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Organizing The Final
Research Article Using the
           IMRD Method
Organizing

Introduction
  Overview
  Lit review
  Lead into your argument with niche/research
   Questions
Methodology
Results
Discussion (conclusion)
You are NOT required to use the
  IMRD method, but many of the
following “moves” may still need to
 be present in your paper in some
              form.
Brandt, “Sponsors of Literacy”
 (Introduction)
    Overview/RQ
    Lit review
    Argument
 Sponsorship
 Sponsorship and Access
    Raymond and Dora
 Sponsorship and the Rise in Literacy Standards
    Dwayne
 Sponsorship and Appropriation in Literacy Learning
    Carol and Sarah
 Teaching and the Dynamics of Scholarship
Sung, Yongjun, and Heidi J. Hennink-Kaminksi. “The Master Settlement
Agreement and Visual Imagery of Cigarette Advertising in Two Popular Youth
Magazines.” Journalism and Mass Communications Quarterly 85.2 (2008) 331-
52. Communications and Mass Media Complete. Web. 25 Mar. 2012.

 Introduction
     Overview
     Literature Review
       The MSA and Magazine Advertizing (Background)
       Prior Research on Exposure and Expenditure Levels (Studies)
       Social Learning Theory and Visual Imagery (Theoretical
          Frameworks)
       Prior Research on Visual Imagery in Magazine Advertising (Studies)
            • Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall Theme/Appeal
     Summary of Previous Research, Niche and Research Questions
 Methods: Sample Selection, Coding Categories, Coding Procedures
 Results: Sample, Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall
   Theme/Appeal
 Discussion: Sample, Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall
   Theme Appeal
Introduction: Background, Niche, Claiming
Centrality, Theoretical Lens, Lit Review
(333)
Visual Imagery
Ending the Lit Review: What’s
known? What’s Not Known?
The Research Question(s)
Methods: Sample, Coding
Categories, Coding Produres
Results: Sample Characteristics,
Physical Characteris, Human
Models, Theme/Appeals
Results: Using Tables
Discussion: Samples, Physical
Characteristics, Human Models,
Themes/Appeals
Discussion, continued
Conclusion
What about you? Draft your outline.
 Introduction
    Overview/gaps
    Lit review: subject headings
    Description of research
 Methods
    Decide what methods you will need to discuss, and in what
      order.
 Results/Discussion/Findings
    Decide what sub-headings you will need to cover here.
      Headings can be as short as a word or phrase, and as long as a
      sentence.
    Will you have separate results and discussion sections, or put it
      all together?
 Conclusion
    Can be part of your discussion section
Drafting methodology

What data you collected
How you collected it
Who, Where, What you collected it from
How you analyzed it
Shortcomings/limitations
Organizing your methodology
All data together          Organized by types of
                             data
   What data you
                               Surveys
    collected                    Types of questions, who
   How you collected             took them, #, how you
                                  analyzed
   Who you collected it
                               Interviews
    from                         Who you interviewed,
   How you analyzed              how long, what did you
                                  ask them about, how you
                                  analyzed
                               Observations
                                 What, how long, how
                                  analyzed, etc.
Drafting methodology
What data you collected, from whom, how (why)
Example:
 For my experiment, I have nine writing samples, three each from my junior
  and senior years in high school and three from my freshman year in college.
  I chose the three samples “Argument Essay,” “Chapter 1 Reaction Paper,”
  and “Free Response Essay” because of the limited amount of choices I had
  from my junior year in high school. For my senior year in high school, I
  selected “It’s Easy Being Green,” “ELP #1,” and “Final Exam Essay”
  because I wanted variety in the types and purposes of the samples.
  Furthermore, I thought it was important to select papers from different
  classes. As for my first year in college, I decided on “Paper 4,” “School
  Uniforms,” and “Research Plan” because they, too, represent a variety of
  papers. For more information on the writing samples I chose, see Table 1
   below.
