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Past Student Evaluation – Jack
and Airi
Question One
Question One
• Done in the form of a prezi. It’s got a nice style to it.
• The text can overlap with objects on the screen
making it hard to read.
• The first part is about how they tried to appeal to
their target audience. This is a good point to include
in my own work.
• They’ve mentioned things such as editing and
Goodwin’s theory, but don’t go into much detail.
• They do mention what conventions and codes they
conform to, though.
• They have included an example, but it may have
been more useful if it was just a clip.
Question One
• They then go onto talking about how they
challenged the codes and conventions. What they
have done, is given a reason why they did it.
• They also talk about the ancillary tasks, but very
briefly. Here they didn’t really talk about real life
media products.
• It is very short, doesn’t contain a lot of other media
and there is very little detail.
Question Two
Question Two
Question Two
• I like how they talk about each separate component
such as colour and typography. They’ve spoken
about each product and how they relate, which is
good.
• They talk about the reason behind their choices
which is good. They’ve also spoken about the way it
is received by the audience.
• They’ve mentioned branding and included some
key words
• They don’t go into much detail and it’s quite short.
Question Three
Question Three
• Quite short again and it’s quite difficult to hear.
• I like the use of videos when he talks, but they’re a
bit too small.
• They talk about the audience research they’ve done
and how it effected their work quite well, too.
Question Four
Question Four
• Doesn’t flow, not edited.
• I like how they’ve used pictures to make it more
interesting to watch. I also like how they’ve used
pictures of themselves when they talk.
• Doesn’t sound like there’s much of a script. They
could have missed out on some information.
• I like the way they’ve done it in a style of an
interview.
• They’ve not really spoken about each technology,
just said a list of what they use.
• They have some sort of conclusion but it doesn’t
answer the question.

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Past student evaluation – Jack and Airi

  • 1. Past Student Evaluation – Jack and Airi
  • 3. Question One • Done in the form of a prezi. It’s got a nice style to it. • The text can overlap with objects on the screen making it hard to read. • The first part is about how they tried to appeal to their target audience. This is a good point to include in my own work. • They’ve mentioned things such as editing and Goodwin’s theory, but don’t go into much detail. • They do mention what conventions and codes they conform to, though. • They have included an example, but it may have been more useful if it was just a clip.
  • 4. Question One • They then go onto talking about how they challenged the codes and conventions. What they have done, is given a reason why they did it. • They also talk about the ancillary tasks, but very briefly. Here they didn’t really talk about real life media products. • It is very short, doesn’t contain a lot of other media and there is very little detail.
  • 7. Question Two • I like how they talk about each separate component such as colour and typography. They’ve spoken about each product and how they relate, which is good. • They talk about the reason behind their choices which is good. They’ve also spoken about the way it is received by the audience. • They’ve mentioned branding and included some key words • They don’t go into much detail and it’s quite short.
  • 9. Question Three • Quite short again and it’s quite difficult to hear. • I like the use of videos when he talks, but they’re a bit too small. • They talk about the audience research they’ve done and how it effected their work quite well, too.
  • 11. Question Four • Doesn’t flow, not edited. • I like how they’ve used pictures to make it more interesting to watch. I also like how they’ve used pictures of themselves when they talk. • Doesn’t sound like there’s much of a script. They could have missed out on some information. • I like the way they’ve done it in a style of an interview. • They’ve not really spoken about each technology, just said a list of what they use. • They have some sort of conclusion but it doesn’t answer the question.