The document summarizes feedback received from a group of 17-year-old females on a pitch for a video project. The females felt the pitch had a clear idea and avoided stereotyping. They noted it reminded them of Avatar, a Lynx advert, and A Midsummer Night's Dream in its themes. However, they also acknowledged it would be a lot of work due to its complexity, large cast, and risk that some audiences may not like the complicated narrative.

1. Our pitch

2. My skills
From doing this pitch I have got:
• Confidence
• Presentation skills
• Confident at receiving feedback and
constructive critism

3. Feedback- Good
We asked a group of 17 year old females what they
thought of our pitch. This is what they said:
• We know exactly what we’re doing
• It’s a clear idea
• We’ve analysed the videos and looked at the genre.
• We’ve tried to avoid stereotyping.

4. Similar videos
• Our group thought that our pitch, reminded them of some
other videos. They are:
• Avatar – Through the subject of finding an object and then
being chased.
• The Lynx advert
• A midsummers night dream – By having the ‘Amazons’ it
creates a sort of fairy style feel to the video

5. Reservations
• There were a few things that the group commented
on that we thought about:
• There is a lot of work involved in it
• It’s quite complicated- some audiences like
complicated narratives, but some like simple ones.
• There’s a lot of people in it
• Some people may not like it- But that’s life.