All techniques that need to be understood by Year 10, 11, 12 students (VCE). A short three word definition of the word, then an example, then the effect this has on the reader.
This is the powerpoint presentation from class (Thursday, January 19, 2012) covering embedded quotes, proper punctuation of quoted material, parenthetical citations and works cited pages.
A full list of the techniques needed to analyse persuasive pieces of writing. Great preparation for students working on this topic.
Video explaining each of the techniques can be accessed here: https://youtu.be/1VXcS1c4y8M
This is the powerpoint presentation from class (Thursday, January 19, 2012) covering embedded quotes, proper punctuation of quoted material, parenthetical citations and works cited pages.
A full list of the techniques needed to analyse persuasive pieces of writing. Great preparation for students working on this topic.
Video explaining each of the techniques can be accessed here: https://youtu.be/1VXcS1c4y8M
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This is the presentation I use in my middle school language arts classroom to introduce and work through the Notice and Note Non Fiction program by Beers and Probst.
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“The dialogue between pupils and teacher should be thoughtful, reflective, focused to evoke and explore understanding, and conducted so that all pupils have an opportunity to think and to express their ideas.” (p 12)
'pupils should be trained in self- assessment so that they can understand the main purposes of their learning and thereby grasp what they need to do to achieve.' (Black & Wiliam, 2010)
An annotation guide for the novel 'I am Malala: the girl who stood up for education and was shot in the head'. This text is on the HSC and VCE book list and requires students to extend their knowledge around commenting on texts that are true memoir accounts.
The video covers the themes, symbols and motifs that students could consider including different readings that can be used to inform their reading of the text.
Annotation Guide Insert
https://www.slideshare.net/skolber/i-am-malala-annotation-insert-annotation-guide-cheat-sheet
Why Pakistan hates Malala
https://foreignpolicy.com/2017/08/15/why-pakistan-hates-malala/
Why is Malala so hated in Pakistan?
https://www.quora.com/Why-is-Malala-Yousafzai-so-hated-in-Pakistan
Why do some people hate Malala
https://tribune.com.pk/story/1675753/6-people-hate-malala/
the ratcatchers daughter - annotation guideSteven Kolber
A remarkable story about a little-known tragedy in Australian history. 'A brilliant and richly evocative insight into a fascinating and little-known aspect of our past.' Jackie French, Australian Children's Laureate It's 1900. thirteen-year-old Issy McKelvie leaves school and starts her first job - very reluctantly - as a maid in an undertaking establishment. She thinks this is about as low as you can go. But there's worse to come. Issy becomes an unwilling rat-catcher when the plague - the Black Death - arrives in Australia. Issy loathes both rats and her father's four yappy, snappy, hyperactive rat-killing terriers. But when her father becomes ill it's up to Issy to join the battle to rid the city of the plague-carrying rats.
ratcatchers daughter - literary devices and examplesSteven Kolber
A remarkable story about a little-known tragedy in Australian history. 'A brilliant and richly evocative insight into a fascinating and little-known aspect of our past.' Jackie French, Australian Children's Laureate It's 1900. thirteen-year-old Issy McKelvie leaves school and starts her first job - very reluctantly - as a maid in an undertaking establishment. She thinks this is about as low as you can go. But there's worse to come. Issy becomes an unwilling rat-catcher when the plague - the Black Death - arrives in Australia. Issy loathes both rats and her father's four yappy, snappy, hyperactive rat-killing terriers. But when her father becomes ill it's up to Issy to join the battle to rid the city of the plague-carrying rats.
The ratcatchers daughter - annotating key quotesSteven Kolber
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A series of images to use in the comparison between Photograph 51 and The Penelopiad by Margaret Atwood and Anna Ziegler, respectively.
Photograph 51 Annotation Exemplar by Anna Ziegler [VCE 2019]Steven Kolber
Video is here: https://youtu.be/RrXSWS7Nt40
London, 1953. Scientists are on the verge of discovering what they call the secret of life: the DNA double helix. Providing the key is driven young physicist Rosalind Franklin. But if the double helix was the breakthrough of the 20th century, then what kept Franklin out of the history books? A play about ambition, isolation, and the race for greatness.
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(2008) Photograph 51: This play is one that she has noted as “opening many doors (for her) professionally”, due to its positive critical response and great deal of media attention due to the impressive casting of Nichole Kidman.
Slides and Worksheets available here: http://www.slideshare.net/skolber
Email me at :mrkolbersteaching@gmail.com
Backdrop images from: https://pixabay.com/en/users/hadania-19110/
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When the Taliban took control of the Swat Valley in Pakistan, one girl spoke out. Malala Yousafzai refused to be silenced and fought for her right to an education.
On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, when she was fifteen, she almost paid the ultimate price. She was shot in the head at point-blank range while riding the bus home from school, and few expected her to survive.
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2. Repetition of Sounds
Evidence: “Jared Jokes about Jews”
The effect this has on the reader:
Draws attention to the point. Makes the
reader more attentive to the words used.
