1. Write to Learn 2014
Developing a Love of Languages:
Approaches to Writing for English
Language Learners
Jinju Lee
Yang Wang
Amy Lannin
University of Missouri
2. Intro
Approaches to Writing for English Language Learners
Freewriting defined:
• Writing without stopping for a set time
• Writing without censoring, editing, or
judging
• Writing without fear of audience
• Writing freely for self
• Writing to sustain thought and
language
3. Intro
Approaches to Writing for English Language Learners
Freewriting Routine:
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Write non-stop
No distractions
Follow tangents
Try not to censor your writing
6. How did we get there?
The number of English learners in China:
about 200-350 million (Yang, 2006).
A typical scene: a teacher, a textbook and
30~200 students sitting in rows in a classroom.
Students’ goal: get high scores, seek for jobs,
know the outside world and connect to it.
Improving writing instruction and practices
has continued to be a concern for English
teachers and educators.
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8. Research Questions
What happens when English learners
freewrite in class?
How does freewriting influence their
English language learning?
9. About the class
The context: a EFL classroom at a major university
in mid-China.
Participants: 3 undergraduates majored in English
Language, 20 ~ 22 years old.
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11. About the class
Students met for academic writing twice a week, 90-135
minutes each time.
Started class with a 7 minutes freewriting.
The teacher selected all writing prompts.
The topics ranged from campus life to politics, from
personal story to hot topic.
They wrote freely on paper, then volunteered to share
their writing in a big group with their classmates.
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13. Data Sources
Students’ pre-semester-survey (writing habits,
interests);
mid-semester survey (changes, like/dislike);
end-semester survey (benefits, challenges,
suggestions);
students’ writing samples (handwrote);
classroom teacher’s teaching journal.
All collected data were triangulated for analysis
(Yin, 2003).
14. Freewriting Prompts
Electricity is a recent discovery. Think of 12 things to do when
there’s no power. Which one do you think is the most important
one, why?
Make a list of 10 things that happened to you this month. They
can be funny, embarrassing, happy, or infuriating. Then pick one
from your list and write about it.
Begin a story with “There was once a chance I didn’t get… ”
Write a letter to the 10-year old child you had been.
Write about one of the most difficult decisions you’ve made in
your life.
Begin your writing with “If I had the power to change something,
I would change… ”
It was Erica Jong who said, “If you don’t risk anything, you risk
more.” Write about what this means to you.
Laptop — A Necessity for College Students?
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Not write regularly. Write about happy or sad
things, write to record.
• In Chinese, forced to learn many expressions,
read; in English, recite words + sentences,
reading report, copy good quotes.
16. “I want to write, but I can’t write very good. So
I don’t like (to) write very much. I think
writing is a good way to express one’s opinion
and feeling about things and people. It can
help you to be known by others.”
“When I (am) disappointed, it give(s) me
hope.”
17. Prompt: Electricity is a recent discovery. Think of 12 things to do when there’s no
power. Which one do you think is the most important one, why?
18. Mid-way
“I think it is a good way to test our ability
of writing and thinking. We can write
what we can think about the theme(the
prompt).”
Like to write about his own experiences.
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OK in writing in both languages
• Like to write essays, journal, feelings, social justice
• In Chinese: read fables, fairy tales, fiction, various
genres; in English, read books, vocabulary,
language sense.
• “To be frank, I don’t write quite often and I write
twice or more a week. I like to write some essays
recording my recent life and my feelings about
things happened to me recently and how do I think
about them.”
25. Think of a product which is dead essential
in your daily life and write about it.
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A good writer in Chinese, but not in English.
Likes to write, journal, prose.
Something touching her, social justice.
Reading, travelling.
Learn to write in Chinese – reading;
in English - classes, reading samples, practice
29. Rachel talks about freewriting
I thought it was fresh and challenging because I
usually don’t have the habit of writing freely without
a contemplation.
I like the way in which you give us a topic or a theme
then we think of the structure and wording. Perhaps
you can try another way in which we write whatever
we choose. That’s also a flexible way.
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33. Freewriting provided more chances for ELL
students to practice their language knowledge.
practice vocabulary, sentences structures they
had learned from their intensive and extensive
reading class.
motivated to read more materials, as they were
eager to learn more words actively to express
themselves and their voices.
34. Freewriting improved ELL students’ writing fluency,
especially within a set time limit.
They reported they wrote more and more fluently
in the time limit.
They reported they were able to write
comparatively high-qualified essays: the format,
structure, word usage and content.
35. Freewriting lowered ELL students’ affective filter
(Steve Krashen).
Students get rid of the fear of writing, realize the
importance of writing in English language
learning
It builds their confidence, and students become
to love English writing.
36. ELL students wrote out their voices through
freewriting and became critical thinkers.
a chance to write for pleasure, because the
topics were less academic.
opportunity to write out their voices.
