Charlotte Bracken provides feedback on a film pitch presentation to a panel. She suggests improving eye contact, being more relaxed and excited about the film idea, asking rhetorical questions to engage the panel, and providing more detail on inspirational films when pitching. Overall, the feedback was positive about the film idea, but more practice, research, and confidence would help the group deliver a more polished and professional pitch.

1. Charlotte Bracken
For this question, there is no
need for any changes in the
script on making it clearer as
it was clearly communicated
to the group.
For this question, I think that the
group can seem more professional
and enthusiastic about the film by
using a more relaxed and excited
tone of voice and look as if you really
connect with the film idea and it’s
the best film idea out.
For this question, to get the panel to get
more excited about the film, we could
evolve them more. Using more eye contact
and rhetorical questions to get them
thinking more about how the story will go.
For this question, more direct eye
contact will be needed to engage
with the panel to address them when
delivering our pitch.
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2. Charlotte Bracken
For this question, give more detail on the
inspirational films we have chosen we shall
comment on the mise en scene, camera
angles and effects.
For the questions 6 & 7, we shall look
closely at what the survey shows to be
our weaknesses and things we can
improve on and take it into account. By
adding more direct eye contact and
setting off a more relaxed atmosphere,
pitching the idea will seem more
professional and may jus invite the
panel to listen and take in what is being
said. Also, answering questions is a key
focus we as a group need to focus on, by
doing a bit more research on the film
inspirations, budget, directors and stars
we can answer questions confidently
which will improve the professional
standards. Also using images on a
PowerPoint in the background will help
the panel establish a clearer view on
what we wish to achieve.
In conclusion to reading the feedback, I think that the overall general view from the audience which we practiced our
pitch in front of was impressed with the idea that we had. Little things such as more research, practicing the pitch
even more in front of people and referring to more possible influences or directors which may be used would help
the group a lot more. Helping build the confidence for each individual will help set off a more relaxed environment
enabling everyone to use more direct eye contact, the confidence to answer questions freely when delivering the
pitch. Becoming friendly with the panel will help again with delivering a more professional pitch.
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