1. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback James Fox
There are no particularly changes
needed for our communication skills
as we got 100%. Our group just
needs to keep their consistency with
their communication skills.
From this question we know that we
did a good job of making our film
pitch professional as the ratings are
of higher rather than lower. Our
group now just needs to make sure
we keep are persistency by making
our film pitch as professional as
possible.
This question depicts the excitement
of our audience and by the results
most of the audience thought our
film pitch was of professional
standards. Our group just need to up
our consistency of professionalism.
The results of the questions show
that more than 90% of our
feedback said we addressed the
film pitch correctly are fluently.

2. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback James Fox
The idea of our short film was the
Two Photographers and was mainly
from the results classed as a near
professional standard film pitch.
Our group’s main strengths are the
clear and concise verbal delivery,
clear eye contact and confidence
when answering questions. To
exceed in improving or film pitch is
to make the originality of our idea
more projectable.
Our main focus for improvement is
the use of more open and relaxed
body language.
Our groups main priority is to now improve on the mistakes we made during our practice pitch and
make sure we are ready and prepared for the actual pitch. This collection of improves consist of being
more relaxed and more of a confident stance and outlook to the audience. This will give the audience
a good, positive look to our group. Also, being able to confidently answer questions which we did
verbally well but feedback shows there is some sort of improvement needed.