Drafting methodology: analyzing data
   After collecting and organizing the data for the samples and creating a chart in which to log my findings, I
    began analyzing the samples by the following criteria: punctuation errors, repetitive words, word choice,
    sentence structure, and fully developed ideas. The process for each analysis was repeated throughout.
   First, I read through the sample one time and only noted confusing areas or parts that I thought could be
    developed more. I also observed if the argument of the paper was backed up with evidence and if the
    argument was weak or strong. This was pertinent for the category of fully developed ideas. It allowed me to
    look at the paper as a whole before I critiqued specific areas of the paper.
   Next, I reread the paper, sentence by sentence, to find any kind of punctuation errors. It was very important
    for me to go sentence by sentence because it allowed me focus on the information on a smaller level. If I had
    not done this, I would have merely viewed the sentences grouped together in paragraphs which, in turn,
    would have made me focus on understanding what the paragraph itself was saying, rather than the
    mechanics of each individual sentence.
   Subsequently, I began to read the paper through again, this time looking at word choice, repetitive words,
    and sentence structure. As I read it, I noted any words I felt that I had seen too many times. I counted the
    number of times each word was overused with the help of Microsoft Word’s word find. I also made distinct
    remarks on the sentence structure throughout the sample. The areas of sentence structure I focused on were
    length (findings of fragments or run-ons), syntax variety, and word positioning in sentences. Finally, but
    importantly, I commented on the paper’s word choice. The Flesch Reading Grade Level assessment on
    Microsoft Word helped me determine the sophistication and complexity of the words used in the writing
    samples. For each paper, I highlighted a few areas throughout the paper and took note of the Flesch
    Reading Grade Level stated. Also, as part of word choice, I examined word variety.
   At the end of each group of samples (junior, senior, and college freshman), I made notes on what I thought
    any of it could possibly mean. In addition, I wrote my thoughts regarding each of the individual criteria for
    every group of samples. At the very end of all nine samples, I made some overall notes concerning my
    findings.
Drafting methodology: limitations
   As a student, I want to believe that my method of analysis was the most efficient, but as a researcher, I know it is
    not. Like any study, mine has its weaknesses and strengths.
   Despite the fact that my study provides specific and detailed insights into the writing of a hearing impaired person,
    it cannot be generalized for a broad population; this raises a problem. If my research does not help a general
    population, then what good is the information? Rather than provide these sorts of concrete answers, I see my
    research as a starting point. The information I found can help build a case study that could be generalized for the
    hearing impaired population. It could also compete with studies that have already been done and lead
    researchers to search for more answers.
   I feel that the personal interest I have in this study gives it tremendous strength. The personalization of my study
    may inspire educators, scientists, or anyone interested in this topic to see the subject from a different perspective.
    However, at the same time, some may view my personal investment in this study as a biased perspective and I
    would have to agree. Since I am the researcher of the study in addition to the subject being researched, it
    presents some conflict. Although I have tried to remain as objective as possible throughout the entire study, it is
    possible that I may have allowed my personal bias to slip in.
   Another weakness of my study is the fact that I may not have used enough samples. I only used three samples to
    represent an entire academic year. Three pieces of writing cannot form an adequate representation of each
    school year. However, I think it is important I u sed writing samples from different classes to give a more balanced
    representation of each academic school year.
   Furthermore, we must take into account the circumstances, besides hearing impairment, that may have
    influenced my writing. These include factors such as the teacher and the class the piece of writing was for, the
    things I was going through at the specific time in my life, how much time I spent on the writing sample, the type
    and purpose of the paper, and so on. There are an overwhelming number of factors that could be taken into
    consideration; consequently, all of my results must be taken with caution.
