1. 1 2 3 4 5
How confident are you with this
objective?
L/O: How do I comment
on the ideas and
structure of a poem?
2. Pre-reading exercise
• The Island Man is about a man
who is from the Caribbean but
lives in London. He always
thinks of his home.
• In your exercise books
brainstorm ideas on what you
think life on a Caribbean Island
would be like.
9. Writing about the structure
The first half of the poem is peaceful and relaxing. It
describes the …
This makes the Caribbean seem…
However, this changes when the poet switches the focus
and begins to describe the reality of waking up to a new
day in London. The narrator feels…
This contrast helps to…
Use EVIDENCE to back up your ideas. Explain why the words are
effective.
10. 1 2 3 4 5
How confident are you with this
objective?
L/O: How do I comment
on the ideas and
structure of a poem?
11. How confident do you feel?
RAF4 Identify and comment on the
structure and organisation of texts,
including grammatical and
presentational features at text
level
Write today’s date in the box
which applies to how confident
you feel with RAF4.
12. 1 2 3 4 5
How confident are you with this
objective?
L/O: How do I comment
on the language in a
poem?
14. S- Simile
M- Metaphor
R- Repetition
O- Onomatopoeia
RH- Rhyme
A- Alliteration
AS- Assonance
P- Personification
H- Hyperbole
Fill each box
in your bingo
grid with a
letter
symbol. You
can use them
more than
once!
15. Alliteration The river rushed rapidly
Personification Time will not wait for us
Metaphor An army of nettles
Simile Angry like a lion
Hyperbole She cried for days and days
Personification The wind whispered
Onomatopoeia Bang! Bang! Bang! The gunshots sounded.
Hyperbole There were a million other things to do that day
Rhyme She could not wait for ten past 8.
Assonance How now brown cow
Simile He smokes like a chimney
Metaphor All the world’s a stage
Assonance He eats sea weed each week
Onomatopoeia Clang! Went the old clock
Rhyme She has flower power!
Hyperbole He is so tall he touches the sky
Simile He was as tall as the sky
Personification The sun kissed the flowers
16. Alliteration The river rushed rapidly
Repetition Not a day went by, not a night went by
Alliteration But before break time
Metaphor The telephone, an unscheduled alarm clock, woke me this
morning.
Personification The sun smiled brightly all day.
Onomatopoeia Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed.
Repetition Sounds of the underground, the underground sounds.
Personification The washer gurgled the detergent
18. Copy this table
Metaphor - Sands / of a grey metallic soar
(London as an unpleasant beach)
Personification - the sun surfacing defiantly
- to dull North Circular roar
Alliteration - sun surfacing
- Stanza 3 = Sands, soar, surge (like
the sounds of the sea)
Repetition - groggily groggily
- muffling muffling
19. Think about the images the poet uses.
What does this image suggest to you?
his small
emerald island
20. Think about the images the poet uses.
What does this image suggest to you?
his small
emerald island
21. Think about the images the poet uses.
What does this image suggest to you?
his small
emerald island
22. Think about the images the poet uses.
What does this image suggest to you?
his small
emerald island
23. Think about the images the poet uses.
What does this image suggest to you?
his small
emerald island
24.
25. How has the poet used imagery to convey
feelings?
The poet has used imagery
to convey a feeling of…
“his small emerald island “.
This suggests that the man
feels…
The word “ __” implies…
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27. 1 2 3 4 5
How confident are you with this
objective?
L/O: How do I comment
on the language in a
poem?
28. How confident do you feel?
RAF3 deduce, infer or
interpret information,
events or ideas from
texts
Write today’s date in the box
which applies to how confident
you feel with RAF3.