They became more concerned about their daily
and social life; they dig into the depth of their
understanding of social issues; they reflected on
their own learning and life and became critical.
37. Freewriting motivated ELL students to learn
English language.
Freewriting encourage students to read and
learn more vocabulary, sentence structure and
other new language knowledge.
They realized reading and writing developed
with each other.
They knew their own writing better and knew
what they needed to improve.
38. Implication
This study proved that freewriting could be used
in a language-learning classroom as an
important language practice, esp. writing
fluency.
Freewriting could be used to build English
learners’ confidence in writing and motivate
them to learn writing and reading.
Freewriting could be used to cultivate English
learners into critical thinkers.
40. Write to Learn 2014
W
hat Happens When ELL Use Freewriting in an English class?
: A Case Study: Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Jinju Lee, Doctoral Student
Dept. of Education
English Education
University of Missouri
42. Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Introduction
English is
the only
variable
International
students
Rebuild ELL’s
competencies
How to use
writing?
Researcher’s
Positionality
Educational
strategies
43. Introduction
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Purpose of Study
Using
Freewriting in
an ELL class
What Happens to
the Second
Language
Learning?
A qualitative case study to understand how ELL
students use freewriting in an English class
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46. Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Methods
The Major Methods for Data Collection
Work
Samples
Observation
Interviews
Picture
Survey
Field Notes
47. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Writing Development: Rich context, Complex sentences
First writing on Aug 22nd
Last writing on Nov 7th
48. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Review Note
Review note:
Common mistakes that
ELLs frequently made
in writing and speaking
Phrasal expressions
49. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Writing to Learn: Reviewing lessons of the day
Reviewing lessons:
ex) use of –ed vs. –ing
50. Data Analysis
Picture Survey
?: Confusion
!: Satisfaction
: Positive attitudes
Right or wrong?:
Metacognition
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
51. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Interview Excerpts:
Metacognition
“..I am simultaneously thinking whether I am writing correctly or
incorrectly while writing.”
“While writing, I started thinking about what I want to write
about or what I am thinking now…….then, I found that I am
simultaneously thinking of better expressions to write.”
“I am thinking if I am using appropriate expressions and
accurate grammar.”
52. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Interview Excerpts:
Writing to Learn
“I just started writing not thinking that I am writing…then, when
I got stuck while writing because I didn‟t know how to use the
correct grammar, l tried to express my thoughts using simple
sentences and easy grammar instead...”
“ ..through freewriting, I came to know that I could convey my
thoughts and emotions well enough by using simple vocabulary
like „make‟, „have‟, „get‟. I misunderstood by thinking that I had
to use only professional language...”
53. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Interview Excerpts:
Writing to Learn
“I like to tell future students who will do the freewriting
activity to please not get stressed out or burdened, but
that it is okay to make mistakes when writing in
English…and it is okay to write in Korean when they
get stuck. Feeling stressed or burdened slows
language learning, so I want to tell them to feel free to
write”
54. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Interview Excerpts:
Learning Strengths & Weaknesses as an Independent
Writer
“When the teacher gave a mini lesson, I found out
what I had written the freewriting incorrectly, and
decided to correct them in the next writing.”
“I found out that I tend to use formal expressions
unnaturally; Expressions which we studied in Korea.
And I think that interrupts the flow of thinking and
writing.”
55. Data Analysis
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Interview Excerpts:
Learning Strengths & Weakness as an Independent
Writer
“I realized that I spend too much time thinking
about grammatical rules when freewriting. So when
I am confused with which preposition I need to use
and I become stuck because of that, I just kept
writing as words came to me.”
“I think using the appropriate tense is confusing.”
56. Findings
Learning Writing
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Get More Familiar with English Writing
(Increasing the joy of writing, decreasing the fear)
Learn How to Construct Sentences
Learn How to Choose Words
Developing of Context in Individual
Writing
57. Findings
Writing to Learn
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Learn How to Approach Learning
Reviewing Lessons of the Day
Knowing Weaknesses & Strengths as
a Language Learner
Revisiting the Unanswered Questions from
Lessons or Asking General Questions
Applying Newly Acquired Linguistic
Knowledge to Daily Conversation
58. Findings
Independent
Learner
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Focus on Inner Voice and Emotion
Reflect on What to Write & How to Craft
Their Writing Well (Metacognition)
Self – Correction
Self – Monitoring
59. Implications
Implications
Implementation of
Freewriting in an
ELL Curriculum
Integration of Writing in an ELL classroom
Increasing Reflective Thinking→Becoming
an Independent Language Learner
All Level-Friendly → Beginner to Advanced
Writing to Develop Other Language Skills
Using Freewriting in Other Content Areas
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63. Please post your comments and questions
at https://todaysmeet.com/freewriting
Drive my mind into thinkingWriting in a stream of consciousness
English is spoken by a large number of population around the world and is learned as a foreign language in almost all Asian countries. The number of English learners in China is estimated about 200-350 million (Yang, 2006). However, most of them learn English without a rich speaking environment or learning materials and equipments. Here is a typical scene: a teacher, a textbook and 50 to 100 students sitting in rows in a classroom. Students work hard to get high scores in texts and exams, cherish all the chances to learn English so that they are able to compete for better jobs, know the outside world and connect to it.