   Last but not least, I feel confident about my choice of research methods; I think it was the most appropriate way to
    go about my research. For example, I read through each sample three times, each time focusing on different
    criteria. I felt this was the best way to go about it since, if I had only read each sample once, I would have
    overwhelmed myself trying to look for all of my criteria in one reading. Reading for everything at once would have
    led me to miss important findings. However, since I broke the criteria into separate parts, it enabled me to be
    more focused on the specific areas I was looking at; as a result, it allowed for a more accurate read of the
    individual sample.

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Organizing the final research article0 1

  • 1. Organizing The Final Research Article Using the IMRD Method
  • 2. Organizing Introduction Overview Lit review Lead into your argument with niche/research Questions Methodology Results Discussion (conclusion)
  • 3. You are NOT required to use the IMRD method, but many of the following “moves” may still need to be present in your paper in some form.
  • 4. Brandt, “Sponsors of Literacy”  (Introduction)  Overview/RQ  Lit review  Argument  Sponsorship  Sponsorship and Access  Raymond and Dora  Sponsorship and the Rise in Literacy Standards  Dwayne  Sponsorship and Appropriation in Literacy Learning  Carol and Sarah  Teaching and the Dynamics of Scholarship
  • 5. Sung, Yongjun, and Heidi J. Hennink-Kaminksi. “The Master Settlement Agreement and Visual Imagery of Cigarette Advertising in Two Popular Youth Magazines.” Journalism and Mass Communications Quarterly 85.2 (2008) 331- 52. Communications and Mass Media Complete. Web. 25 Mar. 2012.  Introduction  Overview  Literature Review The MSA and Magazine Advertizing (Background) Prior Research on Exposure and Expenditure Levels (Studies) Social Learning Theory and Visual Imagery (Theoretical Frameworks) Prior Research on Visual Imagery in Magazine Advertising (Studies) • Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall Theme/Appeal  Summary of Previous Research, Niche and Research Questions  Methods: Sample Selection, Coding Categories, Coding Procedures  Results: Sample, Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall Theme/Appeal  Discussion: Sample, Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Overall Theme Appeal
  • 6. Introduction: Background, Niche, Claiming Centrality, Theoretical Lens, Lit Review (333)
  • 8. Ending the Lit Review: What’s known? What’s Not Known?
  • 11. Results: Sample Characteristics, Physical Characteris, Human Models, Theme/Appeals
  • 13. Discussion: Samples, Physical Characteristics, Human Models, Themes/Appeals
  • 16. What about you? Draft your outline.  Introduction  Overview/gaps  Lit review: subject headings  Description of research  Methods  Decide what methods you will need to discuss, and in what order.  Results/Discussion/Findings  Decide what sub-headings you will need to cover here. Headings can be as short as a word or phrase, and as long as a sentence.  Will you have separate results and discussion sections, or put it all together?  Conclusion  Can be part of your discussion section
  • 17. Drafting methodology What data you collected How you collected it Who, Where, What you collected it from How you analyzed it Shortcomings/limitations
  • 18. Organizing your methodology All data together  Organized by types of data  What data you  Surveys collected Types of questions, who  How you collected took them, #, how you analyzed  Who you collected it  Interviews from Who you interviewed,  How you analyzed how long, what did you ask them about, how you analyzed  Observations What, how long, how analyzed, etc.
  • 19. Drafting methodology What data you collected, from whom, how (why) Example:  For my experiment, I have nine writing samples, three each from my junior and senior years in high school and three from my freshman year in college. I chose the three samples “Argument Essay,” “Chapter 1 Reaction Paper,” and “Free Response Essay” because of the limited amount of choices I had from my junior year in high school. For my senior year in high school, I selected “It’s Easy Being Green,” “ELP #1,” and “Final Exam Essay” because I wanted variety in the types and purposes of the samples. Furthermore, I thought it was important to select papers from different classes. As for my first year in college, I decided on “Paper 4,” “School Uniforms,” and “Research Plan” because they, too, represent a variety of papers. For more information on the writing samples I chose, see Table 1 below.
