2. FADE IN:
EXT. SHOP . DAY
camera pans across the shop a a low angle to reveal the
outside of the shop and the main character Red, while
his friend dan is in the shop he waits outside.
RED
(rubbing his eyes)
Jamal walks out of the shop and the camera shifts focus
to him for a moment
JAMAL
(shakes reds shoulder)
yo, u good?
RED
(sleepy voice)
yeah I'm good just ain’t been
sleeping a lot these days.
JAMAL
maybe its the rumour about that
murderer?
RED
nah, its something else man
JAMAL
theres a lot of crazy stuff going
on lately but i gotta go fam.
RED
yeye cool in abit
Characters leave each other and Jamal walks off from the
shop while Red stays at the shop.
HYPER LAPSE OF
CLOCK
WIDE SHOT OF HOUSE EXT
3. .2
INT . HOUSE . NIGHT
The day is over and Red is trying to go to sleep however
something is preventing him from sleeping, Red sits in
his room thinking about why he cant sleep.
he begins to hear scratching noises and creepy whispers
that begin to get louder as he feels isolated
RED
Something lurks in the dark
corners of my mind, but i cant
seem to find the reason why im
being troubled
FADE TO BLACK
Jamal and Red sit outside the house and talk about random
stuff, they then go somewhere and see something, red
believes this is the thing keeping him awake.
MID SHOT OF THEM SITTING
JAMAL
yo u slept good.
RED
(SOUNDING TIRED)
Nah bro same thing as usual, but i
think i know what the problem is.
Jamal
well thats a step closer to sleep
i guess.
RED
True but I've gotta go, i need to
do something
JAMAL
Alright, bell me tomorrow and we
can link up with the others
4. .3
RED
Okay
JAMAL
Just let me know if u need
anything bro, you seem down
RED
Nah I'm okay don't worry about me
JAMAL
Alright bro call me tomorrow
init see u later
RED
LATER
FADE THEN CUT TO
SHOT OF DARK HOUSE
INT.HOUSE.NIGHT
RED SITS IN THE ROOM AND THE TRUTH ABOUT HIS CHARACTER IS
REVEALED IN THIS SCENE AND ALSO REVE
RED
i need sleep, if i carry on like
this its not gonna end well, but
in the end, aren't we all sleepy.
5. .i
SCENE INDEX
EXT. SHOP . DAY 1.........................................
INT . HOUSE . NIGHT 2....................................
INT.HOUSE.NIGHT 3........................................
RED SITS IN THE ROOM AND THE TRUTH ABOUT HIS CHARACTER IS
REVEALED IN THIS SCENE AND ALSO REVE 3...................
