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 Level 2 Student Exemplar
Q: Analyse how at least ONE setting helped develop an
important theme.



                                                       The essay
                                                       has a clear
                                                       and basic
In the drama An Inspector Calls, by J.B. Priestley,
                                                       introduction.
one of the settings is upper class England. This       The candidate
setting effectively develops the central theme in      has identified
                                                       the social
the play of responsibility. The setting conveys this
                                                       setting and
theme as it shows how people in this social            has linked
setting ignore responsibility, the results that a      it to the
                                                       major theme.
lack of responsibility can have, and also how the
                                                       However, the
people in this setting are blind to the                candidate
consequences.                                          hasn’t
                                                       identified how
                                                       yet
One of the ways in which the social setting in An Inspector
                                                                    The candidate
Calls shows the theme responsibility is the way people in this
                                                                    has used the
social setting ignore responsibility. The characters in this play   characters
value social status much more highly than responsibility. This      as a vehicle
aspect is conveyed in the play through the characters,              to discuss
particularly Mr. Birling. Mr. Birling is a proud man who is         setting,
always striving to move higher up on the social ladder. When        shows clear
he is being partially blames for a girl’s suicide, he exclaims:     understanding of the
                                                                    purpose of
                                                                    characterisation, and
                                                                    weaves
                                                                    quotes in
                                                                    with ease (next slide)
“There is a big difference between a lot of these        The candidate
things coming out in private and a downright             has teased
public scandal!” This quote puts to the reader that      the example
                                                         out and clearly
Mr. Birling is not concerned at all about the poor       explained its
girl who is dead, but only about what it would do        purpose in
to his social status if it were to come out in public.   furthering the
                                                         thesis. The
Mr. Birling has completely missed the lesson to be       candidate has
learned and does not show any signs of guilt or          made a clear
remorse. He is portrayed to the reader as                and concise
                                                         point and has
corrupted, reinforcing the writer’s intended             shown an
theme of responsibility as the reader can see            understanding
what is more important.                                  of the writer’s
                                                         purpose
The upper class social setting in this play also        The
develops the theme of responsibility through            candidate
                                                        has
displaying the results the lack of responsibility of    identified
characters in the upper class have had on the lower     an upper
class. In the play, it is found that a combination of   class
                                                        social
ignoring responsibility from each member of the         setting but
Birling family has resulted in the suicide of a young   could have
girl, Eva Smith. In an effort to get the message that   gone a
                                                        little further
actions have consequences, through to the Birlings,     to show
he continuously refers to Eva’s death in graphic        that this is
details as he says, “Now a girl is dead, with her       the case.

inside burned out, lying on a slab.” The continuous
reference to the horrific results cause the reader to   Student
realise the importance of responsibility as they        recognises
                                                        author’s
understand what can happen if responsibility is         purpose of
ignored.                                                language to
                                                        support theme.
Another way in which the theme of responsibility is              The candidate
developed through the upper class setting is the idea that       has repeated
the characters in this setting are blind to the results. Most    the idea of
                                                                 responsibility
of the characters progress through the story without any
                                                                 but hasn’t
signs of remorse for their actions. Inspector Goode spells
                                                                 really gone
it out for the family when he says: “we do live alone. We        into enough
are all part of one body. We are responsible for each other.     depth here.
And the time will come soon when, if men will not learn          The candidate
this lesson it will be taught to them in fire and blood and      has stated
anguish.” In this statement the Inspector is referring to war    the social
in the last sentence. No attempts to shock the family into       setting, but it
realisation that one day their lack of responsibility will not   would have
                                                                 been better to
only affect them, but other people too. The blindness of
                                                                 explore it by
the people in this social setting makes the reader open
                                                                 unpacking it
their eyes to the responsibility they have in the world.         further. Clear
                                                                 sentence
                                                                 starters
The candidate has reinforced characterisation as a means to      signpost the
show setting and its relationship with theme. The candidate      Argument.
has used a long quotation, but it’s fitting and it works.
The author’s main purpose in using setting to
develop the responsibility theme is to show          The essay
how bad the upper class environment is with          gives us a
                                                     sense of
the lack of responsibility. The negative light in    the author’s
which the Birling family are shown cause the         craft. The
reader to think “am I like the Birling family?”      candidate
J.B. Priestley wants to convey his view, that        has shown
responsibility is hugely important to society        some
                                                     personal
and he also wants the audience to change             under-
their views. Seeing the effect that responsibility   standing
had in the story definitely made me, as a            and has
reader, rethink my actions. It caused me to          addressed
think more about being responsible before I act      the “how”
                                                     and the “why.”
and also what I value in life.
The use of the upper class setting to convey responsibility in “An
Inspector Calls” was extremely effective. It caused the reader to
think about their actions through the results in the play and what
the message in the play means to their lives. J.B. Priestley conveyed
his message effectively and accurately.




