This document discusses how to revise a personal statement. It defines revision as rethinking a document from beginning to end at both the macro and micro level. At the macro level, revision focuses on the subject, purpose, structure, and audience. The document provides guidance on revising these elements, such as defining the subject in the introduction, ensuring the purpose is to convince the reader, and structuring the essay with a coherent body and conclusion. It also notes the importance of assessing personal statements using criteria and practicing assessment on sample essays. The goal of revision is to incorporate feedback to improve the quality of the personal statement.