Nice to read / listen to.
3. Personal, emotional, story
Evidence: “Recently my neighbour
experiences this problem first hand”
The effect this has on the reader:
It encourages the reader to show emotion
and see the topic as more related to them.
4. Words from expert
Evidence: Professor John Matthews said “it’s
true, trust me, I’m a professor”
The effect this has on the reader:
It must be true because a respected person
also says the same thing.
5. Pressures practical point
Example: “They are not to blame for the
accident, everyone knows it’s the driver of the
car”
The effect this has on the reader: Makes a
complex argument seem simple and easy
to decide on.
6. Traditional family, pls
Evidence: “The Australian dream, giving
three kids, a wife, a dog and a house of your
own.”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes the text appeal to people who have a
family, or who are parents.
7. Be scared & Fearful
Example: “Imagine your dad exploding”
The effect this has on the reader:
Intends to make them scared, fearful and
therefore easy to convince
8. Saving money = good
Evidence: “ Imagine how much money you would save
if you stopped driving your car”
The effect this has on the reader:
Either tries to make the reader angry at being charged
money for something
OR
Positions the reader to support an opinion because of
their desire to save money, or to not see money
wasted.
9. Change is bad
Evidence: “Elders have been complaining about
young generations for years, and look what the
result of it is a decayed society!”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes a person feel comfortable about doing
the same old things.
10. Love your Country
Example: “Aussies rule the world”
The effect this has on the reader: Positions the reader
To agree with actions that benefit the nation as a whole
11. Crime = time = fair
Evidence: “ The death penalty is the ultimate
form of cruelty, it’s a violation of fundamental
human rights, its not a right or just thing to do.”
The effect this has on the reader:
Making things sound fair will catch the readers
eyes by making sure that something's in it for
everyone.
12. Your perfect / Revolting
Evidence: “Mr Kolber is amazing” OR “Mr Kolber
is the most massive idiot yet born”
The effect this has on the reader:
The reader can clearly tell who the ‘goodies’ are,
and who the ‘baddies’ are.
13. Cheesy, overused phrase
Evidence: “We brought our A game”
The effect this has on the reader:
The phrase is familiar, so the reader feels safe
and familiar with the writers expresssion.
14. Swearing, exaggeration, connotations
Example: “The brutal beheading of people”
The effect this has on the reader: Evokes a sentiment
or opinion
15. Emotional, implied baggage
Example: “The Australian dollar slumped to a
new low last night due to increasing
nervousness about Europe’s economic woes
The effect this has on the reader: Works up the readers
And makes them feel emotional about it.
16. Feels bad / good
Evidence: “Come on, you don’t want to be sad
your whole life, don’t you want to be happy?”
The effect this has on the reader:
To make them feel the way you want them to
feel when they read your essay.
17. Hard facts, figures
Evidence: “ 50% of this class is in VCAL”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes the argument seem objective and
reliable
18. OTT (Over The Top)
Overreacts, dramatic, emotional
Evidence: “The spurs are the best team ever,
they are so fit, young and beautiful. They are so
good and full of skill, such an amazing team”
The effect this has on the reader:
Is very over the top, so the reader either finds
this funny or believable
19. Everyone thinks same
Evidence: “All of Tony Abbott’s supporters are
biased, bigoted racists who don’t deserve your
vote.”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes the reader think a group or type of person
are all the same, or share the same opinion.
20. Students in VCAL
Simple, readable, Facts
Everyone not here
10B
10K
10N
The effect this has on the reader:
Simplifies and makes the
information
Readable and easy to understand
21. Includes reader together
Example:
“Finally, the research to back up what we all
know’, that the cost of parking in this city is
painful”
The effect this has on the reader:
It is meant to include the reader into the article
and make them feel involved.
22. Meaning is opposite
Sarcastic opposition people
Evidence: “ Is Jared dumb, Nahhh”
The effect this has on the reader: It gives the
reason some enthusiasm, fun, laughter
23. This like that
Comparing x = y
Example: “Coburg is a melting pot”
The effect this has on the reader: Gives a
Comparison between two things and makes
The reader more interested.
24. Play on words
Evidence: “ Being a vegetarian is a missed
steak”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes them laugh, or be impressed by the
writers word play.
25. Sensible, logical, superior
X = X = logic
Evidence: “If the spurs beat the heat, the heat
suck”
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes complex things simple, by saying if
_____ is this, then _____ is true.
26. Repetition of word
Repeating, Repeating, Repeating
Example: Blah, Blah, Blah
The effect this has on the reader:
Makes the text easier to read and remember,
emphasises certain words and points of view.
27. Don’t answer = rhetorical
Implied but unstated
No thinking needed
Evidence: “ Do you want your children to grow
up and become alcoholic druggies?”
The effect this has on the reader: Draws
attention to the reader by forcing the reader to
then agree with the statement being put
forward.
28. These informative slides were provided by
10N – Circa 2014 (Class of 2016)
The effect this has on the reader: