The document summarizes feedback on a script for a music video. Respondents noted that the script had good shots, action, and syncing of scenes with the song lyrics. They suggested adding more shots, characters, and development. However, one respondent said the script seemed good with nothing to improve. Respondents agreed the song choice was suitable and said they would watch the finished video. The authors were pleased people noticed the planned fighting during chorus parts and would add more than two characters and improve quality for the final video.

1. Script Analysis
What do you like about the script?
 Pretty good,reasonablydetailed.Good layout.
 It was good and has good shots and action. Scenes are in sync with the song
 Lots of variety in shottypes
 The way you have made the characters moves join with the lyrics to the song
A commontheme withthese responsesisthe factthatthe respondentshave identifiedthatthe
scripthas good shots(anda varietyof them) andthe waythe scenes/charactersare insyncwiththe
song. KirsteyandI had plannedtomake the charactersfightduringthe chorus (ordrop) parts of the
songso thisis goodto knowpeople have noticedthis.
What would you like to be improved?
 It seems prettygood,nothing I can think of.
 More shots and development
 A few more characters
 More than two people
From these responses,we are alreadyaddingmore thantwopeople thanksto havingpolice
characters. We have 70 shotsalreadypre-plannedandwe have developedthe wholeplantoa
betterstandard.
Do you think the song choice is good and would you watch the video when it is finished?
 Yes, song suits video,and yes
 Yes.
 Yes it’s a good choice and yes I would watch it
 Yes
It’sgood to knowthat people are interestedinthe videowe are making. We will investingetting
propsand make the videoas highqualityaswe can.