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OTS= Overthe shoulder
Shot
Number
Shot Description Audio/Dialogue
1. Fade intoclose up of Vinnie eyes,hisface issweaty,He then
closeshiseyes
Music plays
2. Slowpanover Vinniesbedwhile creditsstartrolling.Medium
shot.Credit– Directoretc.
“”
3. Close uppan of hisroom. Shelf –photodeodorant,gunetc.
Creditsstill rollinginbottomrightandleft.Cast – James
Morris as …….
“”
4. Close uppan overfloorthere isdirtyclothesonthe floor
creditsstill rolling.
“”
5. SuddeninterruptionThe Donenters the room.Mediumshot
of donenteringthe room
“Come on Get off yourass a come help
deliverthispackage”
6. Vinnie getsupfromhisbedlooksexhaustedMediumshotof
Vinnie anddonapart
“Seriouslyrightnow .cant it wait,I’min
the middle of something”
7. Mediumclosup of dons face “I aintasking”
8 Mediumotsof Vinnie beingpulledupbythe don Diegetic
9. Close upof Vinnie pullinguptrousersfromthe backof ankle “”
10. Close upof Vinnie doinghisshirtup “”
11. Close upof Vinnie straighteninghistie “”
12 Close upof vinnie puttingonandadjustinghiswatch “”
13. Close upof Vinnie doingupbeltandtuckinginshirt “”
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14. Highangle shotof Vinnie puttingguninthe back of his
trousersandVinnie runningoutof room
“”
15. Mediumshotof Vinnie runningdownstairs “”
16. Scene 2 – mediumshotof vinnie closinghisfrontdoorthe
shotfollowsvinnie catchupto don
Diegetic
“So whosthispackage for anyway”
17 Mediumshotof Vinnie followingbehindThe Don “Same as Usual”
18 Still followingpanof medium/longshotof Vinniefollowing
the don.Don stopsand turns and proceedstowalk
“Your not supposedtoask,trust me kid
itsfor the better.”
19 Medium/Longshotof themwalkingside byside andthe
camera follows themturnintoacorner
“Come on Don whydon’tyoutrust me
your makingME deliverthemIdeserve
to know whotheirfor”
20 Medium/Close upof The two walking “No Kidandthat’s final Iam not telling
you.All yougotta do istake the
package and deliverittotinge.He can
handle everythingfromthere”
21 Extreme close upof vinnieslips “Fine okaybut I swearto godif I see
that back stabbing,nogood,rat Tony
Mas-”
22 Close upof The Dons Face “If yousee the PRIVLEGED,WELL
ESTEEMED Tony Masmurattoes you
will be formal andkindanddo what he
says.Ya understand”
23 Mediumclose upof donsface “I aintasking”
24 Mediumshotof the twoof themfromside “Yes,yeahI get itDon”
25 Medium/ longshotof the twocontinue towalk “Look trustme the Masmurattoesare a
familyyoudon’twantto messwith.Not
to mentionJohnny”
26. Medium/longshotfromotherdirection “JohnnyWho?”
27. Long shotof two “Just forgetIsaidanything”
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28 Close upof vinniesface Diegetic
29. Scene-3medium/longshotof the twoenteringthe caravan “”
30. Highangle shotof Vinnie anddonastheyenterthe room but
alsoencapsulatingthe twomenatthe table
“So thenI saidit wasn’ta porkerithas a
painter”
31. Mediumshotof twomenacross the table “laughing”
32 Mediumshotof donand twomen “Were here for the package”
33 Mediumshotof twomensfaces “They stop laughing”
34 Mediumshotof the twomenlookingfothe box underthe
table
Diegetic
35 Close upof box beingslided overthe table box is2x5 cm in
lengthandwidth
“”
36 Mediumshotof Vinnie anddonfromthe side “Wow all thisfussoversomethingthis
small.really”
37 Mediumshotof vinnie anddon “Look the size doesn’tmatterall you
have to worryabout isdeliveringthisto
the masmurattoes”
38 VMediumshotof vinnie abouttoobject “Diegetic”
39 Mediumshotof don “I know,I know.Don’tevenstartto
complainbutif any harm I meanany
harm comesto thispackage.Theres
goingto be some seriousproblemswith
the masmurrattoes.Thisissome high
steakstuff kidsodon’t messitup”
40 Close upof vinniesface Diegetic
41 Highangle shotof vinnie leaving “”
42. Mediumshotof the donand two men “Whatchu lookin atgetback to work”
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43 Scene 4 – Mediumshotof vinnie panashe followsacorner “”
44 The mediumshotturnsintoots vinnie hearsdialogue then
turns around
“Vinnie.Hey”
45. Still the otsof vinnie “Hey tonyHow are ya”
46. Mediumshotof the two “Wel its beengreattonyreallyhasbut
ive gotto get goinggot thispackage”
47. Mediumshotof twoopposedeachother “Uh uhuh vinnie come oon
I didn’tevengettosay a
wordletshave a chat come
on.” More dialogue “Look
Tony byno meansany
disrespectbut your
bustinmyballsoverhere I
gotta deliverthispackage
and yourkindof inmy way
it wouldbe greatif you
couldleave me alone and
letme do my business. “
48. OTS ofvinnie lookingattonyand goons Diegetic
“(Laughing) nodisrespect(laughing) No
disrespecthuhyouknow whoI am Im
tonygod damn”
49 Back to mediumshotof the two opposed “Masmurrattoesyeahive heardit
before”
50 Closershotof the two “Okay pinhimdownboys.”
“What come on Tony you
can’t be serious”
“Oh I’m dead serious
come on boys get I’m”
51 Close upof Vinniesface “NO nono not thistime notagain I
cant…”
52 Mediumshotof the twoand goonscharging at himbut stop
whenvinnie pullshisgunout
“No Kidandthat’s final Iam not telling
you.All yougotta do istake the
package and deliverittotinge.He can
handle everythingfromthere”
53 Extreme close upof the gun trigger “Woah, woahlookvinnie noneedfor
guns”
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54 Back to mediumshotused earlier “What didyou justsay jerk Ill kill you”
55 Aftergunshot cuts to silence andbirdchirping andcutsto
longshotof vinnie fromthe backLong shotfollowsthem
aroundthe corner
“Music – ubercapitalistdeathtrade -
cabbage”
56 Mediumshotof the vinnie runningtowardsandpastcamera
and twogoons
“”
57 Mediumshotfollowingvinnie running awayfromgoonsintoa
corner
“”
58. Medium/longshot of vinnie andgoonschasing “”
59. Mediumshotof twogoonsrunningto a bridge stoping
apanningdowntocheck underthe bridge the – camera pans
down – they dontfindanythingandkeepgoing
“”
60 Mediumshotof Vinnie comingoutof bushesandrunningin
the otherdirection.
“”
61. Scene 5 – Vinnie enteringbackintohishouse – distressed
mediumshot
Diegetic
62. Close upof vinnie closingdoorandslumpingdown “”
63. Mediumshotvinnie gettinguprunningupstairsandpacking
up hisclothesinsuitcase
“”
64 Close upof vinnie puttingclothesintosuitcase “”
65 Close upof vinnie zippingitup “”
66 Mediumshotof vinnie leavinghouse andgettinghitinthe
head
“”
67 Scene 6 – Povof darknessandbag beingliftedoverhead “”
68 Mediumshotof donand vinnie opposed “Look donthersgotta be a
misunderstandinghere Iaintdone
nothingwrong”
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69 Close upof donslips “Shut itson youreallydon’tknowwhat
you’ve done……youthinkI’mthat
stupid”
70 OTS of vinnie lookingatthe Don “No donof course notim sorry I didn’t
meanto kill him hell Ididn’tevenmean
to shoothim.Please donimsorrylet
me go”
71 OTS pan fromthe dons directionlookingatvinnie “Masmurrattoes,one thing I saidwas
not to messwiththe massmurattoes
and yougo and breakit”
“ Okay imsorry I reallyamnowplease
donLet me go”
72 Close uppan overthe donsface. “You understand, Do you
have any clue what you’ve
done here, I can’t help you.
(Sigh) looktheysentJohnny
Flick eyes after you….. You
don’t know who he is do
you. “
“Well ive heard of him I
think isn’t he the guy with
the really big moustac..”
73 Seriesof shotoverdonspeech “ No youidiotthisguysa
ruthlesskiller.Wantme to
tell youwhathe doeswith
hisvictims,huh he hangs
emon meathooksthen
whentheyawake he flicks
theireyeseverydayfor5
hoursuntil youcouldbarely
see outof emthenhe waits
until theyheal thenhe does
it all overagain.You aint
gonnastarve or die of thirst
he’sgotcha hookedupto
emmachineswhenhe
wantsyou to starve he’s
gonnastarve ya whenhe
wantsya to wake he’s
gonnawake ya he’san
unstoppable force.”
74. SHOT A - a close uppan from lefttorightoverJohnnyflick
eyessmile.
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75. SHOT B – mediumshotwithfisheye lensof Johnnyflickeyes
pan up
“”
76 SHOT C – Slowpanclose up of Johnnyflickeyes,EYES “”
77. SHOT D – SlowPanfrom Johnnyflickeyesfromhisfeettohis
smile.
“”
78. Fade intoclose up of Vinnie face “Wwel whatcan i”
“NuthinandI cant helpyouat all(sigh)”
79. Mediumshotof donuntiyingVinnie “What what are you doing.Keepme
here”
80. Mediumshotof the two “I toldyou I cant helpyou”
81 Close upof Donsface over Vinnie “Okay now go go onget out go”
82 Mediumgot of vinnie gettingchuckedoutandwalkingtoward
the camera out the gate andon the stree everynow and
againwe get glimpsesinthe background scene 7
“Its notreal vinnie come onItsnotreal”
83 Mediumshotof vinnie underastreetlight “Oh imreal vinnie”
84 “” takesa hesitatedstep Diegetic
85 Close upof vinnie realingthenturningaroundonlytoget
knockedout
“”
86 Pansup to lookat Johnnyflickeyeslookingatthe camera “Why don’tI take ya out back”
87 Scene 8 – Fisheye povshot handingbodys toleftand right
darknesssurroundsthemJohnnycome uptothe cameraand
looksdirectlyatthe camera andraiseshisfingers
“Ya gottalearnkid”
88 Creditsroll tothe soundof vinniestouture
