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Taking advice from my “hot-desking” feedback, I 
have decided to change the drop shadow on my 
‘Jade Lou’ layer on Photoshop from a bubbly red to 
a standard, clean cut black. After making these 
changes I have realised how much more 
professional and neat it looks. I still think the use of 
the drop shadow is effective because it adds 
dimension, however, I now realise that the pink was 
completely overwhelming and slightly childish 
looking. 
I have also realigned the text to ensure 
that it wasn’t squashed against the edge of 
the paper which I now think looks a lot 
better realigned than it did previously. 
For this part of my front cover, I have edited the ‘350’ text to make sure it 
was properly aligned with ‘page of pure music bliss’ text; as originally it 
didn’t sit properly. I had also jumbled too many typefaces up in order to 
create an effect which actually had looked a little too confusing. Taking this 
from my feedback, I changed all of the fronts to ‘Mangal’, except for the 
number which is in ‘Times New Roman’, because it brings organisation back 
to the front cover. I have also realigned it as well to keep that distance.
Not only have I realigned the text 
to make it look neater and to 
leave a gap between itself and 
the edge of the paper, I have 
dropped the text size down on 
‘upcoming collabs’ from 18 to 16 
so that it doesn’t look so 
overpowering. I think doing this 
has restored some order back to 
my front cover and has balanced 
out the size difference. I intended 
to use a bigger size font for this 
part of my magazine as I wanted 
it to stand out, but I think it looks 
much more effective being this 
size than it did being size 18 
which was far too big for the rest 
of the elements on my front 
cover. 
Similarly to what I have 
done with the text on 
the rest of my front 
cover, I have realigned 
the text on the left hand 
side to “Right alignment” 
so that the distance 
between the edge of the 
page and the text is a 
clear line. This makes it 
look much more 
organized and neat, as 
well as keeping the 
distance equal. I am 
really grateful that this 
criticism was given, as I 
don’t think it could look 
much better now.

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Hot desking changes

  • 1. Vs
  • 2. Taking advice from my “hot-desking” feedback, I have decided to change the drop shadow on my ‘Jade Lou’ layer on Photoshop from a bubbly red to a standard, clean cut black. After making these changes I have realised how much more professional and neat it looks. I still think the use of the drop shadow is effective because it adds dimension, however, I now realise that the pink was completely overwhelming and slightly childish looking. I have also realigned the text to ensure that it wasn’t squashed against the edge of the paper which I now think looks a lot better realigned than it did previously. For this part of my front cover, I have edited the ‘350’ text to make sure it was properly aligned with ‘page of pure music bliss’ text; as originally it didn’t sit properly. I had also jumbled too many typefaces up in order to create an effect which actually had looked a little too confusing. Taking this from my feedback, I changed all of the fronts to ‘Mangal’, except for the number which is in ‘Times New Roman’, because it brings organisation back to the front cover. I have also realigned it as well to keep that distance.
  • 3. Not only have I realigned the text to make it look neater and to leave a gap between itself and the edge of the paper, I have dropped the text size down on ‘upcoming collabs’ from 18 to 16 so that it doesn’t look so overpowering. I think doing this has restored some order back to my front cover and has balanced out the size difference. I intended to use a bigger size font for this part of my magazine as I wanted it to stand out, but I think it looks much more effective being this size than it did being size 18 which was far too big for the rest of the elements on my front cover. Similarly to what I have done with the text on the rest of my front cover, I have realigned the text on the left hand side to “Right alignment” so that the distance between the edge of the page and the text is a clear line. This makes it look much more organized and neat, as well as keeping the distance equal. I am really grateful that this criticism was given, as I don’t think it could look much better now.