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“JOHNNY FLICK EYES”
By
Jacob Grevatt
Jacob Grevatt
grevattj.student@ringwood.hants.sch.uk
01425 475000
2
FADE IN:
SCENE 1: BEDROOM - MORNING
Fades into a close up of the protagonist VINNIE. His face
is wet and sweaty and he has his eyes closed. A song is
playing while he is staring up just behind the camera. The
Camera slowly pans out showing he is laying on his in his
room. The credits are appearing as various close ups / pans
of his room and what he has in it the credits. This is
interrupted when the big don bursts into the room.
THE DON
Come on Get off your ass a come help
deliver this package.
VINNIE
Seriously right now can’t it wait, I’m in
the middle of something
THE DON
I aint asking
THE DON grabs his arm and pulls him up from the bed
Vinnie proceeds to get up and picks his suit up from the
floor. Vinnie gets dressed. A series of close ups of him
getting dressed play. Vinnie picks up his gun from the desk
and puts it in his jacket. Then follow Vinnie down the
stairs
SCENE 2 STREET MORNING
It then cuts to Vinnie closing the door of his house
following while beside The Don.
VINNIE
So whos this package for, anyway?
THE DON
Same as usual…
(STOPS WALKING AND TURNS TO VINNIE)
3
You’re not supposed to ask, trust me kid
it’s for the better.
(THE DON PROCEEDS TO WALK.)
VINNIE
Come on Don Why don’t you trust me your
making ME deliver them I deserve to know
who their too
THE DON
No Kid and that’s final I am not telling
you. All you gotta do is take the package
and deliver it to Tinge. He can handle
everything from there.
VINNIE
Fine okay but I swear on my mamas life if
I see that back stabbing, no good, rat
Tony massu-
THE DON
IF you see the PRIVILAGED, WELL-ESTEEMED
Tony Masmurattoes you will be formal and
kind and do what he says. Ya understand
VINNIE
Yes, yeah I get it Don
THE DON
Look trust me the Masmurattoes are a
family you don’t want to mess with. Not to
mention Johnny
VINNIE
Johnny who?
THE DON
Just forget I said anything
Close up of Vinnies face from the side with an intrigued
expression.
4
SCENE 3 CARAVAN LATE MORNING
Cut to The Don and Vinnie both now entering a small caravan
two other men are there talking and piles of packages are
on each side of the table
MAN 1
So then I say it wasn’t a porker it has a
painter!!
Both men laugh hysterically.
THE DON
We’re here for the package.
They instantly stop laughing and have a mean sneer on their
face.
THE DON
Cmon chop chop.
The two men proceed to look for a package and find a small
2x5cm box and they then hand it to Vinnie.
VINNIE
Wow all this fuss over something this
small. Really
THE DON
Look the size dosent matter all you have
to worry about is delivering this to the
Masmurattoes.
Vinnie is visibly about to object
5
THE DON
I know, I know. Don’t even start to
complain but if any harm I mean any harm
comes to this package. There’s going to be
some serious problems with the
Masmurattoes. This is some high steak
stuff kid so don’t mess it up.
Vinnie has an annoyed look all over his face he looks like
he is about to say something. Yet stops. Vinnie storms out.
The don gives a look to the two men.
THE DON
Whatchu Lookin at, get back to work.
FADE INTO SCENE 4
SCENE 4 STREET MIDDAY
Vinnie is walking on the pavement, with the package in his
hand on his way to cross the corner he sees Tony
Masmurattoes hanging out with his friends, Vinnie tries to
turn the other way until Tony notices Vinnie.
TONY
Vinnie. Hey!!
Vinnie turns back around and starts walking towards tony
THE DON
Hey Tony How are ya.
Tony is about to talk but Vinnie keeps going.
VINNIE
Well it’s been great tony really has but
I’ve got to get going got this package.
6
TONY
Uh uh uh Vinnie. Come on I didn’t even get
to say a word let’s have a chat come on.
VINNIE
Look Tony by no means any disrespect but
your bustin my balls over here I gotta
deliver this package and your kind of in
my way it would be great if you could
leave me alone and let me do my business.
Tries to walk past him.
TONY
(Laughing) no disrespect (Laughing) NO
Disrespect huh you know who I am I’m Tony
god damn-
VINNIE
Masmurattoes yeah I’ve heard it before
TONY
Okay pin him down boys
VINNIE
What come on Tony you can’t be serious
TONY
Oh I’m dead serious come on boys get I’m
TONY
No no no not this time not again I can’t…
Tony’s goons charge at Vinnie, Vinnie Starts shaking and
pulls his gun out
TONY
Woah, Woah look Vinnie no need for guns
7
VINNIE
NO I refuse to be humiliated by a scum
Masmurattoes.
