13 August 2011 San Carlos Seminary, EDSA, Makati City JESSELYNN GARCIA DE LA CRUZ
“ Truly, there is no area of human experience, especially given the vast phenomenon of globalization, in which the media have not become an integral part of interpersonal relations and of social, economic, political and religious development.”  "The Media: At the Crossroads between Self-Promotion and Service.  Searching for the Truth in order to Share it with Others.“ Message for 40 th  World Communications Day 2008
 
* MUST HAVE because it is IMPORTANT
* SHOULD HAVE because it is EDUCATIONAL
* LIKE TO HAVE because it is ENTERTAINING & FUN
Inform   –  things he ought to know
Inform   –  things he ought to know Educate   –  things he ought to know
Inform   –  things he ought to know Educate   –  things he ought to know Inspire   –  things you ought to give
Inform   –  things he ought to know Educate   –  things he ought to know Inspire   –  things you ought to give Entertain   –  things that attract / hold interest
 
IMPACT PROMINENCE UNUSUAL/EXCEPTIONAL
TIMELINESS PROXIMITY CONFLICT SEX
PROGRESS HUMAN INTEREST BABIES, BEAUTIES, BEASTS
Timeliness Prominence Impact/ Consequence Proximity Oddity Conflict Sex Progress Human Interest Babies,   Beauties,   Beasts
 
WHO   –  the person in the news WHAT   –  the event / happening  WHEN   –  the time
WHERE   –  the place / venue WHY   –  the reason / cause HOW   –  the circumstances
 
(What you need to look out for) WHO  makes news WHAT  makes news WHY  is this news
 
(What you need to  do) HOW   do I makes this    news (story) WHEN   is this news story needed DEADLINE
 
Find Your Focus What is this  story about?
News is often about PEOPLE and  WHAT HAPPENS  to people.
Focus on the PERSON Who said/did what
PERSON NAME  if prominent IDENTIFYING LABEL
Focus on the EVENT What happened
STORY STRUCTURE THE HARD NEWS FORMULA
W HAT  is the story?   H OW  did it happen?  A MPLIFICATION .  Tell the story again, add points. T IE  up any loose ends.
W HAT  is the story?   H OW  did it happen?  A MPLIFICATION .  Tell the story again, add points. T IE  up any loose ends.
WHAT  is the story?   HOW  did it happen?  AMPLIFICATION .  Tell story again,  add points. TIE  up any  loose ends.
LEAD WHO  :  St. John Bosco Youth Organization WHAT  :  Youth Rally / Motorcade / Vigil WHEN  :  July 31, 2011 (Feast of St. John Bosco) WHERE:  Rally – church courtyard; Motorcade – church then around parish passing through various streets;  Vigil – Don Bosco Makati covered court WHY  :  Celebration of the Feast of the St. John Bosco; Send-off for parish youth delegates to World Youth Day in Spain; Rally for Life / Awareness Raising on RH Bill Issue HOW  :  Program schedule
SUMMARY LEAD Simple 5W-H The St. John Bosco Parish Youth Organization held a Youth Rally Motorcade-Vigil last July 31 to celebrate the Feast of  St. John Bosco, as a send-off ceremony for the parish youth delegates to the World Day of Youth in Spain and for awareness of the RH bill and pro-life issues.    The St. John Bosco Parish Youth Organization celebrated the feast of St. John Bosco with a Youth Rally-Motorcade-Vigil last July 31.
QUESTION  LEAD
QUOTATION  LEAD
ATMOSPHERE LEAD
CONTRAST LEAD
SHOCK LEAD
WHAT  is the story?   HOW  did it happen?  AMPLIFICATION .  Tell story again,  add points. TIE  up any  loose ends.
 
Today, communication seems increasingly to claim not simply to represent reality, but to determine it, owing to the power and the force of suggestion that it possesses. It is clear, for example, that in certain situations the media are used not for the proper purpose of disseminating information, but to “create” events.
To be responsible –  to be the protagonist of truth and promoter of the peace that ensues. "The Media: A Network for Communication,  Communion and Cooperation"  Message for 40 th  World Communications Day 2006
 
