This is a script for my AS Media Studies Thriller opening

1. Help Wanted Script
EXT. SCENE 1. HOUSE VIEW. MORNING.
Scene opens on an out of focus shot of Auckland City Skyline then
goes into focus. It is just after sunrise where the sun is just
coming over the skyline. In the background there is an orchestral
piece that creates a sense of suspense but underlies the voiceover
and other subsequent background sounds (shower and phone).
INT. SCENE 2. BEDROOM. MORNING.
Wide shot (high angle/birds eye view) of EVAN SILVA in bed awake.
This then cuts to an extreme close-up shot of EVAN SILVA’s eyes as he
stares at the ceiling in silent anticipation for his alarm to go off.
He is possibly restless from one of his jobs the night before which
justifies his heightened state. Alarm clock goes off and his eyes
look toward it on his bedside table.
EVAN SILVA (V.O.)
People ask me if I'm content with my job. I usually just stick to a
regular response and shrug off the question.
INT. SCENE 3. BEDROOM. MORNING.
Mid-shot of EVAN SILVA’s hand turning off the alarm.
INT. SCENE 4. BEDROOM. MORNING.
Close-up shot of EVAN SILVA’s feet and in the background there is a
black duffel bag sitting underneath his bed, with the contents of a
gun and money in frame.
EVAN SILVA (V.O.)
But really it's a very demanding occupation.
INT. SCENE 5. BATHROOM. MORNING.
Establishing shot of bathroom showing counter and shower which is
fogged up from the warm water and condensation. The sound of running
water is heard.
EVAN SILVA (V.O.)
The thing about my job is, I have two of them. While that might seem
justifiable with the rough times and cuts and economy ever shifting,
it's not that simple.
INT. SCENE 6. BATHROOM. MORNING.
Over the shoulder shot of EVAN SILVA using a face cloth to scrub his
face whilst simultaneously obscuring his appearance until he pulls it
away and reveals his face (if condensation obstructs the reflection
in the mirror EVAN SILVA will wipe it away in one clean motion).
1EVAN opens up the mirror cabinet and takes out some medication which
he then swallows and places back in the cabinet.

2. Phone begins to ring in background causing EVAN SILVA to look down
and pick it up then brings it into frame whilst simultaneously
answering it. He then looks back to the mirror and the scene cuts to
EVAN SILVA (V.O.)
One of them is working at a bar for my boss, serving drinks to
clients so you hear a lot of information. But the other...is
very...disruptive.
EMPLOYER
We have another job for you.
EVAN SILVA
I’m listening.
1: If there is enough time in the editing process to incorporate this
shot then it will be included in the finished product.