2. Target Mark Comment Write with appropriate structure and organisation. 1 2 3 4 5 I personally think that the way I structured my speech was quite well structured and also quite well organised. I could have done a bit more on my opening, but other then that, it was organised great! Use quality openings 1 2 3 4 5 I really liked my opening because the rhetorical questions that made you think about the cruelty to the moon bears. I also liked it because it wasn't too many questions so the audences didn’t get board. Use paragraphs effectively 1 2 3 4 5 I did use paragraphs effectively exept of the fact that my introduction was two paragraphs! Also that my opening had some facts that I could have saved! Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5 I thought I wrote with detail and was so good at making it sound disgusting so they felt sorry for the moon bears! But on the other hand, I could have writen with more facts Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively 1 2 3 4 5 I didn’t have enough facts to draw them to a conclusion too well. But with the facts I did have, I thought it was good!
