(The Visit)
by
(Brandon Nicholls)
(Horror)
Name Heath Park
Address Prestwood Road, Wolverhampton
Phone Number 01902556360

FADE IN:
EXT. OUTSIDE SCHOOL - MORNING
Bell rings and school children are seen walking into
school through the main entrance.
CUT TO:
INT. SCHOOL HALLWAYS - MORNING
Following the students through the main entrance into the
hallway of he school where we are met with the main
characters during tracking freeze frame.
AVA, is the girl best friend of Chad.
AVA
(Crying to group of
friends)
I just..
PAN TO:
A girl is shown walking through the doors to group of
girls. And walks up to hug Ava, which is the girl crying.
ISABELLE, is the concerned best friend of Ava.
ISABELLE
You okay?
PAN TO:
Two lads standing on the opposite side of the hallway.
They are stood talking.
MARL, is the best friend of Adam.
MARL
Yeah, I don’t know much. Just
waiting for Adam.
2.
PAN TO:
Doors opening and lad walking through them looking really
depressed and gets shoulder barged by some other kids.
ADAM, the main character of this sequence and is the best
friend of Chad.
Adam walks past Marl, not noticing him, Marl calls to him
but Adam keeps on walking towards the class.
MARL
Adam… Adam… Adam
ADAM
(Quietly)
whats up?
MARL
You okay. You seem a little off.
ADAM
Yeaaaah, im fine.
FADE TO:
INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING
All the students go into class and sit down in their
seats and start talking between themselves.
MR WALTERS, is a white male who is the form tutor of this
class.
He enters the class and shuts it quietly behind him and
goes and sits at the edge of one of the tables.
MR WALTERS
(Coughing)
Ermm… can I get your attention
please.
2.
The class slowly stops talking and start to look in the
direction of Mr. Walters.
MR WALTERS
I never thought when I started
teaching that I would ever have to
give this type of news. I… just
don't even know where to begin.
He pauses and some of the students start to look at each
other with the look of confusion.
MR WALTERS
I know that some of you may
already know this and I apologise
for mentioning it, but I have been
told that all students need to be
aware.
As Mr Walters says this Adam looks up and makes eye
contact with Mr Walters.
MR WALTERS
Last night… one of our pupils
(clears his throat)
Last night, one of our pupils Chad
Jowa sadly passed away last night.
After Mr Walters gives this announcement, Ava burst out
into tears and runs out of class. Her friend Isabelle
looks at Mr Walters.
ISABELLE
Im gonna go make sure she is okay.
MR WALTERS
Of course.
2.
Mr Walters looks back at the class. To break the awkward
silence he begins to start talking to the students.
MY WALTERS
As you can see, it is very
upsetting for the people that were
close to him. If you could just,
all be there for one another and
help each other get through this
tough time. There will be an
assembly at half 2 today to talk
about it more and everyone must
attend.
Mr Walters stops speaking and the class goes silent. In
the tense atmosphere, Marl turns to look a Adam after a
few moments.
MARL
Adam…
Adam slowly turns to look at him as students in the class
begin to start talking quietly in the background.
MARL
(soft voice)
Shit…Im sorry… honestly, I don't
even know what to say. I had know
idea..
Adam takes a sighs before speaking to Marl.
ADAM
Yeah, not many people did.
Marl looks down and pauses before he replies back to
Adam.
2.
MARL
I know it’s a stupid question… but
are you okay? How you holding up.
ADAM
Im doing okay, its just a little
hard.
(Sarcastic Tone)
But some people clearly are taking
it worse.
Marl looks towards the seats where Ava and Isabelle were.
MARL
You on about Ava.
ADAM
Yeah.
They both look towards the seats where the two girls were
sitting.
FAD TO:
INT. HALLWAY OF SCHOOL - AFTERNOON
Bell rings - Adam is seen walking through the hallway of
school, out through the main doors walking past other
students talking about the death of Chad.
Nathan and Emma are two random students that Adam walks
past at the end of the day. The two are having a
conversation about the death of Chad.
EMMA
Did you know him?
2.
NATHAN
Kinda, I spoke to him once or
twice.
EMMA
Do you know how he died?
NATHAN
Nahhhh, I heard it was…
FADE TO:
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
At night Adam is alone in his house and is scrolling
through socials and going through photos and posts of
Chads. He says an old photo of them two and smiles and
gives a little laugh.
ADAM
haa…
After looking through these photos and all of a sudden
hears a noise from somewhere within his house. He looks
towards the door but thinks nothing of it and carries on
scrolling through pictures. After a few moments he hears
something again.
ADAM
What is that, for god sake.
Adam then decides to get and check out what the noise
was. He walks into the hallway to find him self in the
dark. He looks down his stairs into the darkness and
switches on the light and sees nothing and switches the
light off. As he starts to turn away he sees something
down the stairs.
ADAM
What the..
2.
In confusion he turns the light back on and and sees
nothing there. Turning the light back off he sees
something there again. Slowly he goes to put the light
back on and he finds nothing there. Adam takes a deep
breathe and turns the light off. He turns around to see a
girl in his face. And it cuts to black.
ADAM
(Screaming)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH…
4.
SCENE INDEX
INT. SCHOOL HALLWAYS - MORNING 1..........................
INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING 2................................
INT. HALLWAY OF SCHOOL - AFTERNOON 5......................
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 6....................................