TONY
What did you just say Jerk I’ll kill you-
Tony charges towards Vinnie, Vinnie reacts instinctively and
pulls the trigger killing Tony
Vinnie realizes his mistak and strts to shake
uncontrollably a silence follows the gun shot with a pure
shock from Tony’s Two goons The music (Uber Capitalist
Death Trade – Cabbage) starts playing and the chase scene
initiates.
SERIES OF SHOTS (over music)
SHOT A – Shot of Vinnie running from the two men coming
towards the camera
SHOT B –
(In a minute and a half chase scene involving a series of
quick cuts with jumps and stunts ECT.)
SCENE 5 BEDROOM MIDDAY
Vinnie escapes back to his home as the door shuts and the
music stops. Vinnie relaxes and slumps on the door
eventually Vinnie gets up and reaches for his suitcase
places it on the bed and starts packing.
It then cuts to Vinnie walking out of his flat with his
suitcase and a baseball bat falls behind him and hits him
on the head as soon as it does the scene cuts
FADE INTO SCENE 6
SCENE 6 DONHOUSE NIGHT
8
Vinnie wakes up with a douse of water with a bag over his
head in a POV shot. We then get a medium shot of the don
and Vinnie his hands are tied to a chair he is sitting on.
The Big don is sitting in front of him also on a chair but
with the back between his legs.
VINNIE
Look Don there’s gotta be a
misunderstanding here I aint done nothing
wrong.
THE DON
Shut it son. You really don’t know what
you’ve done……
You’re really think I’m that stupid
VINNIE
No Don of course not I’m sorry I didn’t
mean to kill him hell I didn’t even mean
to shot him please don I’m sorry let me go
THE DON
Masmurattoes, One thing I said was to not
mess with the Masmurattoes and you go
ahead and break it
VINNIE
Okay I’m sorry I really am now please Don
let me go
THE DON
You understand, Do you have any clue what
you’ve done here, I can’t help you. (Sigh)
look they sent Johnny Flick eyes after
you….. You don’t know who he is do you.
VINNIE
Well ive heard of him I think isn’t he the
guy with the really big moustac..
9
THE DON
No you idiot this guys a ruthless killer.
Want me to tell you what he does with his
victims , huh he hangs em on meat hooks
then when they awake he flicks their eyes
every day for 5 hours until you could
barely see out of em then he waits until
they heal then he does it all over again.
You aint gonna starve or die of thirst
he’s gotcha hooked up to em machines when
he wants you to starve he’s gonna starve
ya when he wants ya to wake he’s gonna
wake ya he’s an unstoppable force.
SERIES OF SHOTS (OVER NARRATION/SPEECH)
SHOT A - a close up pan from left to right over Johnny
flick eyes smile.
SHOT B –
During this little speech a little montage of Johnny flick
eyes is played.
VINNIE
Wwwell what can I
THE DON
Nothin and I can’t help you at all (Sigh)
Unties Vinnie
VINNIE
What what are you doing keep me here
THE BIG DON
I told you I can’t help you
Hugs Vinnie and a tear rolls down his cheek
Okay now go go on get out go
10
Vinnie gets thrown out and makes his way to the gate
exiting to the street
SCENE 7 STREET NIGHT
Vinnie is slowly walking down the street cold and wet with
his suit case in his hand. In some shots we can see JOHNNY
FLICK EYES behind him.
VINNIE
It’s not real Vinnie come on it’s not
real.
Vinnie keeps walking and sees a man under the streetlight
with a suit and hat all he can see is his smile
JOHNNY FLICK EYES
Oh I’m real Vinnie
Vinnie takes another hesitated step forward to get a good
look at his face. The realization kicks in and Vinnie looks
like he’s about to say something but hands come from the
dark behind him covering his mouth and dragging him away.
JOHNNY FLICK EYES
Why don’t I take you out back?
We get on last look at Johnny flick eyes smile and he lets
of a little giggle and the scene cuts
SCENE 8 WAREHOUSE NIGHT
Darkness covers the area all we see are 2 lights as a POV
of Vinnie under these two lights are two people hanging
they look toutred and have duct tape over their mouths all
this is in a fish eye lens.
Johnny flick eyes comes into shot and prances towards the
camera.
