The document describes revisions made to a mock magazine cover design. The designer removed some cover lines and graphic elements to reduce clutter. They then added gradients and changed fonts. The main cover line and picture were moved and replaced to look more professional. Additional elements like a barcode, price and date were included to complete the redesign.

1. My original mock up.

2. I decided to take out the second cover line on
the left hand side and extend the first one.

3. I then took out the graphic feature at the top right
hand corner and the cover line at the bottom right
hand corner as I felt it was too cluttered.

4. I gave the white background a gradient colour as
I felt it was too boring.

5. Then I changed a couple of fonts and moved
the main cover line and put a big one of just
“DARCY”.

6. I decided to change the picture as I didn’t think it
looked professional enough and added the green
box around “EXCLUSIVE INTERVIEW”.

7. I then added back in a barcode, price, date and
a cover line.

8. Lastly I added in the skyline at the bottom of
the page with a green box around it matching
the one around “EXCLUSIVE INTERVIEW”.