feedback on final piece

1. Feedback on Smile Final

2. I had begun the survey by asking this important question on if the video was appropriate for the brief seeing as
everyone who took the survey was within my target audience so their feedback would be actually useful to me.
Everyone who had took the survey felt the video was, in fact, appropriate. I had then asked a follow up question had
anyone thought that the video wasn’t appropriate however I hadn't got any comments saying the video was
inappropriate.

3. Seeing as everyone who had took the survey had been doing the same project I had been doing, their feedback on my video
was useful for me. I had asked if they would change anything to get some feedback on anything they thought should be
changed. The majority of people taking the survey thought they wouldn’t change anything in the video however I had gotten
some advice that I could make some scenes brighter however when I followed up on that it turns out they had thought I should
change the first scenes which I decided not to do as they were supposed to be dark to portray the model in the video not
feeling good. I had then been told some of the transitions could be changed however she had meant the first few transitions
which were supposed to be rough to eventuate how bad the model had been feeling. I had also chosen to keep the script
repetitive as a larger vocabulary would have been hard for a viewer to follow along to.

4. I had asked this question feeling it was an extremely important question to ask my
audience. The ad was generally meant to target all audiences and I felt that I needed to
know if anyone had thought the advert didn’t actually appeal to everyone. However, my
worries were eased seeing as everyone who responded to my survey felt that the advert
was, in fact, suitable for all audiences meaning I don’t need to actually change the
content of my video.

5. Seeing as we were all familiar with the brief and the company mind, as well as their
views and values, I thought I should ask if they were in mind's position would they be
happy to receive the product I had made for Mind. Everyone who had took the survey
felt that if they were in the position where they received this product then they
definitely would be happy to receive my video.

6. After asking all of the questions I felt I should have asked, I offered the survey
takers an opportunity to give me any other comments they felt were relevant,
however two of the people taking the survey didn’t bother to give me a comment,
two survey takers said they had no other comments to give me. One person then
told me I had done a good job on my product.