11
JOHNNY FLICK EYES
You gotta learn kid
He says as looking into the camera. He raises his hands as
if to start flicking to the camera and it cuts.
AS CREDITS START ROLLING WE CAN HEAR VINNIES SCREAMS.
THROUGHOUT THE CREDITS.
THE END

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Johnny flick eyes draft 2

  • 1. “JOHNNY FLICK EYES” By Jacob Grevatt Jacob Grevatt grevattj.student@ringwood.hants.sch.uk 01425 475000
  • 2. 2 FADE IN: SCENE 1: BEDROOM - MORNING Fades into a close up of the protagonist VINNIE. His face is wet and sweaty and he has his eyes closed. A song is playing while he is staring up just behind the camera. The Camera slowly pans out showing he is laying on his in his room. The credits are appearing as various close ups / pans of his room and what he has in it the credits. This is interrupted when the big don bursts into the room. THE DON Come on Get off your ass a come help deliver this package. VINNIE Seriously right now can’t it wait, I’m in the middle of something THE DON I aint asking THE DON grabs his arm and pulls him up from the bed Vinnie proceeds to get up and picks his suit up from the floor. Vinnie gets dressed. A series of close ups of him getting dressed play. Vinnie picks up his gun from the desk and puts it in his jacket. Then follow Vinnie down the stairs SCENE 2 STREET MORNING It then cuts to Vinnie closing the door of his house following while beside The Don. VINNIE So whos this package for, anyway? THE DON Same as usual… (STOPS WALKING AND TURNS TO VINNIE)
  • 3. 3 You’re not supposed to ask, trust me kid it’s for the better. (THE DON PROCEEDS TO WALK.) VINNIE Come on Don Why don’t you trust me your making ME deliver them I deserve to know who their too THE DON No Kid and that’s final I am not telling you. All you gotta do is take the package and deliver it to Tinge. He can handle everything from there. VINNIE Fine okay but I swear on my mamas life if I see that back stabbing, no good, rat Tony massu- THE DON IF you see the PRIVILAGED, WELL-ESTEEMED Tony Masmurattoes you will be formal and kind and do what he says. Ya understand VINNIE Yes, yeah I get it Don THE DON Look trust me the Masmurattoes are a family you don’t want to mess with. Not to mention Johnny VINNIE Johnny who? THE DON Just forget I said anything Close up of Vinnies face from the side with an intrigued expression.
  • 4. 4 SCENE 3 CARAVAN LATE MORNING Cut to The Don and Vinnie both now entering a small caravan two other men are there talking and piles of packages are on each side of the table MAN 1 So then I say it wasn’t a porker it has a painter!! Both men laugh hysterically. THE DON We’re here for the package. They instantly stop laughing and have a mean sneer on their face. THE DON Cmon chop chop. The two men proceed to look for a package and find a small 2x5cm box and they then hand it to Vinnie. VINNIE Wow all this fuss over something this small. Really THE DON Look the size dosent matter all you have to worry about is delivering this to the Masmurattoes. Vinnie is visibly about to object
  • 5. 5 THE DON I know, I know. Don’t even start to complain but if any harm I mean any harm comes to this package. There’s going to be some serious problems with the Masmurattoes. This is some high steak stuff kid so don’t mess it up. Vinnie has an annoyed look all over his face he looks like he is about to say something. Yet stops. Vinnie storms out. The don gives a look to the two men. THE DON Whatchu Lookin at, get back to work. FADE INTO SCENE 4 SCENE 4 STREET MIDDAY Vinnie is walking on the pavement, with the package in his hand on his way to cross the corner he sees Tony Masmurattoes hanging out with his friends, Vinnie tries to turn the other way until Tony notices Vinnie. TONY Vinnie. Hey!! Vinnie turns back around and starts walking towards tony THE DON Hey Tony How are ya. Tony is about to talk but Vinnie keeps going. VINNIE Well it’s been great tony really has but I’ve got to get going got this package.
