A troubleshooting guide 
to prewriting
« I know what I want 
to say, but I can’t say 
it. »
« I ‘m having trouble 
with my opening »
« I can’t think of the 
right word. »
« My ideas seem all 
mixed up. »
« My draft is too 
short. »
« My writing seems 
boring. »
« How do I get my 
ideas fit together ? »
« I don’t know what to 
write. »
« How do I know which 
verb form to use ? »
Word Order game
Rahapprag ticlera 
troper 
cautotiunnp 
gitined napling 
roctpdu scorpse
Paragraph 
Article Report 
Punctuation 
Editing 
Planning 
Product Process
What motivates students to 
write ?
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90 % of the 
students do some 
kind of writing 
outside of school.
72 % of the students 
text and e-mail their 
friends.
46 % of femal 
students write in 
journals.
45 % of students 
writes stories.
42 % of students 
use a computer 
when they write at 
home.
27 % of students 
write poetry.
Process vs Product Approach
« Give a man a fish 
and you feed him 
for a day. Teach a 
man to fish and you 
feed him for a 
lifetime. »
The product is something 
tangible that you get 
after going through a 
process.
In your groups discuss 
the difference between a 
process and a product 
approach to writing
Process writing Product writing 
 
text as a resource for 
comparison 
 
ideas as starting point 
 
more than one draft 
 
more global, focus on 
purpose, theme, text type, 
i.e., reader is emphasised 
 
collaborative 
 
emphasis on creative 
process 
 
imitate model text 
 
organisation of ideas more 
important than ideas 
themselves 
 
one draft 
 
features highlighted 
including controlled practice 
of those features 
 
individual 
 
emphasis on end product
Common problems 
solved by using 
writing process.
1- Students don’t 
know how to get 
started :
No problem, just introduce 
them to Pre- Writing 
activities like brainstorming, 
webbing, mapping, 
freewriting, or listing.
2- Students don’t 
write because they 
are afraid of making 
errors
Tell students they will 
have a chance to 
make corrections 
during the Editing 
stage.
3- Low productivity; 
students don’t write 
very much:
Pre-Writing activities like 
free writing increase fluidity 
of expression; the 
knowledge that things can 
be changed during revising, 
frees students up to 
experiment.
4- No effort in 
Revision; no ability to 
rethink earlier drafts:
By teaching focused 
lessons in specific writing 
skills, and showing 
students how to use the 
Six Traits criteria, young 
writers become interested 
in and committed to 
serious revision.
5- Sloppy work ; no 
attention to detail in final 
drafts
By reserving a special stage for 
Publishing, and creating 
authentic publishing 
opportunities for your students 
to publish their work, you can 
show them how important this 
aspect of writing really is, and 
you can give them specific 
lessons in how to go about it.
“ Mysterious disappearance 
of an english teacher.”
* headlines 
* Overview of crime 
* Details of crime 
* What the police are doing / 
have done 
* Description of suspects 
* Appeal for witness
The editor’s checklist. 
- Is there any necessary information 
missing ? 
- Are the paragraphs in logical order ? 
- Is there any unnecessary information ? 
- Are there any part that you can’t 
understand ? 
- Is there a repetition of the same words ? 
- Do all the verbs agree with the subject ? 
- Have the correct verb forms been used ? 
- Have all the words been spelt correctly ? 
- Is the punctuation correct ?
Reflexion on Process Writing lesson. 
You just participated in a 
process Writing lesson. Look 
at the table below and try to 
complete each stage with 
the activities you did. What 
do you think the purpose of 
each stage or activity was ?
Stage Activities done Purpose 
Prewriting 
Drafting 
Revising 
Editing 
Publishing Sharing what has been written motivated 
students and develops an awareness of writing 
for a specific audience.e.g classroom displays of 
writing, class newspaper, webpage/submitting 
writing to websites.
Stage Activities done Purpose 
Prewriting - Prediction 
based on 
headline 
- Questions to 
the teacher 
- Brainstorm the 
order the info 
should be in. 
-Motivate/attract/ 
interest 
- Help generate 
ideas 
- focus on product 
and requirements 
of exam (Where 
necessary)
Drafting 
Write the 
report using 
the 
information 
gained from 
your 
questions. 
-Writing quickly 
encourages focus 
on content. 
-Group work 
reduces pressure 
on weaker ss and 
develops team-working 
collaboration
Revising 
Swap reports 
and check for 
language and 
content 
errors. 
Essential part of 
writing . 
-Training for 
future writing 
needs 
-Easier and more 
motivating to 
spot mistakes.
Editing 
Return docs 
to original 
writer for 
changes. 
-Encourage 
reflection on 
what is right 
/wrong and 
why
Publishing 
Put reports 
on wall and ss 
choose the 
best one. 
Sharing what has 
been written 
motivated students 
and develops an 
awareness of 
writing for a 
specific 
audience.e.g 
classroom displays 
of writing, class 
newspaper, 
webpage/submittin 
g writing to 
websites.
Advantages (+) and disadvantages (-) of Using a 
process Writing Approach. 
What would be the advantages 
and/or disadvantages of using a 
process writing approach to 
teaching writing in your 
classroom situation ?
Advantages ( + ) Disadvantages ( - )
Advantages ( + ) 
* Increase creativity 
* Collaborate preparation for real life 
* more fun 
* Writing is a multi stage linear process 
leading to gradual evolution of the text. Pre-writing 
– writing and re-writing 
* less stressful
Disadvantages ( - ) 
* No collaboration. 
* topic, purpose and audience are ignored. 
* No creative thinking and innovation 
* In 1960s Product approach Focus is on usage 
and grammar. Topic sentence, paragraphing 
and rhetorical patterns of moulding the text.
In Egypt, you stand by the road and you 
shout the name of the place you want to go 
to. If the driver wants to take you there, he’ll 
stop. Then supposing you’d shouted 
‘Zamalek’, the driver would say ‘Feyn fi 
Zamalek ?’ which means, ‘ Where in 
Zamalek ?’ You tell him, and then he quotes 
you a price. And the driver will quite happily 
pick up other people during the journey so 
you can end up sharing a taxi with a family of 
five and a couple of chickens. It’s such a great 
experience.
London’s famous for black cabs and I 
love them. They ‘re so comfortable, but 
the drivers can be fast and aggressive, so 
you hold on because you think they’re 
going to crash ! But they have such 
interesting stories about famous people 
they’ve driven, and about different 
parts of London, that you don’t want to 
get out at the end of the journey ! And 
they seem to have an opinion on every 
subject in the news.
In Thailand, taxis are called tuk-tuks. The tuk-tuk 
drivers come speeding up to you in the street, 
shouting ‘tuk-tuk, tuk-tuk !’ The taxis are quite low 
to the ground, and the top is covered, but the sides 
are open to let in some fresh air, and you really 
need it, because it’s so hot that you partically stick 
to the plastic seats, dripping in your own sweat. 
But the tuk-tuks are pretty cheap and they’re quite 
convenient. They go anywhere you want to go, and 
often act as a tour guide on the way, suggesting 
good things to see and good places to eat.
Egypt London Thailand 
Cost 
Comfort 
Enjoyment
What are Taxis like in Algeria ? Do they have 
some similarities with the previous ones. 
Write few lines describing taxis in your country. 
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__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
__________________________________________ 
___________________________________.
THANK YOU

Teaching writing

  • 1.
  • 2.
    « I knowwhat I want to say, but I can’t say it. »
  • 3.
    « I ‘mhaving trouble with my opening »
  • 4.
    « I can’tthink of the right word. »
  • 5.
    « My ideasseem all mixed up. »
  • 6.
    « My draftis too short. »
  • 7.
    « My writingseems boring. »
  • 8.
    « How doI get my ideas fit together ? »
  • 9.
    « I don’tknow what to write. »
  • 10.
    « How doI know which verb form to use ? »
  • 11.
  • 12.
    Rahapprag ticlera troper cautotiunnp gitined napling roctpdu scorpse
  • 13.
    Paragraph Article Report Punctuation Editing Planning Product Process
  • 14.
  • 15.
    90 80 70 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Catégorie 1 Série 1 Série 2 Série 3 Serie 4 Serie 5 Serie 6
  • 16.
    90 % ofthe students do some kind of writing outside of school.
  • 17.
    72 % ofthe students text and e-mail their friends.
  • 18.
    46 % offemal students write in journals.
  • 19.
    45 % ofstudents writes stories.
  • 20.
    42 % ofstudents use a computer when they write at home.
  • 21.
    27 % ofstudents write poetry.
  • 22.
  • 23.
    « Give aman a fish and you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime. »
  • 24.
    The product issomething tangible that you get after going through a process.
  • 25.
    In your groupsdiscuss the difference between a process and a product approach to writing
  • 26.
    Process writing Productwriting  text as a resource for comparison  ideas as starting point  more than one draft  more global, focus on purpose, theme, text type, i.e., reader is emphasised  collaborative  emphasis on creative process  imitate model text  organisation of ideas more important than ideas themselves  one draft  features highlighted including controlled practice of those features  individual  emphasis on end product
  • 27.
    Common problems solvedby using writing process.
  • 28.
    1- Students don’t know how to get started :
  • 29.
    No problem, justintroduce them to Pre- Writing activities like brainstorming, webbing, mapping, freewriting, or listing.
  • 30.
    2- Students don’t write because they are afraid of making errors
  • 31.
    Tell students theywill have a chance to make corrections during the Editing stage.
  • 32.
    3- Low productivity; students don’t write very much:
  • 33.
    Pre-Writing activities like free writing increase fluidity of expression; the knowledge that things can be changed during revising, frees students up to experiment.
  • 34.
    4- No effortin Revision; no ability to rethink earlier drafts:
  • 35.
    By teaching focused lessons in specific writing skills, and showing students how to use the Six Traits criteria, young writers become interested in and committed to serious revision.
  • 36.
    5- Sloppy work; no attention to detail in final drafts
  • 37.
    By reserving aspecial stage for Publishing, and creating authentic publishing opportunities for your students to publish their work, you can show them how important this aspect of writing really is, and you can give them specific lessons in how to go about it.
  • 38.
    “ Mysterious disappearance of an english teacher.”
  • 39.
    * headlines *Overview of crime * Details of crime * What the police are doing / have done * Description of suspects * Appeal for witness
  • 40.
    The editor’s checklist. - Is there any necessary information missing ? - Are the paragraphs in logical order ? - Is there any unnecessary information ? - Are there any part that you can’t understand ? - Is there a repetition of the same words ? - Do all the verbs agree with the subject ? - Have the correct verb forms been used ? - Have all the words been spelt correctly ? - Is the punctuation correct ?
  • 41.
    Reflexion on ProcessWriting lesson. You just participated in a process Writing lesson. Look at the table below and try to complete each stage with the activities you did. What do you think the purpose of each stage or activity was ?
  • 42.
    Stage Activities donePurpose Prewriting Drafting Revising Editing Publishing Sharing what has been written motivated students and develops an awareness of writing for a specific audience.e.g classroom displays of writing, class newspaper, webpage/submitting writing to websites.
  • 43.
    Stage Activities donePurpose Prewriting - Prediction based on headline - Questions to the teacher - Brainstorm the order the info should be in. -Motivate/attract/ interest - Help generate ideas - focus on product and requirements of exam (Where necessary)
  • 44.
    Drafting Write the report using the information gained from your questions. -Writing quickly encourages focus on content. -Group work reduces pressure on weaker ss and develops team-working collaboration
  • 45.
    Revising Swap reports and check for language and content errors. Essential part of writing . -Training for future writing needs -Easier and more motivating to spot mistakes.
  • 46.
    Editing Return docs to original writer for changes. -Encourage reflection on what is right /wrong and why
  • 47.
    Publishing Put reports on wall and ss choose the best one. Sharing what has been written motivated students and develops an awareness of writing for a specific audience.e.g classroom displays of writing, class newspaper, webpage/submittin g writing to websites.
  • 48.
    Advantages (+) anddisadvantages (-) of Using a process Writing Approach. What would be the advantages and/or disadvantages of using a process writing approach to teaching writing in your classroom situation ?
  • 49.
    Advantages ( +) Disadvantages ( - )
  • 50.
    Advantages ( +) * Increase creativity * Collaborate preparation for real life * more fun * Writing is a multi stage linear process leading to gradual evolution of the text. Pre-writing – writing and re-writing * less stressful
  • 51.
    Disadvantages ( -) * No collaboration. * topic, purpose and audience are ignored. * No creative thinking and innovation * In 1960s Product approach Focus is on usage and grammar. Topic sentence, paragraphing and rhetorical patterns of moulding the text.
  • 53.
    In Egypt, youstand by the road and you shout the name of the place you want to go to. If the driver wants to take you there, he’ll stop. Then supposing you’d shouted ‘Zamalek’, the driver would say ‘Feyn fi Zamalek ?’ which means, ‘ Where in Zamalek ?’ You tell him, and then he quotes you a price. And the driver will quite happily pick up other people during the journey so you can end up sharing a taxi with a family of five and a couple of chickens. It’s such a great experience.
  • 55.
    London’s famous forblack cabs and I love them. They ‘re so comfortable, but the drivers can be fast and aggressive, so you hold on because you think they’re going to crash ! But they have such interesting stories about famous people they’ve driven, and about different parts of London, that you don’t want to get out at the end of the journey ! And they seem to have an opinion on every subject in the news.
  • 57.
    In Thailand, taxisare called tuk-tuks. The tuk-tuk drivers come speeding up to you in the street, shouting ‘tuk-tuk, tuk-tuk !’ The taxis are quite low to the ground, and the top is covered, but the sides are open to let in some fresh air, and you really need it, because it’s so hot that you partically stick to the plastic seats, dripping in your own sweat. But the tuk-tuks are pretty cheap and they’re quite convenient. They go anywhere you want to go, and often act as a tour guide on the way, suggesting good things to see and good places to eat.
  • 58.
    Egypt London Thailand Cost Comfort Enjoyment
  • 59.
    What are Taxislike in Algeria ? Do they have some similarities with the previous ones. Write few lines describing taxis in your country. __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ ___________________________________.
  • 60.