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The document discusses edits made to a magazine front cover design based on feedback. Changes included replacing a bubbly red drop shadow with a cleaner black one, realigning text to be properly spaced from edges and each other, changing fonts for consistency, and reducing the size of one text element that was overwhelming. The edits improved the professionalism, organization, and balance of the design.
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Feedback alterations
The document discusses changes made to a magazine cover design based on feedback. The key changes include changing the drop shadow color on a layer from red to black for a cleaner look, realigning text to be properly spaced from edges, changing fonts for better organization, and dropping the font size on one text element for better balance. The document reflects on how these changes based on feedback have improved the professional and organized appearance of the magazine cover design.
Masthead font design main task
Joe Dolan is designing the masthead font for a magazine cover and is considering four options: Myriad Pro, Bebas, BankGothicLTBT, and XXL. Myriad Pro is tall and effective in all capitals like XXL, but may not be bold enough. Bebas is very bold like XXL but may be too stretched out. BankGothicLTBT could fill the space but is distorted and unlike XXL. Joe ultimately chooses Myriad Pro as it is clear, tall, and represents capitals effectively like XXL while filling the space at the top of the page.
Double Page Spread Breakdown
This double page spread from Q magazine features an article about artist Nicki Minaj. There is a nice balance between the large central image and blocks of text. The text is clearly laid out around the picture without looking overloaded. Key sections are highlighted in bold to draw the reader's attention. While there is a lot of text, the central image helps break it up and makes it less overwhelming to read. The simple monochrome color scheme allows the small bursts of color in the image to stand out dramatically. Overall the layout creates an appealing and readable design that reflects Minaj's bold style.
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دورہء جرمنی ١٢مئی تا ٢٤ مئی ١٩٩٩ء کے دوران منعقد ہونے والی مختلف مجالس سوال و...
٢مئی تا ٢٤ مئی ١٩٩٩ء کے دوران منعقد ہونے والی مختلف مجالس سوال و جواب کی مختصر جھلکیاں
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ایک سوال یہ کیا گیا کہ آرٹیفیشل انٹیلی جینس (مصنوعی ذہانت) کوکس حد تک کمپیوٹر میں منتقل کیا جا سکتاہے؟
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The interview, title, and stand first were imported from Word. The interview was changed to a 3-column format following the rule of thirds. The title size was increased to be the focal point.
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- Changing fonts based on feedback to improve readability.
- Adding and resizing graphics, puffs, and a pull quote to make the cover look more balanced, realistic and inviting.
- Continually tweaking positioning, sizing, colors and effects to refine the overall design.
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