To  inform the consciences of individuals  and  help shape their thinking  is never a neutral task. Authentic communication demands principled  courage and resolve . It requires a  determination of those working in the media not to wilt under the weight of so much information nor even to be content with partial or provisional truths .
Instead it necessitates both seeking and transmitting what is the ultimate foundation and meaning of human, personal and social existence (cf.  Fides et Ratio , 5). In this way the media can  contribute constructively to the propagation of all that is good and true .
Search for the NEW  in the old. Search for the LASTING  in the fleeting.
Search for SIGNIFICANCE in the trivial. Search for RELEVANCE in the regular.
Search for  TRUTH . “ Contribute to making known the truth about humanity, and defending it against those who tend to deny or destroy it… seeking and presenting the truth about humanity constitutes the highest vocation of social communication.” -- Pope Benedict XVI
Accurate reporting of events, full explanation  of matters of public concern, and fair representation of diverse points of view must, then, always be fostered. The need to uphold and support marriage and family life is of particular importance, precisely because it pertains to the foundation of every culture  and society  (cf.  Apostolicam Actuositatem , 11). "The Media: A Network for Communication,  Communion and Cooperation"  Message for 40 th  World Communications Day 2006 POPE BENEDICT XVI
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    13 August 2011San Carlos Seminary, EDSA, Makati City JESSELYNN GARCIA DE LA CRUZ
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    “ Truly, thereis no area of human experience, especially given the vast phenomenon of globalization, in which the media have not become an integral part of interpersonal relations and of social, economic, political and religious development.” "The Media: At the Crossroads between Self-Promotion and Service. Searching for the Truth in order to Share it with Others.“ Message for 40 th World Communications Day 2008
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    * MUST HAVEbecause it is IMPORTANT
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    * SHOULD HAVEbecause it is EDUCATIONAL
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    * LIKE TOHAVE because it is ENTERTAINING & FUN
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    Inform – things he ought to know
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    Inform – things he ought to know Educate – things he ought to know
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    Inform – things he ought to know Educate – things he ought to know Inspire – things you ought to give
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    Inform – things he ought to know Educate – things he ought to know Inspire – things you ought to give Entertain – things that attract / hold interest
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    PROGRESS HUMAN INTERESTBABIES, BEAUTIES, BEASTS
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    Timeliness Prominence Impact/Consequence Proximity Oddity Conflict Sex Progress Human Interest Babies, Beauties, Beasts
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    WHO – the person in the news WHAT – the event / happening WHEN – the time
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    WHERE – the place / venue WHY – the reason / cause HOW – the circumstances
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    (What you needto look out for) WHO makes news WHAT makes news WHY is this news
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    (What you needto do) HOW do I makes this news (story) WHEN is this news story needed DEADLINE
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    Find Your FocusWhat is this story about?
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    News is oftenabout PEOPLE and WHAT HAPPENS to people.
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    Focus on thePERSON Who said/did what
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    PERSON NAME if prominent IDENTIFYING LABEL
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    Focus on theEVENT What happened
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    STORY STRUCTURE THEHARD NEWS FORMULA
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    W HAT is the story?   H OW did it happen? A MPLIFICATION . Tell the story again, add points. T IE up any loose ends.
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    W HAT is the story?   H OW did it happen? A MPLIFICATION . Tell the story again, add points. T IE up any loose ends.
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    WHAT isthe story?   HOW did it happen? AMPLIFICATION . Tell story again, add points. TIE up any loose ends.
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    LEAD WHO : St. John Bosco Youth Organization WHAT : Youth Rally / Motorcade / Vigil WHEN : July 31, 2011 (Feast of St. John Bosco) WHERE: Rally – church courtyard; Motorcade – church then around parish passing through various streets; Vigil – Don Bosco Makati covered court WHY : Celebration of the Feast of the St. John Bosco; Send-off for parish youth delegates to World Youth Day in Spain; Rally for Life / Awareness Raising on RH Bill Issue HOW : Program schedule
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    SUMMARY LEAD Simple5W-H The St. John Bosco Parish Youth Organization held a Youth Rally Motorcade-Vigil last July 31 to celebrate the Feast of St. John Bosco, as a send-off ceremony for the parish youth delegates to the World Day of Youth in Spain and for awareness of the RH bill and pro-life issues. The St. John Bosco Parish Youth Organization celebrated the feast of St. John Bosco with a Youth Rally-Motorcade-Vigil last July 31.
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    WHAT isthe story?   HOW did it happen? AMPLIFICATION . Tell story again, add points. TIE up any loose ends.
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    Today, communication seemsincreasingly to claim not simply to represent reality, but to determine it, owing to the power and the force of suggestion that it possesses. It is clear, for example, that in certain situations the media are used not for the proper purpose of disseminating information, but to “create” events.
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    To be responsible– to be the protagonist of truth and promoter of the peace that ensues. "The Media: A Network for Communication, Communion and Cooperation" Message for 40 th World Communications Day 2006
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    To informthe consciences of individuals and help shape their thinking is never a neutral task. Authentic communication demands principled courage and resolve . It requires a determination of those working in the media not to wilt under the weight of so much information nor even to be content with partial or provisional truths .
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    Instead it necessitatesboth seeking and transmitting what is the ultimate foundation and meaning of human, personal and social existence (cf. Fides et Ratio , 5). In this way the media can contribute constructively to the propagation of all that is good and true .
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    Search for theNEW in the old. Search for the LASTING in the fleeting.
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    Search for SIGNIFICANCEin the trivial. Search for RELEVANCE in the regular.
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    Search for TRUTH . “ Contribute to making known the truth about humanity, and defending it against those who tend to deny or destroy it… seeking and presenting the truth about humanity constitutes the highest vocation of social communication.” -- Pope Benedict XVI
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    Accurate reporting ofevents, full explanation of matters of public concern, and fair representation of diverse points of view must, then, always be fostered. The need to uphold and support marriage and family life is of particular importance, precisely because it pertains to the foundation of every culture and society (cf. Apostolicam Actuositatem , 11). "The Media: A Network for Communication, Communion and Cooperation" Message for 40 th World Communications Day 2006 POPE BENEDICT XVI
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