Visit 2 script 2

  • 1.
    (The Visit) by (Brandon Nicholls) (Horror) NameHeath Park Address Prestwood Road, Wolverhampton Phone Number 01902556360

  • 2.
    FADE IN: EXT. OUTSIDESCHOOL - MORNING Bell rings and school children are seen walking into school through the main entrance. CUT TO: INT. SCHOOL HALLWAYS - MORNING Following the students through the main entrance into the hallway of he school where we are met with the main characters during tracking freeze frame. AVA, is the girl best friend of Chad. AVA (Crying to group of friends) I just.. PAN TO: A girl is shown walking through the doors to group of girls. And walks up to hug Ava, which is the girl crying. ISABELLE, is the concerned best friend of Ava. ISABELLE You okay? PAN TO: Two lads standing on the opposite side of the hallway. They are stood talking. MARL, is the best friend of Adam. MARL Yeah, I don’t know much. Just waiting for Adam.
  • 3.
    2. PAN TO: Doors openingand lad walking through them looking really depressed and gets shoulder barged by some other kids. ADAM, the main character of this sequence and is the best friend of Chad. Adam walks past Marl, not noticing him, Marl calls to him but Adam keeps on walking towards the class. MARL Adam… Adam… Adam ADAM (Quietly) whats up? MARL You okay. You seem a little off. ADAM Yeaaaah, im fine. FADE TO: INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING All the students go into class and sit down in their seats and start talking between themselves. MR WALTERS, is a white male who is the form tutor of this class. He enters the class and shuts it quietly behind him and goes and sits at the edge of one of the tables. MR WALTERS (Coughing) Ermm… can I get your attention please.
  • 4.
    2. The class slowlystops talking and start to look in the direction of Mr. Walters. MR WALTERS I never thought when I started teaching that I would ever have to give this type of news. I… just don't even know where to begin. He pauses and some of the students start to look at each other with the look of confusion. MR WALTERS I know that some of you may already know this and I apologise for mentioning it, but I have been told that all students need to be aware. As Mr Walters says this Adam looks up and makes eye contact with Mr Walters. MR WALTERS Last night… one of our pupils (clears his throat) Last night, one of our pupils Chad Jowa sadly passed away last night. After Mr Walters gives this announcement, Ava burst out into tears and runs out of class. Her friend Isabelle looks at Mr Walters. ISABELLE Im gonna go make sure she is okay. MR WALTERS Of course.
  • 5.
    2. Mr Walters looksback at the class. To break the awkward silence he begins to start talking to the students. MY WALTERS As you can see, it is very upsetting for the people that were close to him. If you could just, all be there for one another and help each other get through this tough time. There will be an assembly at half 2 today to talk about it more and everyone must attend. Mr Walters stops speaking and the class goes silent. In the tense atmosphere, Marl turns to look a Adam after a few moments. MARL Adam… Adam slowly turns to look at him as students in the class begin to start talking quietly in the background. MARL (soft voice) Shit…Im sorry… honestly, I don't even know what to say. I had know idea.. Adam takes a sighs before speaking to Marl. ADAM Yeah, not many people did. Marl looks down and pauses before he replies back to Adam.
  • 6.
    2. MARL I know it’sa stupid question… but are you okay? How you holding up. ADAM Im doing okay, its just a little hard. (Sarcastic Tone) But some people clearly are taking it worse. Marl looks towards the seats where Ava and Isabelle were. MARL You on about Ava. ADAM Yeah. They both look towards the seats where the two girls were sitting. FAD TO: INT. HALLWAY OF SCHOOL - AFTERNOON Bell rings - Adam is seen walking through the hallway of school, out through the main doors walking past other students talking about the death of Chad. Nathan and Emma are two random students that Adam walks past at the end of the day. The two are having a conversation about the death of Chad. EMMA Did you know him?
  • 7.
    2. NATHAN Kinda, I spoketo him once or twice. EMMA Do you know how he died? NATHAN Nahhhh, I heard it was… FADE TO: INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT At night Adam is alone in his house and is scrolling through socials and going through photos and posts of Chads. He says an old photo of them two and smiles and gives a little laugh. ADAM haa… After looking through these photos and all of a sudden hears a noise from somewhere within his house. He looks towards the door but thinks nothing of it and carries on scrolling through pictures. After a few moments he hears something again. ADAM What is that, for god sake. Adam then decides to get and check out what the noise was. He walks into the hallway to find him self in the dark. He looks down his stairs into the darkness and switches on the light and sees nothing and switches the light off. As he starts to turn away he sees something down the stairs. ADAM What the..
  • 8.
    2. In confusion heturns the light back on and and sees nothing there. Turning the light back off he sees something there again. Slowly he goes to put the light back on and he finds nothing there. Adam takes a deep breathe and turns the light off. He turns around to see a girl in his face. And it cuts to black. ADAM (Screaming) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH…
  • 9.
    4. SCENE INDEX INT. SCHOOLHALLWAYS - MORNING 1.......................... INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING 2................................ INT. HALLWAY OF SCHOOL - AFTERNOON 5...................... INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 6....................................