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- 1. “The Pitch” - due Wed, Dec 6
One to two minute presentations - trying to “sell us” on reading your paper
10 pts - uploaded to BbLearn
10 bonus pts - presented in class
5 bonus pts - responding to presentations in class
Includes:
- 1 image: photograph (perhaps chosen from visual analysis)
- Explanation of what image is/ what it’s doing for your argument
- A “set-up”: facts and knowledge audience already has
(pulled from introduction or background)
- A closer look: something new revealed in research that audience wouldn’t
assume
(pulled from a source from the body section)
- Why it matters: What would we be at risk of misunderstanding, if we didn’t
investigate this topic?
(the “So What?”/ look into the future)
Transitions:
Tie each shared piece of info together. Examples:
- How did you come to this topic? (image explanation → set-up)
- “However,” “When I looked closer,” “What I discovered was” (set-up to closer
look)
- How does the new info you’ve introduced change our thinking? (closer look →
why it matters)
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My example:
- 2. [Set-up]
“These images are a selection of scenes from recent Indie films. Have you seen them?
The chance is, most likely not. We all know when the new Thor movie comes out,
because of advertising. In fact, the average production budget of a major studio film in
2007 was $106 million (this data from the Motion Picture Association of America). I
didn’t even really know “Indie” films, what’s known as “independent” films - aka, made
outside of a major production studio - existed, until I moved to a college town with an art
scene.
[Closer look]
That’s because Indie films can only spend a fraction of the amount on advertising: the
general rule being, however much the film cost to make, is what you can spend to
market it - most of these budgets falling under $1 million (filmindependent.org).
Yet, these films often have plots and storylines that have more women, minority, and
other represented characters in them - up to twice as many as blockbusters, according
to a study done by the National Endowment for the Arts.
[Why it matters]
So if we don’t investigate Indie films, the appeal of them, and why, we are missing out
on important voices, of people that make up our country.
(Transitions in grey)