This document provides tips for improving writing by examining areas that need work based on a rubric. It suggests focusing on crafting a strong thesis statement that takes a clear position and is supported with original examples and research integrated thoughtfully. Organization should use topic sentences and transitions to flow logically. Language needs to be revised for clarity without unnecessary words. Proper documentation and audience/purpose-appropriate style and tone are also important. Seeking help from tutors at the writing center is encouraged.

1. Ways to Improve Your Writing
Looking at
Components of the
ENGL 101 Rubric

2. Take a look at the columns
 All columns have a point value. Take some
time to see where the paper scored higher
on the rubric. These are the strengths of the
paper.
 The columns where the paper scored lower
are the areas where your writing needs to be
improved.

3. To have a stellar thesis
 Make sure that your thesis meets the criteria
of the Thesis Statement handout.
 It should have an arguable & original claim.
 Review the thesis statements in Joining
The Conversation to see how they are
crafted.

4. Support for the argument
 Use your own ideas and examples instead of
solely restating the examples and ideas of
the writers in the text.
 The writers can be used for support, but
make sure that you add your own insight.

5. Further tips to use research
 Use the sandwich method to integrate
research into your argument.
 To do this, know WHY you are choosing to
use specific quotes. This will help you
highlight the importance of the research.

6. Meet the page requirement for the
paper
 A 3 page paper that is only 2.5 pages is 10%
under the word requirement, which makes
the paper “below expectations” on the rubric
for the assignment.

7. Organization
 Have a topic sentence that is not a fact. The
topic sentence should show the points you
are making to support your argument.
 Review the 3EX handout.
 Have specific, rather than general, examples.
 Use transitions within the paragraph, so your
sentences flow smoothly.

8. Language
 Review the Okay Ways to Combine
Sentences handout. This will help you
recognize comma splice, fragments, and run-
ons.
 Also revise for clarity, make sure that your
sentences are clear and direct. Get rid of any
wordiness.

9. Audience and Purpose
 Make sure to use formal, academic
language. This does not mean using the
biggest words.
 It helps to keep the context of the writing
event in mind.
 Avoid profanity, slang, and references to
yourself
– “I believe,” “I feel,” “I disagree.”

10. Documentation
 Review the Hacker Handbook for a clear
understanding of MLA in-text citation.
 On the Works Cited, the text should use the
full line. Do not copy/paste a half-line format
into your paper.
 Make sure your Works Cited matches your
in-text citations.

11. You can do this!!
 Remember, writing an academic paper is
hard work, so don’t be frustrated if it doesn’t
come easy.
 The Writing Center is a fantastic place full of
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