2. When looking at this feedback, I can see that the people who watched it enjoyed
what they seen, although I have been given the information to change the colour,
this will help me make my newspaper advertisement better in the way that it will
stand out.
3. I only got one
comment on this,
but it shows me
that it is
informative and
gives out all the
information that is
needed and she
would want to
watch it. Also that
the sound quality is
very good, this
shows that we
have done a good
job editing.
4. From the documentary I got a variety of
peoples feedback, and the majority of it is
positive such as it grabs peoples attention
and the editing and sound is very good, but
the negative comment was that the ending
would have to be altered slightly.
5. CONCLUSION:
Overall, I can see from the feedback that I have gathered I can see that there are many
positive comments that will show me that I have done the task to a good standard,
although I did get some negative feed back, I will be able to work on this if I was to do it
again, such as change the ending of the documentary, which to make it more
interesting as it comes to a end. Also I would change the colours on the newspaper
advert which would make it more eye catching so people would look at it and their
attention would be grabbed immediately. To conclude, I can see that I have done the
tasks well and to the best of my ability.