NZQA’s Overall Comment: This is a “workmanlike” Merit. It is repetitive, but there
is enough there. Ultimately, there is evidence of good analysis. The candidate has
given good examples with a commanding analytical voice. The candidate has
demonstrated an understanding of the purpose of characterisation and has placed
the reader in the argument.

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  • 1. Extended Written Text Level 2 Student Exemplar
  • 2. Q: Analyse how at least ONE setting helped develop an important theme. The essay has a clear and basic In the drama An Inspector Calls, by J.B. Priestley, introduction. one of the settings is upper class England. This The candidate setting effectively develops the central theme in has identified the social the play of responsibility. The setting conveys this setting and theme as it shows how people in this social has linked setting ignore responsibility, the results that a it to the major theme. lack of responsibility can have, and also how the However, the people in this setting are blind to the candidate consequences. hasn’t identified how yet
  • 3. One of the ways in which the social setting in An Inspector The candidate Calls shows the theme responsibility is the way people in this has used the social setting ignore responsibility. The characters in this play characters value social status much more highly than responsibility. This as a vehicle aspect is conveyed in the play through the characters, to discuss particularly Mr. Birling. Mr. Birling is a proud man who is setting, always striving to move higher up on the social ladder. When shows clear he is being partially blames for a girl’s suicide, he exclaims: understanding of the purpose of characterisation, and weaves quotes in with ease (next slide)
  • 4. “There is a big difference between a lot of these The candidate things coming out in private and a downright has teased public scandal!” This quote puts to the reader that the example out and clearly Mr. Birling is not concerned at all about the poor explained its girl who is dead, but only about what it would do purpose in to his social status if it were to come out in public. furthering the thesis. The Mr. Birling has completely missed the lesson to be candidate has learned and does not show any signs of guilt or made a clear remorse. He is portrayed to the reader as and concise point and has corrupted, reinforcing the writer’s intended shown an theme of responsibility as the reader can see understanding what is more important. of the writer’s purpose
  • 5. The upper class social setting in this play also The develops the theme of responsibility through candidate has displaying the results the lack of responsibility of identified characters in the upper class have had on the lower an upper class. In the play, it is found that a combination of class social ignoring responsibility from each member of the setting but Birling family has resulted in the suicide of a young could have girl, Eva Smith. In an effort to get the message that gone a little further actions have consequences, through to the Birlings, to show he continuously refers to Eva’s death in graphic that this is details as he says, “Now a girl is dead, with her the case. inside burned out, lying on a slab.” The continuous reference to the horrific results cause the reader to Student realise the importance of responsibility as they recognises author’s understand what can happen if responsibility is purpose of ignored. language to support theme.
  • 6. Another way in which the theme of responsibility is The candidate developed through the upper class setting is the idea that has repeated the characters in this setting are blind to the results. Most the idea of responsibility of the characters progress through the story without any but hasn’t signs of remorse for their actions. Inspector Goode spells really gone it out for the family when he says: “we do live alone. We into enough are all part of one body. We are responsible for each other. depth here. And the time will come soon when, if men will not learn The candidate this lesson it will be taught to them in fire and blood and has stated anguish.” In this statement the Inspector is referring to war the social in the last sentence. No attempts to shock the family into setting, but it realisation that one day their lack of responsibility will not would have been better to only affect them, but other people too. The blindness of explore it by the people in this social setting makes the reader open unpacking it their eyes to the responsibility they have in the world. further. Clear sentence starters The candidate has reinforced characterisation as a means to signpost the show setting and its relationship with theme. The candidate Argument. has used a long quotation, but it’s fitting and it works.
  • 7. The author’s main purpose in using setting to develop the responsibility theme is to show The essay how bad the upper class environment is with gives us a sense of the lack of responsibility. The negative light in the author’s which the Birling family are shown cause the craft. The reader to think “am I like the Birling family?” candidate J.B. Priestley wants to convey his view, that has shown responsibility is hugely important to society some personal and he also wants the audience to change under- their views. Seeing the effect that responsibility standing had in the story definitely made me, as a and has reader, rethink my actions. It caused me to addressed think more about being responsible before I act the “how” and the “why.” and also what I value in life.
  • 8. The use of the upper class setting to convey responsibility in “An Inspector Calls” was extremely effective. It caused the reader to think about their actions through the results in the play and what the message in the play means to their lives. J.B. Priestley conveyed his message effectively and accurately. NZQA’s Overall Comment: This is a “workmanlike” Merit. It is repetitive, but there is enough there. Ultimately, there is evidence of good analysis. The candidate has given good examples with a commanding analytical voice. The candidate has demonstrated an understanding of the purpose of characterisation and has placed the reader in the argument.