  • 6. 6 TONY Uh uh uh Vinnie. Come on I didn’t even get to say a word let’s have a chat come on. VINNIE Look Tony by no means any disrespect but your bustin my balls over here I gotta deliver this package and your kind of in my way it would be great if you could leave me alone and let me do my business. Tries to walk past him. TONY (Laughing) no disrespect (Laughing) NO Disrespect huh you know who I am I’m Tony god damn- VINNIE Masmurattoes yeah I’ve heard it before TONY Okay pin him down boys VINNIE What come on Tony you can’t be serious TONY Oh I’m dead serious come on boys get I’m TONY No no no not this time not again I can’t… Tony’s goons charge at Vinnie, Vinnie Starts shaking and pulls his gun out TONY Woah, Woah look Vinnie no need for guns
  • 7. 7 VINNIE NO I refuse to be humiliated by a scum Masmurattoes. TONY What did you just say Jerk I’ll kill you- Tony charges towards Vinnie, Vinnie reacts instinctively and pulls the trigger killing Tony Vinnie realizes his mistak and strts to shake uncontrollably a silence follows the gun shot with a pure shock from Tony’s Two goons The music (Uber Capitalist Death Trade – Cabbage) starts playing and the chase scene initiates. SERIES OF SHOTS (over music) SHOT A – Shot of Vinnie running from the two men coming towards the camera SHOT B – (In a minute and a half chase scene involving a series of quick cuts with jumps and stunts ECT.) SCENE 5 BEDROOM MIDDAY Vinnie escapes back to his home as the door shuts and the music stops. Vinnie relaxes and slumps on the door eventually Vinnie gets up and reaches for his suitcase places it on the bed and starts packing. It then cuts to Vinnie walking out of his flat with his suitcase and a baseball bat falls behind him and hits him on the head as soon as it does the scene cuts FADE INTO SCENE 6 SCENE 6 DONHOUSE NIGHT
  • 8. 8 Vinnie wakes up with a douse of water with a bag over his head in a POV shot. We then get a medium shot of the don and Vinnie his hands are tied to a chair he is sitting on. The Big don is sitting in front of him also on a chair but with the back between his legs. VINNIE Look Don there’s gotta be a misunderstanding here I aint done nothing wrong. THE DON Shut it son. You really don’t know what you’ve done…… You’re really think I’m that stupid VINNIE No Don of course not I’m sorry I didn’t mean to kill him hell I didn’t even mean to shot him please don I’m sorry let me go THE DON Masmurattoes, One thing I said was to not mess with the Masmurattoes and you go ahead and break it VINNIE Okay I’m sorry I really am now please Don let me go THE DON You understand, Do you have any clue what you’ve done here, I can’t help you. (Sigh) look they sent Johnny Flick eyes after you….. You don’t know who he is do you. VINNIE Well ive heard of him I think isn’t he the guy with the really big moustac..
  • 9. 9 THE DON No you idiot this guys a ruthless killer. Want me to tell you what he does with his victims , huh he hangs em on meat hooks then when they awake he flicks their eyes every day for 5 hours until you could barely see out of em then he waits until they heal then he does it all over again. You aint gonna starve or die of thirst he’s gotcha hooked up to em machines when he wants you to starve he’s gonna starve ya when he wants ya to wake he’s gonna wake ya he’s an unstoppable force. SERIES OF SHOTS (OVER NARRATION/SPEECH) SHOT A - a close up pan from left to right over Johnny flick eyes smile. SHOT B – During this little speech a little montage of Johnny flick eyes is played. VINNIE Wwwell what can I THE DON Nothin and I can’t help you at all (Sigh) Unties Vinnie VINNIE What what are you doing keep me here THE BIG DON I told you I can’t help you Hugs Vinnie and a tear rolls down his cheek Okay now go go on get out go
  • 10. 10 Vinnie gets thrown out and makes his way to the gate exiting to the street SCENE 7 STREET NIGHT Vinnie is slowly walking down the street cold and wet with his suit case in his hand. In some shots we can see JOHNNY FLICK EYES behind him. VINNIE It’s not real Vinnie come on it’s not real. Vinnie keeps walking and sees a man under the streetlight with a suit and hat all he can see is his smile JOHNNY FLICK EYES Oh I’m real Vinnie Vinnie takes another hesitated step forward to get a good look at his face. The realization kicks in and Vinnie looks like he’s about to say something but hands come from the dark behind him covering his mouth and dragging him away. JOHNNY FLICK EYES Why don’t I take you out back? We get on last look at Johnny flick eyes smile and he lets of a little giggle and the scene cuts SCENE 8 WAREHOUSE NIGHT Darkness covers the area all we see are 2 lights as a POV of Vinnie under these two lights are two people hanging they look toutred and have duct tape over their mouths all this is in a fish eye lens. Johnny flick eyes comes into shot and prances towards the camera.
  • 11. 11 JOHNNY FLICK EYES You gotta learn kid He says as looking into the camera. He raises his hands as if to start flicking to the camera and it cuts. AS CREDITS START ROLLING WE CAN HEAR VINNIES SCREAMS. THROUGHOUT THE CREDITS. THE END