Academic writing is critical for English as a Foreign Language (EFL) students to learn a target language. Improving writing instruction and practices has continued to be a concern for English teachers and educators. Freewriting as a writing practice is widely-used in Language Arts classroom of English speaking countries. What happens when English learners free write in class? How would freewriting influence their foreign language learning?
This qualitative study was designed according to the guidelines for case study (Creswell, 2007; Stake, 1995; Yin 2003). This single case is using freewriting in an EFL classroom. The context of this study is set in a major university in mid-China. Participants are 32 undergraduates majored in English Language, 4 boys and 28 girls. Their age ranges from 20 to 22. Students met for academic writing twice a week, for 90-135 minutes each time with a ten-minute recess. Each time they started their class with a 5-10 minutes freewriting. The teacher selected all writing prompts for students every time considering students’ interests and national curriculum requirements. The topics ranged from campus life to politics, from personal story to public hot topic. They wrote freely on paper, then volunteered to share their writing in a big group with their classmates. Comments and feedbacks were provided from their peers as well as from the teacher.
Pre-survey was held in the beginning of this study to collect basic information of the participants’ writing habits and their identities as writers. Questions were asked on if they like to write, why they write, how to come up with ideas to write, what their favorite subjects were, their extra-curricular events, how to learn writing in their first language and second language. Mid-semester questionnaire was filled in the middle of this study, aiming at understanding how the students took freewriting and if they made any changes. Participants were asked questions on what they think of the freewriting they had done in class, what they would like to free write, what they liked or disliked about freewriting, what changes they had made since they freewrote. End-semester report was completed in the last class in order to study the students’ reflection on using freewriting. They reported on how they benefited from freewriting; the difficulties they have encountered when they freewrote in class and how they dealt with them; as well as the suggestions they would give to improve this activity for future. Students’ freewriting pieces were collected. They all handwrote and turned in their pieces by the end of each class. The classroom teacher kept teaching journals to record her teaching and her observation of students’ freewriting and language learning in class. All collected data were triangulated for analysis (Yin, 2003). All data gathered was repeatedly read by two researchers to discern patterns and findings.
It’s not totally free. We give promptsWe could try freewriting without given prompts.
Vocabulary, Read,Write moreShe self identified her difficulties and knew what she needed to work on. She knew herself better as a reader.
Freewriting provided more chances for EFL students to practice their language knowledge. Through freewriting, those EFL students had more chances to practice vocabulary, sentences structures they had learned from their intensive and extensive reading class. And they were motivated to read more materials, as they were eager to learn more words actively to express themselves and their voices.
Freewriting improved EFL students’ writing fluency, especially within a set time limit. The freewriting practice in class is always set in a certain limited period of time, usually 5-10 minutes under the supervision of the teacher. The set time limit gave them a good chance to practice writing fluency. They reported they wrote more and more fluently in the time limit. They had mock TEM and CET tests in class, writing a 150-200 words essay on a given topic in 30 minutes and they reported they wrote faster than before, and were able to achieve comparatively high-qualified essay with the help of freewriting practice in which they paid attention to, step by step, the format, diction, structure and content relevance within the set time limit.
Freewriting lowered EFL students’ affective filter. Freewriting helped EFL students gradually get rid of the fear of writing, realize the importance of writing in English language learning, and love English writing. Many of them began writing in English as a new hobby. Through getting rid of the fear and building their confidence, they lowered their affective filter to learn English.
EFL students wrote out their voices through freewriting and became critical thinkers. Freewriting provided a chance for them to write for pleasure, because the topics were less academic and all related to their daily life or Western culture. They appreciated this opportunity to write out their voices. They became more concerned about their daily and social life; they dig into the depth of their understanding of social issues; they reflected on their own learning and life and became critical.
They started to overcome the negative influence of their first language.
Learning a foreign language is learning a whole language as well. Through freewriting, EFL students were able to use whole language to write. Our study found that EFL learners benefit from freewriting. They practiced their language knowledge, improved their writing fluency, became more confident to write; expressed their own voices in their writing and embraced their own authorship. This study proved that freewriting could be used in a language-learning classroom as an important language practice. The sample size was small and this study was conducted in a unique classroom. The future study could be set in other contexts with more language learners with a variety of backgrounds.
The English language learners (ELL) are easily tempted to judge their own identity based on a level of English language
It is a qualitative case study to understand how ELL students use freewriting in an English programIn the research, freewriting is defined as a short & unfocused writing activity.
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