makes his way to the car and realised Josh has been killed, he then runs off because he is scared.
• Ollie then runs to what he thinks is a safe place and the killer won’t get him.
• He then receives a text saying ‘‘you’re next’’
• And then it ends.
Inspirational film
• Our first inspirational film is reservoir dogs, this is because
there is a scene where suggested violence is used, which we
will use in our film and we won’t to be a successful as their
ear cutting scene.
Inspirational Film
• Another inspirational film we used is Sim City, this was
because of the main character that kills a lot people.This is
because we feel that we have tried to re create the same
sort of character, which is someone that is creepy quiet and
is a killer but no one expects it.
USP
• Our USP is the fact that there is two males and not a couple
e.g. a girl and a boy. This makes it unique because not many
films have this so the audience wont be expecting it.Also
this way our film could be more successful because there
isn’t many films to relate it to.
USP
• Our USP is the fact that there is two males and not a couple
e.g. a girl and a boy. This makes it unique because not many
films have this so the audience wont be expecting it.Also
this way our film could be more successful because there
isn’t many films to relate it to.

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Revised pitch

  • 1. REVISED PITCH By Will, Tom, Josh and Ollie
  • 2. Plot/sTORYLINE• At home and the two boys are getting ready to go to a party • The two boys refer to terrorising a boy from schools who going to the party (The Killer) • You see someone walking past Ollie’s house • They then leave to go the party • When they leave ollie realises he forgot his wallet, he goes back in to get it. • Josh then carries on walking to the car whilst ollie goes back into the house • Josh gets attacked on the way to the car and you can see he’s feet hanging out from the doorway he was killed at, • Ollie makes his way to the car and realised Josh has been killed, he then runs off because he is scared. • Ollie then runs to what he thinks is a safe place and the killer won’t get him. • He then receives a text saying ‘‘you’re next’’ • And then it ends.
  • 3. Inspirational film • Our first inspirational film is reservoir dogs, this is because there is a scene where suggested violence is used, which we will use in our film and we won’t to be a successful as their ear cutting scene.
  • 4. Inspirational Film • Another inspirational film we used is Sim City, this was because of the main character that kills a lot people.This is because we feel that we have tried to re create the same sort of character, which is someone that is creepy quiet and is a killer but no one expects it.
  • 5. USP • Our USP is the fact that there is two males and not a couple e.g. a girl and a boy. This makes it unique because not many films have this so the audience wont be expecting it.Also this way our film could be more successful because there isn’t many films to relate it to.
  • 6. USP • Our USP is the fact that there is two males and not a couple e.g. a girl and a boy. This makes it unique because not many films have this so the audience wont be expecting it.Also this way our film could be more successful because there isn’t many films to relate it to.