  • 20. Drafting methodology: analyzing data  After collecting and organizing the data for the samples and creating a chart in which to log my findings, I began analyzing the samples by the following criteria: punctuation errors, repetitive words, word choice, sentence structure, and fully developed ideas. The process for each analysis was repeated throughout.  First, I read through the sample one time and only noted confusing areas or parts that I thought could be developed more. I also observed if the argument of the paper was backed up with evidence and if the argument was weak or strong. This was pertinent for the category of fully developed ideas. It allowed me to look at the paper as a whole before I critiqued specific areas of the paper.  Next, I reread the paper, sentence by sentence, to find any kind of punctuation errors. It was very important for me to go sentence by sentence because it allowed me focus on the information on a smaller level. If I had not done this, I would have merely viewed the sentences grouped together in paragraphs which, in turn, would have made me focus on understanding what the paragraph itself was saying, rather than the mechanics of each individual sentence.  Subsequently, I began to read the paper through again, this time looking at word choice, repetitive words, and sentence structure. As I read it, I noted any words I felt that I had seen too many times. I counted the number of times each word was overused with the help of Microsoft Word’s word find. I also made distinct remarks on the sentence structure throughout the sample. The areas of sentence structure I focused on were length (findings of fragments or run-ons), syntax variety, and word positioning in sentences. Finally, but importantly, I commented on the paper’s word choice. The Flesch Reading Grade Level assessment on Microsoft Word helped me determine the sophistication and complexity of the words used in the writing samples. For each paper, I highlighted a few areas throughout the paper and took note of the Flesch Reading Grade Level stated. Also, as part of word choice, I examined word variety.  At the end of each group of samples (junior, senior, and college freshman), I made notes on what I thought any of it could possibly mean. In addition, I wrote my thoughts regarding each of the individual criteria for every group of samples. At the very end of all nine samples, I made some overall notes concerning my findings.
  • 21. Drafting methodology: limitations  As a student, I want to believe that my method of analysis was the most efficient, but as a researcher, I know it is not. Like any study, mine has its weaknesses and strengths.  Despite the fact that my study provides specific and detailed insights into the writing of a hearing impaired person, it cannot be generalized for a broad population; this raises a problem. If my research does not help a general population, then what good is the information? Rather than provide these sorts of concrete answers, I see my research as a starting point. The information I found can help build a case study that could be generalized for the hearing impaired population. It could also compete with studies that have already been done and lead researchers to search for more answers.  I feel that the personal interest I have in this study gives it tremendous strength. The personalization of my study may inspire educators, scientists, or anyone interested in this topic to see the subject from a different perspective. However, at the same time, some may view my personal investment in this study as a biased perspective and I would have to agree. Since I am the researcher of the study in addition to the subject being researched, it presents some conflict. Although I have tried to remain as objective as possible throughout the entire study, it is possible that I may have allowed my personal bias to slip in.  Another weakness of my study is the fact that I may not have used enough samples. I only used three samples to represent an entire academic year. Three pieces of writing cannot form an adequate representation of each school year. However, I think it is important I u sed writing samples from different classes to give a more balanced representation of each academic school year.  Furthermore, we must take into account the circumstances, besides hearing impairment, that may have influenced my writing. These include factors such as the teacher and the class the piece of writing was for, the things I was going through at the specific time in my life, how much time I spent on the writing sample, the type and purpose of the paper, and so on. There are an overwhelming number of factors that could be taken into consideration; consequently, all of my results must be taken with caution.  Last but not least, I feel confident about my choice of research methods; I think it was the most appropriate way to go about my research. For example, I read through each sample three times, each time focusing on different criteria. I felt this was the best way to go about it since, if I had only read each sample once, I would have overwhelmed myself trying to look for all of my criteria in one reading. Reading for everything at once would have led me to miss important findings. However, since I broke the criteria into separate parts, it enabled me to be more focused on the specific areas I was looking at; as a result, it allowed for a more accurate read of the individual sample.