1. Draft Brief description of What did you think What changes did Summarise any Based on audience Any additional
your piece. you needed to you make and why? audience feedback feedback, what comments.
change and why? you received (positive further changes will
and negatives). you make?
Draft 1 No sound track was Reflection of Jenay N/A My teacher noticed Based on the
used and no camera was on the door. the reflection of feedback we got
angles were used. The Jenay. were going to the
video was shaking too. change the scene of
the door where
there’s a shadow of
Jenay.
Draft 2 There are no sound Continued error of We changed the My teacher and my We’re going to do the
effects and sound the phone call. shadow scene of brother said that the phone scene again.
tracks in the film. Jenay. phone scene looked it
jumped a scene.
Draft 3 Started adding text on Some sounds didn’t We changed the There were some We changed some
and sounds in. go in well with the phone error because errors in the credits text fonts and sizes.
film. it looked like we after we finished the
jumped scene which sound tracks we were
made people be going to re do them.
confused.
Draft 4 There were still no On YouTube the We changed the Our teacher asked us We started adding
transitions in the film. film was shaky. sound tracks which to put transitions in. some transitions still
this time it went need to work on it.
really well in with the
scenes.
Draft 5 Added more Change some We re-uploaded the Add more sound We added some
transitions and sound transitions to make film on YouTube it effects to the film. more sound effects
tracks in. it effective. wasn’t shaky which was longer.
anymore.
Draft 6 Added new transitions Changed the The transitions were Make sure the film I uploaded the film on
and make the sound storyline and make effective and it was uploaded on YouTube and also
track was going with sure everything was created great YouTube. made sure it was not

2. the scene and added correct. tension. shaky.
credits.
Final Draft Added everything in We didn’t change We changed the Everything was fine Based on the
just checking over if nothing because it storyline and made it just made sure it was feedback we did
we need to change was a finally draft. hangover. posted on my blog everything that
anything. and Jenay’s blog. Also, would make the
make sure it was on audience happy.
YouTube.