2. Our groups initial thoughts
™ Clearly we haven't sorted out the sounds yet so this is something
we really need to work on- we need to find the perfect song and
time it to our clips and some extra sound effects.
™ There are some clips we have decided that we don’t want anymore
as they are pointless and don’t make much sense. This will also
shorten it down and make it more like a teaser trailer
™ Titles need adding and changing
™ We are very pleased with our progress so far, however a lot of
editing still needs to be done
4. GROUP 1
Is it clear that it is a teaser trailer and the teaser
conventions are met? And does the USP idea for the trailer
come across? Yes it does come across but it could be
clearer maybe add titles to make the storyline more
apparent.
5. GROUP 2
™ Is it clear that it is a teaser trailer and the teaser
conventions are met? And does the USP idea for the
trailer come across? Yes and yes, but it could be clearer.
6. GROUP 3
Is it clear that it is a teaser trailer and the teaser
conventions are met? And does the USP idea for the trailer
come across? Yes and yes
7. GROUP 4
™ Is it clear that it is a teaser trailer and the teaser
conventions are met? And does the USP idea for the
trailer come across? It followed the conventions very
well but the USP is’nt clear
12. GROUP 1
™ What in your view are the teasers main strengths?
Good pace and there is lots of varied shots, good framing
in areas.
13. GROUP 2
™ What in your view are the teasers main strengths?
Voice over on phone, sound at end is good, man flashing in and out is
good, home video is good, editing at beginning when it flashes
14. GROUP 3
™ What in your view are the teasers main strengths?
Good camera angles, sound works well with the pace,
different range of shots work well, the last shot is good
15. GROUP 4
™ What in your view are the teasers main strengths?
™ Shots and angles, costumes/props, jump cut in the
park, phone call voiceover, home videos bit, effects
16. GROUP 1
™ How do you think the teaser could be improved?
™ Some of the shots might not be necessary so could be
taken out, adding some titles and order the shots better
to make the the overall plot of the trailer make sense
17. GROUP 2
™ How do you think the teaser could be improved?
™ Cuts at the beginning make it very stop start and slow,
its quite confusing so we didn’t really understand the
idea, more sound is needed at the beginning
18. GROUP 3
™ How do you think the teaser could be improved?
™ Add an ident, the storyline is confusing at the start of
the trailer, change the contrast of lighting in some shots
19. GROUP 4
™ How do you think the teaser could be improved?
™ The shot where she is tied up could be made darker,
shot of the park could be darker, add an ident and add
titles and a release date
20. Analysis of results
™ Getting feedback from these groups from our target audience has
been extremely useful as it has helped us pick up changes that need to
be made that we had not yet considered. Finding out what they think
of it is very important to us as it is them that needs to like our film, as
it is for them!
™ Overall we have noted a lot of changes that need to be made to make
it appeal even more to our target market. We are going to arrange the
clips in a slightly different order as most of the groups agreed that the
storyline is’nt clear, and we may also delete some clips that arent
necessary. Some shots are going to be made darker in order for the
sinister feel to be put across. But most importantly, we are going to
change our music completely and find a song that matches our
rhythm and feel even better. We are also going to add in our ident that
we have made and all of our titles.
